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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

It was a good part

Liked the way nk toook care of aks frnds
But saf safai wali ek and stubborn ek
ak fear is true..
both r on opp ends and its difficult to adjust on a whole basis..
waiting for next jaha both may get a clarity and be happy
Do update soon

thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally... ๐Ÿ˜Šjust loved ur comments i know lots of qu on ur mind.. 
but i will try to clear to all ur doubts. 
haa dey will try to adjust their life with hope for best shadi goona happen soon i will try my best ๐Ÿ˜Š
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va-ak tu kuch jayada hi worried ho rahi.. maybe ur anger nd jid. essa kyo hoga ki woh khush nhi hoga.. agar nhi hota toh tujhe shadi karne ke liye haa kyo bolta.. 
ak-mujhe nahi pata i m getting anger.. 
va-yahi problem hai teri essa mat karo.. thoda sa is rishte ko time do.. 
ak-time kam hai aur qu jayada. 
va-har shadi main hota hai logo ko salo lag jate hai search karne main par koi solution nhi milta.. try to understand nk.. 
sees that nk was just behind of ak.. 
ak-par kaise.. 
va-laugh... 
ak-tu meri feeling ka majak uda rahi hain. 
va-no turn karo.. 
ak-wat.. varsha turned to ak nd ak sees to nk.. nd was shocked.. 
aap.. 
nk-hii.. sry late ho gaya.. 
ak-koi bat nhi varsha was shocked.. 
nk-congrtss me.. 
ak-kyo.. 
nk-u r so lucky for me.. varsha passed smile.. 
ak-but how. 
nk-i got a new deal nd jo meeting pe i went woh deal toh hui par unhone meri reputation ko dekh future projects ki bhi bat ki.. 
ak-thats great i m soo happy for u opened her arms for hug.. lets hug to me.. nk made face nd was shocked.. 
va-ak.. 
ak-ooh sry she took back her hand.. 
nk-ho jata hai.. 
va-ak was worried aap aaye nhi the toh.. anger.. 
ak-varsha ho rahi thi maine kaha nk aa jayege. nk passed smile.. 
nk-how sweet.. ak gave request smile.. 
va-i guess aap dono thodi bat kar lo lunch karlo phir aana shopping karne.. nd went.. 
nk-par hum akle kya waha sab.. 
ak-its oki isi bahane kuch bat ho jayegi na.. coffee area main chale.. 
nk-oki.. actually thoda headache bhi ho rahi.. 
dey sat on table.. 
ak-aap mujhe apna lucky charm mante hai.. 
nk-smile pata nahi par haa jabse shadi tay hui hai sab khush hai mujhe deal mili tabhi kaha maine.. 
ak-bhut ajib hai na.. 
nk-kya moll aai nhi yaha.. 
ak-no baba.. shadi nd all.. even arrange marriage.. 
nk-ya.. so difficult.. 
ak-apne pehle kisi ladki se pyar kiya hai.. 
nk-he was numb.. wat u waana ask.. 
ak-sry par mujhe hak hai na apki pichli life ke bare main janne ka.. mostly yaha sabki love marriage hai pata nhi kuch doubt nhi honi chahiye.. 
nk-laugh agar same qu puchu than. aap toh morden hai free minded hai.. 
ak-mera arrow mujhpe hi.. thats fine.. 
here varsha reached near if gy3 nd rj.. 
rj-ak kaha hai.. 
gy-haa.. 
va-woh nk aaye hai na toh maine socha thodi der dono bat karle toh better hoga... arrange marriage hai uspar dono ke pass time bhi kam hai so.. 
bm-yeh toh aacha hai nk bhut sarmata hai.. thoda kul jayega. 
gy-laugh haa.. 
neqr of naksh. 
ak-fine ab main hi start karti hu ask.mera past actually main free bird hu suru se.. boys se dosti bhi hai.. sees to nk.. 
nk-gud.. 
ak-thank god aap waise nhi ki boy se dur rehna nd all.. mere frds mere frds hai unke sath masti kari nd family trip clg trip gai ek ladke ne mujhe propose kiya tha.. 
nk-made face.. wat.. so? 
ak-main apna past nhi chupaugi apse.. actually maine except bhi kari thi nd we were so close also.. 
nk-now dont know but from dept of heart he didnt like it.. soo y u left? apni family se bat.. 
ak-kaise karti.. 
