Mahabharat

Battle Of Emotions - ArjunDraupadi

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Posted: 6 years ago
                  DISCLAIMER 
This write up of mine is purely fictional. 
This is my perception of Arjun's love, affection and feelings towards Draupadi.
I have no intention to hurt feelings of any religion, creed, caste or community.
I have immense respect towards Mahabharata and will always continue to have it.
This write up is based on the Mahabharat serial aired on Star Plus.
This write up needs to be taken in a fictional way.

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- Amayaa Mehra 

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Posted: 6 years ago
waiting for your ff to update 
good luck dear 
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Posted: 6 years ago
THANK YOU so much dr @bubulswt will update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
This is funreadingzone in wattpad...Hope you remember
I have read your story there 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: Nityayuvani

This is funreadingzone in wattpad...Hope you remember

I have read your story there 
Continue soon


Off course dr how can I forget de one whom I m following too 
Nice to meet u here 
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Posted: 6 years ago
                   PROLOGUE ( TEASURE )

Ooo ho love in de air !! not bad not bad... 

Congratulations !! Finally that is going to happen which you always want to be...

No this is not possible we have to think some other way to get rid off it... 

Why nature have this written for me in my Faith ?? Whatever !! I can't back off now not even object...

Finally after so long we will be together... 

He loves me... loves me na ?? 

I respect her emotions nd feelings but I can't do anything... 

You should leave for your visit now as reaching their on time is very necessary...

Wait !! We will miss you.. Come soon brother... 

What had happened in past few years that he changed that much ??

Does he even consider me as his wife ?? 

Why are you so rude and ignorant towards her ?? 

Only I know what she is for me !! 
I love her de most in all my four wives or better I say I love only... leave it !! 

It's my life my breath my rule you need not to involve or care about it... 

Why do you always do this to me ?? What sin I did ?? 

I am sorry !! I should not come in between...

Why are you so sad my dear ?? You know na I can't see tears in your eyes...

Our relation is getting complicated day by day !! I don't have further belief on it so stop trying to mend it you will loose only... 

What did I done !! For the sake of everyone I ruined our love... I gave her sorrow only till today... 

I didn't came here for listening any kind of harsh words I should better leave before been throwing out...

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Posted: 6 years ago
interesting teaser waiting to read more 
I think these lines are from ardi some lines are from Arjun 
and some lins are from Drupadi 
continue soon 
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Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by: bubulswt

interesting teaser waiting to read more 

I think these lines are from ardi some lines are from Arjun 
and some lins are from Drupadi 
continue soon 

Thank u dr  
You got it absolutely right...the episodes will get published very soon 

Edited by Amayaa_pkj - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Finally, you started it here...thank you soo much dear...just loved it..keep it up...
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Posted: 6 years ago
          THE DREADFUL NIGHT 

Nature is rejoicing... Dusk is appealing...
By remembering today's twists nd turns 
Praising itself to witness de grand Swayamvar of de century which will be studded in de golden letters in de great epic 
Unknown with the arrival of one of the most horrific night...

Five mens along with a woman are travelling on foot.
Mens have unornamented clothes on them but their simplicity is not showing them poor by any means 
They are divine born to rule types 
And the lady is looking like the exact replica of Goddess Laxmi 
They are the successor of non other than kuruvansh 
The five princes of Hastinapur who better known as Pandavs with de princess of Panchal 

Yudhistir de eldest and Bheem de strongest are proceeding further while Nakul de charmer and Shahdev de brighter are wandering behind the spiritual couple ArjunDraupadi.

Arjun the archer is connected with archery like an inseparable buddy. He is incomplete without Archery and Archery is incomplete without him. His face itself is showing what his name going to become in history 
Draupadi the fireborn has de potential to turn over entire world in one moment. She is born to show the world what a woman can do. And her eyes itself is enough to show what she is going to be in future.

