PreeRan - The Mysterious Aftermath PART 4 updated - Page 1!!

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Posted: 6 years ago
Part 4 (below)

Part 1 (pg 1), 2 (pg 2), 3 (pg 3) in this post:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4904175

Karan and Preeta share a laughter on Preeta mentioning that she beat him in cricket despite him being a start cricketer. They finish eating and Preeta takes the plates back and the woodsman's wife tells her not to move much as she has hurt her leg too. She says she will make a herb paste for all their injuries, they will help fight off infection at least till the hospital people come. Preeta tells her to not worry, but she insists. So Preeta decides to sit and help her. Karan keeps looking at Preeta as soft background music plays. He thinks how he used to hate her so much before and he simply didn't realize when he started to like the sweet person she really is. He thinks she really is different from all other girls out there, she never took advantage of his star status. He wonders if she still thinks of him as a bad boy.

Preeta helps pluck herbs to make the ointment and glances at Karan. She notices Karan looking at her and she smiles.

Preeta: Kuch chahiye?

Karan nods.

Preeta: Are you okay?

Karan nods one more time. Preeta smiles and carries on.

The woodsman's wife finishes grinding the herbs to a fine paste and puts some on Preeta's arm. She lets out a faint shriek as the sharp zingy effect of the ointment touches her wound. Preeta then tells her she will put it on Karan, but it won't be easy. She remembers the time when she went to put lep on his head and he overreacted. She smiles and she goes and sits down next to him.

Karan: Tum kyu has rahi ho? Aur yeh kya hai?

Preeta: Yeh... yeh ek aur lep hai...

Karan: Yaar tum har bar aise poisonous lep vep jaise cheezein lekar aa jati ho...

Preeta: Arre, yeh poisonous nahi, bilkul shuddh jadibuti wala freshly made ointment hai...

Karan: Ha, mujhe sunayi diya jab tumne lagaya... Kitna jala hoga na? Mujhe nahi lagana, hatao ise...

Preeta: Karan, bas thodi der ke liye?

Karan: No!

Karan turns his face away and Preeta puts the bowl down and holds his face so that she can look at him while she speaks.

Preeta: Do you trust me?

Karan: No!

Preeta gets sad and let's go of his face.

Karan: Arre, mazaak kar raha hu yaa... Of course I trust you!

Preeta smiles and picks up the bowl.

Preeta: Toh fir aakkhen band karo, aur mujhe batao ki... ki... What is the first thing you see?

Karan closes his eyes and Preeta blows on his head wound and applies the paste. Karan sees the car plummeting and holding onto Preeta's hand. He shouts out loud.

Karan: Preeta...

Preeta puts down the bowl at once and gently whispers in his ear.

Preeta: Karan, I'm here, aakhen kholo...

Karan opens his eyes and gets angry.

Karan: Arre tum kaisi ajeeb ajeeb cheezein karne ko kehti ho...

Preeta: Lekin dekho, ointment bhi lag gaya, aur tumhe dard bhi nahi hua...

Karan: Aur itna bada heart attack phir se ho gaya uska kya?

Preeta: Uske liye I'm sorry!

Karan: Ha, its okay...

Karan wonders why Preeta has become so nice all of a sudden and doesn't argue with him anymore. He wonders if she has started liking him, but then brushes off that feeling thinking he's made that mistake before and won't make it again. Preeta can never like someone like him as she would like someone like his brother Rishab. He gets sad but he doesn't know why.

Preeta meanwhile thanks the woodsman's wife for their kind hospitality and for being so wonderful to them. She promises she will come back to visit her one day, and today she may not have anything to give her, but she that she could bring her anything she needed from the city.

Preeta then starts to wander around anxiously, thinking when the ambulance will arrive.

Karan: Tum yaha aakar baith jao, tumhare sochne se ambulance jaldi nahi aa jayegi.

Preeta wonders how Karan knew that she was thinking about the ambulance.

Preeta: Tumhe kaise pata...

Karan: Mujhe sab kuch pata hai, tum kab manogi! Waise hi jaise maine kaha tha ki you're crazy after me.

Preeta: Main... nahi to...

Preeta turns away from him and starts to fidget with her fingers.