nk-y.. 
ak-apko jalan ho rahi kya.. 
nk-actually it was visible on his face lill.. chidchid... wats d matter tell i m not getting anything.. agar aaj bhi apko woh oasand hai than mujhe bataiye i promise main mana kar dunga for wedding.. 
ak was slient lill.. 
ak-woh.. 
nk-watt apki chupi kya samjhu main..main janta hu hum different hai but essa hoga toh aap kujhe except nhi kar payegi.. ak admire to nk. 
ak-itni care hai meri.. par woh ladka jab 6 years ka tha nd mai second class main thi.. nd starts laughing.. mujhe kuch pata hi nhi tha... 
nk-shocked oo god itna majak.. 
ak-laugh. actually i was kidding mujhe pyar vyar nhi hua second class main us boy ne mujhe bola i love u kyoki usne tv main dekha tha.. maine usse jor ka punch mara.. nd start laughing.. main test kar rahi thi.. 
nk-watt main dar gya tha u dont know essa majak wats d need.. 
ak-main apko haste hue dekhna chahti thi socha tensed karke apko hasa dungi itna bhi bad joke nhi tha ek chotu si smile toh kar sakte hai.. laugh.. 
nk-oo god this gurls.. starts laughing.. ak sees his smile.. 
ak-aachi hai.. 
nk-kya.. 
ak-apki smile has sakte hai serious nhi rehna chahiye.. 
nk-i was happy really jab deal hui than.. tqq mujhe kulke hasane ke liye.. 
than watier came.. 
wa-aap log kya lenge sir maam.. 
ak-capechino.. 
nk-tulsi ginger tea.. naksh sees to each.. 
ak-really. itna difference.. 
wa-aur kuch sir.. 
nk-ak.. 
ak-no.. 
nk-bas.. he went.. mujhe coffee se bhut chid aati hai.. aap tea leti hai? 
ak-milk wali nhi green tea nd lamon tea.. 
nk-watt.. hamari choice bhut alg alg hai na. 
a-hmm toh ab apki bari.. 
nk-watt.. 
ak-past means aap kisi girl se i mean aap samaj gye na.. 
nk-laugh my studies boys school main nd clg bhi same in London.. 
mujhe pata nhi girls ko kya pasand hota hai kya nhi. aur shadi uske bare main socha bhi nhi kahbhi.. maine studies complete karke business join kiya aur dekhnte hi dekhte aage badne laga.. shadi ke bare main sochna jaise dur sa dream sa tha like socha nhi subah uthna pooja krna laptop movies woh bhi god wali ya desh wali.. mujhe nhi pata life main kya hita hai.. but mera focus kam karna hai.. girl ko hasate kaise hai i dont know.. 
ak-kya.. aap yeh life g rahe r u enjoying.. 
nk-haa jaise apko party karna aacha lagta hai waise mujhe business kam apne aap sab hasil karna hai.. 
ak-bhut kuch sikhana padega apko toh.. i guess mujhe apko bhut samjhana padega. 
nk-ghar wale ek bahu chahte hai aur meri life main koi care karne wali.. aur life kaise jite hai kya hota hai i dont know.. 
ak-i will try aap sikhege.. 
nk-aap mujhse connect kar sakti hai na mai apko kabhi bhi yeh nhi kahuga ki aap yeh badlo woh badlo hum dono jaise hai ek dusare ko except karege badlene ke liye life main difference aate hai chidchid.. mera toh laptop bhi koi idar se udar kare toh i dont like.. 
ak-yeh sachi ki badalna nhi chahiye par connect karne ka moka maybe.. 
nk-mujhe nhi pata wat is wedding.. i dont know.. adjustment toh har jagah lagti hai na.. school clg ghar pe koi aaye ya hum kahi jaye.. 
ak-haa toh future ka hum discuss na karke i think jo hoga usko dekhe toh best hoga yeh kehna chahte hai aap. 
nk admire to ak that she understand his talk.. 
nk-mujhe laga maa meri bat samjhati hai but aacha laga.. 
ak-kya.. 
nk-sayad isi liye maa ne apko choose kiya hamare pariwar ke liye.. 
ak-aur aapke suddenly waiter came.. 
wa-sir apka order.. 
nk-tqq.. aap kuch keh rahi thi. 
ak-nothing... khafi bat ho gai. dey were taking tea nd coffee.. 
nk-i think der ho rahi family walo ke pass.. 
ak-hmm chaliye.. dey start walking.. sayad upar floor main hai.. 
nk-stairs se chalte hai.. 
