Me and u part - 39 updated (11th march ) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for the update
So realistic...👍🏼
Now, how will uma convince kanak family
Update soon dear
Edited by Bhaana - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: savithp



Gud please continue.

Hai savithip.
Thank u so much for reading and commenting.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Now this is what would have happened in the real world not what kanak did by sticking around to steal the papers! Well done! So what's next jail time and arrest by Ved for Uma?

Hai iceblue 
Thank u so much for the comments. 
Edited by Geethanatarajan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Bhaana

Thanks for the update
So realistic...👍🏼
Now, how will uma convince kanak family
Update soon dear

Hai bhaana.
Thank u for reading and commentings.

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Posted: 6 years ago
Awesome update
Waiting for next update
Plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: uroos

Awesome update

Waiting for next update
Plz update soon

Hai uroos,
Thank u for reading and commenting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks for writing the realistic story! Our forum is full of amazing writers...!
I have read your other ff too...sorry couldn't comment on that but that's also very good..update soon geetha 😃
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: _Asfii_

Thanks for writing the realistic story! Our forum is full of amazing writers...!
I have read your other ff too...sorry couldn't comment on that but that's also very good..update soon geetha 😃

Hai asfii.
Thank u so much for reading and commenting.
Soon i will update the next part.
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Posted: 6 years ago
Part- 3

Vansh, ved and bhabho reaches uma's house, vansh furiously gets out the car. Ved and bhabho follows him. Uma and maasisa standing near the shivji's idol. 
Vansh enters the house. He shouts..
Vansh: who is uma shankar?
Uma and maasisa turns after hearing vansh's calling.
Vansh shouted again, i asked who is uma shankar here. 
Ved and bhabho stops him.
Uma comes forwards, yes i am uma shankar.
Vansh burst in anger. He runs towards him, ved holds him, 
Vansh: how dare you!
Uma was shocked to see his reaction. Maasisa was also shocked.
Bhabho comes to uma, i am santosh rathi from pushkar. 
Uma greets her. Vansh stares at uma, ved holds him.
Vansh interrupts and ask how can you do this.
Uma was in confuse state, and looks at bhabho. 
Bhabho: u r uma shankar, right.
Uma nods his head. 
Bhabho : this morning, u got married?
Uma: yes!
Bhabho: the girl, u married forcefully was my granddaughter.
Uma and maasisa was shocked, uma tries to get blessing from bhabho, but bhabho stops him.
Uma steps back, vansh and ved stares at him.
Maasisa comes near to bhabho and joins her hand.
Maasisa: i am nanda, uma's maasisa.
Bhabho joins her hand. 
Maasisa: pls come inside. We can sit and talk.
Vansh break the conversation, in furious tone he says no need for that.
Bhabho stops him, and signals them. bhabho into the house, uma helps bhabho to sit on the sofa. Ved and vansh also sit along with her. Suman brings water to them,  but they refused to drink that, uma and maasisa sits opposite to bhabho, uma starts his conversation. 
Uma: please accept my apology, that i married ur granddaughter without ur permission. 
Uma join his hands, vansh stands in furious, ved controls him.
Vikram and babasa enters inside into the house, and bhabho signals them.
Maasisa: marriage was already done, so we have to think about the next process.
Bhabho and everybody were stunned by maasisa words.


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Posted: 6 years ago
Not fair Geetha! You are driving me crazy waiting for the next part ! Really excited! Can't wait!