Karan: Arre, tum achanak dar kyu gayi, jaise koi chori pakdi gayi ho?

Preeta: Chori?

Karan: It was a joke ya.

Preeta thanks God it was only a joke, she thinks she must be careful and not let her confused feelings for Karan come in the way of exposing Sherlyn, as it will now be even more difficult to get proof against her. Knowing how dangerous she is, the way she left them to die, she can do anything, and they must be one step ahead to notify Rishab about the impending danger.

Karan: Hello? Kahan kho gayi Miss Mental?

Preeta: Woh kuch nahi, tum zyada mat socho...

Karan: Kya? Main soch rah ahu ki tum?

Preeta: Achcha theek hai, main bhi nahi sochungi, happy?

Karan: Tum na sach main pagal ho, kabhi kuch kehti ho, kabhi kuch aur.

The nurses soon arrive from a hospital nearby, with a stretcher, accompanied by a doctor. They say it took longer than they anticipated as they couldn't find the right house in the wooded area. Preeta instructs them to take Karan on the stretcher and that she will walk with them to the ambulance parked few meters away. She expresses her gratitude to the woodsman's wife and leaves. Preeta carries on walking next to Karan's stretcher making sure he is okay.

Karan: Are you okay? Can you walk?

Preeta: Main theek hu, are you okay?

Karan: Ya, I'm ok.

They soon reach the ambulance and the doctor says Karan will be fine and recover soon. He checks for his vitals and inspects his body and says some of the fractures might need surgery, but that they will only know for certain once they get x-rays done in the hospital. Karan then asks him to have a look at Preeta's arm. The doctor says there is nothing to worry about as her arm wound will heal in a few weeks. However, her leg wound is starting to shows signs of serious inflammation due to infection and that it will need proper treatment once they arrive at the hospital. Karan asks him to tend to her leg but Preeta insists he take care of Karan's head wound first. As they both start to argue once again, the doctor says they're arguing just like a husband and wife. They both get quiet. The doctor corrects himself and says of course he knows that Karan isn't married, it was just an expression, that's all. Karan wonders why everyone who sees them together thinks they are husband and wife? This has never happened to him before. Preeta wonders if it will be so bad if she ended up with someone like Karan, or perhaps Karan himself? She then pats her head in denial and thinks she needs to get rid of these silly thoughts from her head.

Once they arrive at the hospital, they are taken to different rooms, Karan to a private room where a specialist takes over, and Preeta to a general room where the nurses tend to her wounds. They give her a wheelchair after they've disinfected her leg, and tell her to strictly not walk around or put pressure on her leg. She is anxious to know about Karan and wants to see him. She first goes to call Shrishti and informs her that they've been in an accident but that they're fine. She gives them the address of the hospital as Shrishti insists on coming to see her. Preeta asks Shrishti to inform Rishab and come with him as he would want to be with Karan as well.

Shortly after, she enquires about Karan and expresses wishes to go see him. The nurse wheels her over to his room where she waits for Karan to get back from his x-ray examination. As Karan is brought back on his rolling bed, Preeta gets happy to see him. Karan is sad to see Preeta in a wheelchair.

Karan: Yeh wheelchair...

Preeta: Don't worry...

Preeta holds his hand to reassure him that she's fine. She tells him that she's really glad to see he's okay and that will recover soon. She then turns to look at the nurse who just brought him in and asks if she's right and the nurse simply nods.

Preeta: Dekha, tum bilkul theek ho jaaoge, nothing to worry.

A tear rolls down her cheeks as she pulls her hand away. 

Edited by anonymous_xx - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Part 4 updated, running out of ideas as I'm enjoying the current Karan and Preeta track!
Posted: 6 years ago
Wonderful update I love it very much 
Posted: 6 years ago
Lovely update! PreeRan chemistry is always amazing! 
Posted: 6 years ago
Thanks, will write more on a different track when I have more ideas!
Posted: 6 years ago
Loved the way you write good job continued soon plzzz
Posted: 6 years ago
Will not be updating this, as the story line is something else now, and I like to keep up with the story line, in order for too many parallel tracks to not be intertwined. 
So if something else comes to mind with the current story line, I will write more on that! Thanks for all your lovely comments.
Posted: 6 years ago
Very lovely plz continue
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