ak-hmm.. ak was watching to nk.. he was also seeing all over but lill sees to ak.. 
dey passed smile.. 
ak-kaisa ajib sa lag raha pata hai nk aacha bhi h par dar bhi lag raha ki kaisa hoga main sachi kr rahi hu ya nhi i dont know.. thinking.. 
nk-samjhadar toh hai but lottss of qu.. bas mera kam aur usse samaj le woh... 
ak-ek patni romance aur pyar chahti hai maybe nk ka second side bhi aacha ho.. sayad woh sarmila hai man main aachai toh hai aur se alg.. 
nk-thodi si alg hai par shadi ke bad change hota toh hai main toh jo hu waisa hu hi par ak uska kal badlega aur sab thik ho jayega.. aachi toh hai.. 
dey sees to their family.. dey were talking with each on think.. 
ak-mom.. 
nk-chalte hai dey went near of their family.. 
more part coming soon
Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
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#33
ak nk came der... bm rj all sees to them.. 
bm-bat ho gai nk... 
rj-are tu aa gai aa hum jewelry pasand kar rahe.. 
bm-haa 4 set pasand kiye hai jo 2 tumhe pasand hai usse bata nk.. 
gy-haa ak tum bhi choose karo.. 
nk-yeh sab mujhe kya pata aap ak se puch lijiye na. 
rj-bataiye na aap bhi ak tu bhi choose kar le beta.. naksh took their seat nd choose different set.. 
both sees to each nd everyone were numb.. 
bm-haa yeh toh dono ki pasand alg hain.. 
nk choose traditional nd ak choose classy set.. 
va-hum ek kam karte hai do set toh leni hi hai dono ko le lete hai.. ak tu yaha aa na mere liye bhi lele.. 
kya hua ak tu upset hai. 
ak-thodi varsha nk nd meri choice kitni alg hai woh set mujhe bilkul pasand nhi sayad main khabhi pehen nhi paugi.. 
va-par us time mana kar dete toh nk g ko kitna bura lagta.. 
ak-par jo chiz main pehen nhi sakti hu usse kaise le lu.. 
va-toh tu kya karegi.. 
ak-main nk se kahugi us chiz ko idar udar dalne se aacha keh dena best hai.. 
va-wat about emotions nd hurt.. 
ak-apni bat rakhna hurt karna kaise ho sakta hain. than rj called to ak.. 
ak-aai.. nk was also der.. 
gy-dekho munna ke liye dress le rahe tum batao apni choice... 
ak-haa ak went near of nk.. 
nk-no red colour i dont like.. 
ak-dikhaiye na bhaiya nk g mujhe red colour bhut pasand hai.. 
nk-watt mujhe toh bilkul pasand nhi.. 
ak-ek bat kahu agar apko red colour ki serwani du toh aap pehnege.. 
nk-never.. 
ak-toh main kehna chahugi ki jo jewelry apne like kari woh bhut sundar hai par usse pehnne ke liye sayad main comfortable mehsus na karu.. 
mujhe laga apne man ki bat bol deni chahiye.. choti choti chiz bhut mayne rakhti h main chahti thi ki aap jane ki mai bade nhi chote set pehenati hu.. 
yeh visvas hi rishte ka aadhar hota hai.. 
nk starts laughing.. 
nk-apne mujhe nhi pehchana.. jab apka chota set ka taste dekha i understood ki aap woh big set nhi legi so maine cancel kar diya tha.. 
ak-kya she was lill shocked.. i m sry.. 
nk-for wat aap keh sakti hai jo man main hai sabko life jina hai apne tarike se hai na.. than mohit nanu came.. 
mo-ohoo kya le raha.. sangit dress.. 
na-are waah ab hum matching dress lenge dono ki.. 
ak-abhi toh dekh rahe.. 
mo-ohoo ek dusare ko ya phir dress ko.. 
nk-dress ko mera itna kimati time hai yeh.. 
mo-wahi toh nk ka time god ke time ke barabar hai bhabhi g... nd laugh.. ak too..are bhabhi aap batao nk ko kis dress main dekhna hai.. 
ak-i think indo western.. 
nk-watt.. 
ak-aacha lagta hai na.. 
mo-but nk ko toh serwani pasand hai.. 
ak-kya serwani.. 
na-nk indo western pehnega hai na.. 
nk-par.. 
ak-koi bat nahi agar inko pasand nhi toh koi bat nahi.. 
nk-sees aks sad face.. agar essa hi hai toh indo western sangit main pehen lunga aur serwani shadi main. ak got so much happiness.. 
mo-ohoo really yr shadi ka asar ho raha.. 