As per his nature, Bheem is cracking jokes in which Nakul is accompanying him. 
Yudhister is quiet as usual while shahdev looks worried.
But there are two more people who just lost in each other's fascinating eyes.
Their eyes are talking itself like they are aware from each other's company from longgg before 

Nakul noticed their eye lock and commented : Control bhrata control or else Rajkumari will be in your arms the very next moment.
Everyone looked at de direction shown by the speaker Bheem : Explain us some Loveguru I didn't get it.
ArjunDraupadi composed themselves 
Nakul : I mean if their eyes can go in other direction without their approval then might their foot too and Rajkumari may fall down and in respect of saving Bhrata Arjun will catch her in his protective arms.
Bheem and Shahdev laughed whole heartedly leaving Arjun and Draupadi embarrassed.
Yudhister : Nakul remark your words first before saying something. You should not say so.
Bheem : Jaisth Nakul is younger than Arjun. Arjun's wife will be his bhabhi whom he can tease too.
Yudhister : Bheem Panchal princess is not yet married to Arjun. 
Draupadi : It's completely OKKK Rajkumar Yudhister I didn't felt bad.
Shahdev : Bhrata I m feeling like something very bad is going to happen. As nearer we are proceeding towards our shelter I m feeling more and more wicked.
Bheem : Ooo ho Shahdev first Jaisth and now you !!
Let's enjoy the current auspicious moment na why to bother for future 
Yudhister : Bheem is right Shahdev. Don't feel anything. Whatever the nature is decided for us will come to acknowledge at any cost.
Arjun : Till the Pandavs are together nothing will be bad and we are one soul with five bodies whatever happen will faced by all together.
Bheem : Exactly like how Nakul always come to save us whenever we struck in problems. 
Shahdev giggled seeing Bheem teasing Nakul.
Arjun : Correction Bhrata Bheem. Like how Nakul always reach to help beautiful ladies whenever they struck in problems.
Nakul : Jaisth !! 
Yudhister too laughed this time.
Draupadi feeling delighted by becoming part of this awesome family and became happy by seeing such a cute and strong bond between the brothers.

And after walking miles finally they reached near their destination.
Shahdev warned again but the others didn't paid attention towards him while eager to meet their mother Kunti.
And from here their life taken a terrible turn.

Kunti was busy in her worship. The five Pandavs entered de hut. 
Arjun : See Mata what I get in Dan.
Kunti without turning said de simple sentence which became de most horrible sentence for someone.
Kunti : Whatever you got divide into five parts and share with your brothers. 
Everyone left dumbstruck.
Draupadi came from behind the Arjun and left shocked.

She slightly came back from the hut and started remembering her last talk with her elder sister Shikhandini by adjusting herself on a nearby rock.

They were about to leave the palace.
Shikhandini : Drau You don't need to take tension if you say we'll consult father 
How can we let you go with a simple Brahman.
Draupadi : Simple ?? Jiji are you sure the Brahman who shown this kind of archery is simple ?? 
Shikhandini : I mean his lifestyle not his bravery.
Draupadi : Jiji we need not to worry whomever my faith decided my groom I'll accept him.

Kunti's words and then her own words started sounding in her ear.

She wasn't in a state to have control on her tissues.
Flashback continued.

Shikhandini : Drau why are you not understanding 
Shikhandini paused for a minute and observed Draupadi's face
Why are you smirking ha ? Am I looking like a fool ?
Draupadi : Off course not my dear Jiji 
Shikhandini : Then may I know the reason behind this smirk of my little sister.
Draupadi : What do you think ? The one who won me sometimes before is an ordinary man
Shikhandini : No No he is actually the great Archer Arjun. Anything Drau ??

Draupadi stared at her.
Shikhandini : Why are you staring like this to me. I was kidding dear.
Draupadi had a good laugh.
Draupadi : That was not a joke Jiji it's true. 
Shikhandini : What !! Drau You lost your mind completely. I saw Arjun. There is no compair btw them.
Draupadi : Exactly Jiji because both are same.
As soon as he entered I got to know.
Shikhandini : But how can it comes possible.
Pandavs and their mother died in varnavat na
Draupadi : I don't know about that much Jiji but Ya I know he is Arjun.
Shikhandini : How are you so sure ?
Draupadi : How can an ordinary person won the fireborn who was made for the world's greatest archer ?? If I m fireborn then he is thunderstorm.
Shikhandini : Wow !! Pitashri's wish is going to fulfil now he will get the greatest archer as his son-in-law and his dearest son-in-law will get the fireborn as her wife.
Draupadi blushed a little. 
Shikhandini further added : Congratulations !! Finally that is going to happen which you always want to be...
This is a new beginning for you Drau. 
Draupadi : yeah !! 

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Author's note - That was not only the new beginning for Draupadi but for the Pandavs too esp. Arjun 
It's 21st century which made Arjun a villain more or else his counting comes in the most great warrior and probably on the top of the world's greatest archer.

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