nk-aacha jab choice hai sab sangit nd shadi nd all ki toh business jaise new new try karna chahiye na.. ak admire to nk.. 
gy-are bahu ak beta dekh hamne tere liye one piece dekhe hai two colour main hai pitch nd cream colour main... tu bata nk kon sa best hai.. 
nk-main.. i think sees to ak... pitch colour.. 
gy-are waah ak tumhe pasand hai kya yeh colour.. 
ak sees to nk.. 
ak-i will wear... pasand hai.. 
na-chalo kahi pe toh dono ki pasand mili... it is best.. nk ek bar aao na.. he went.. 
va-ak tu really main woh dress pehnegi tujhe light color jayada pasand hai na.. 
ak-haa par ek bat yeh bhi hai na ki nk ne meri pasand ki dress choose ki toh maine bhi haa keh diya try karti hu sayad aacha lage.. 
va-waw acha hai dono kuch new try karoge warna dono ki jid.. 
ak-nk thoda sa mujhe samjhane lage hai ab.. unhone woh jewelery nhi karidi.. 
va-waww bas bas haa samal ke shadi se pehle sab aacha lgta hai par bad main problem ho sakti hai.. 
ak-hamne decide kiya hai ki hum jo hoga sikhte chale jayege.. 
than nk nd nanu came nd kids also.. 
misti-chachu cahchu.. 
nk-kya hai.. 
ya-mama aap hamare sath game zone main chalo hame kelna hai.. aur mami bhi jayegi.. 
na-haa nk ak jao future main bache ki practice toh karni hi hai. 
mo-haa yeh nk ka bas chalega toh usse bhi business kara dega bechara.. 
both blushed.. 
v-kyo aap log bhi tease kar rahe.. go ak.. 
ak-aap sab yeh kya keh rahe.. pehle ek dusare ko janna important hai phir na.. 
nk-kids chalo. 
mi-apko saram aa rahi chachu.. 
nk-sshh took to her in his arm.. chalo meri maa.. 
mi-maa nhi misthi hu.. 
nk-ohoo.. dey leave.. 
mo-kitna sarmata hai yeh sweet heart.. 
na-kya aap bhi mera pyara bhai.. dey went in game zone area. 
mi-main woh kelugi.. 
ya-main bhi video play karuga dey start playing.. 
nk-samal ke.. yeh log esse hi karte hai mujhe pakad lete hai.. 
a-aacha hai na bacho ke sath bacha banna.. 
nk-watt hum big hai hamara kam unhe guide karna hai bas.. 
ak-but i loved video games.. 
ya-main har raha meri help karo na.. 
nk-mujhe nhi aata yeh games nd all.. 
ak-main help karti hu.. ak start playing video game with yash.. yuhuuu.. nk start watching to ak.. 
nk-isme kya maja aa raha.. 
ak-yaieee.. kissed to yash.. 
ya-hehe.. tqq mami u r best.. 
ak-yipee i m d besttt.. 
ki-chachi help karo na mujhe bhi.. 
ak-aai baba... she helped her nd dey started jumping.. 
nk-passed smile jaise meri family ke log waise hi unhone bahu koji hai.. 
ak-yaieee.. gave hand for tumbsup
nk-wat.. 
ak-high figh.. 
nk-wat.. 
ak-uff... she took back her hand.. jab main khush hoti hu na toh nachti hu gati hu waww table game kabse try kar rahi par sikh nhi pai.. 
nk-laugh.. 
ak-kya hua.. 
mi-chachu toh best player hai.. 
nk-sshh.. 
a-really i wana try plz..
nk-par..
ak-plz..
nk-oki aaiye.. dey stick ko pakadiye.. ak took stick.. ab ek boll ko dekhiye aur stick se usko us holl main daliye bas.. 
ak-difficult one.. 
nk-uff nk went behind of ak nd touched her hand.. ak skipped to stick.. 
ak-woh.. 
nk-kya hua aap uncomfortable hai.. 
ak-woh batiye.. ak touched to stick nk also their hand touching with each.. 
nk-bas thoda sa niche aaiye.. nk was like hugging position ak was in front nd her heart was skipped so fastly.. she dont know wat to do.. 
ak-nk.. nk sees that she was lill uncomfortable.. 
nk-sry apko bura laga kya.. he skipped to ak... 
ak-woh pata nhi bad main sikha dena chale bache.. 
nk-i didnt mean it i m sry.. 
ak-ghar chale.  chalte hain.. 
nk-hmm.. sayad usse aacha nhi laga maine usse but it was by chance.. 
ak-oo god esse anjan logo ka touch pata nhi kya tha yeh kya hoga mera ek month khafi hai kisi ko samjhana... thinking... 
preacp-nk went out of town for one week... 

Edited by nakshkidiwani - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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once again lovely lovely part.. ye part read karke aisa laga ki tu modi ji k safai abhiyan ka prachar kr rhi h ๐Ÿ˜† like naksh meeting and their lunch with each other.. phone convo scene is also nice and uske bad sabka nk ko tease krna ๐Ÿ˜† every scene is beautiful.. ak waiting for nk and he didn't came she was in dilemma.. waiting to see how their story unfolds ๐Ÿ˜Šdo wrote next part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

once again lovely lovely part.. ye part read karke aisa laga ki tu modi ji k safai abhiyan ka prachar kr rhi h ๐Ÿ˜† like naksh meeting and their lunch with each other.. phone convo scene is also nice and uske bad sabka nk ko tease krna ๐Ÿ˜† every scene is beautiful.. ak waiting for nk and he didn't came she was in dilemma.. waiting to see how their story unfolds ๐Ÿ˜Šdo wrote next part soon

aww i m soo happy that u r connecting with my ff soo much gud feeling yr.. 
i never thought ki is tipe ka kuch likhu thoda ups down aayegi but haa main apna best karugi.. aww nice laga.. i updated next part read nd tell๐Ÿ˜‰
modi g ko nhi dikhaugi ab ๐Ÿ˜†
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Originally posted by: nakshkidiwani


aww i m soo happy that u r connecting with my ff soo much gud feeling yr..
i never thought ki is tipe ka kuch likhu thoda ups down aayegi but haa main apna best karugi.. aww nice laga.. i updated next part read nd tell๐Ÿ˜‰
modi g ko nhi dikhaugi ab๐Ÿ˜†

m also happy that u liked my comments.. modi ji ko aur dikha bhi di to no problem isi bahane thodi samaj sewa bhi ho jayegi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ
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Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

m also happy that u liked my comments.. modi ji ko aur dikha bhi di to no problem isi bahane thodi samaj sewa bhi ho jayegi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿคฃ

ek comment ki kimat tum kya jano๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰.. 
samaj sewa toh esse bhi kar rahi hu na main.. 
par tune kitna sikha ๐Ÿคฃkitchen main cup rakha kya๐Ÿ˜†
 
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It was a good part...
actually to comment more i have no words
since its clear both are different in their choices
it takes time to build their bond 
with growing parts we have more to express
this part loved ak chulbuli nature
her way of expressing story to nk and nk expressions hahahah
nk and ak trying to adjust for each other
as said staying together with oppsite ends is difficult
As of now shopping is done and now waiting for aage
do update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: _nakshi_

It was a good part...

actually to comment more i have no words
since its clear both are different in their choices
it takes time to build their bond 
with growing parts we have more to express
this part loved ak chulbuli nature
her way of expressing story to nk and nk expressions hahahah
nk and ak trying to adjust for each other
as said staying together with oppsite ends is difficult
As of now shopping is done and now waiting for aage
do update soon

aww m just like this part soo much yr.. 
aww u waana say much more aww.. it is like really a gud feeling.. thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally.. 
yes aks fear is true i waana show ki different sade ki feeling kaisi hoti hai.. 
u r ryt it is vry early to say anything swlly swlly main try karugi justify karne ki story.. aur jo i waana show woh tumhe pasand aaye prinyu bas ๐Ÿ˜‰i will try to update next part soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