hi guys thanks for all the likes and comments, all the comments have been replied right above the updates
enjoy the part
Hindi Version
Chapter 6- Mumbai's boyfriend
Third person POV
"main mere bade papa ke baaremei baat kar rahi hu! she yells at him
"hahahahha...wohi main sochu tum aur raghuvendra bakshi...sorry sorry sorry he laughs "uska naam kya hai? he again asks her
"kiska? she asks with a straight face.
"uska? he asks and wiggles his eyebrows with a teasing smile.
She walks away.
"arey bolo na bolo na he says jogging beside her
"waise toh tumhe batane ki zaroorat nahi hia...still...amar ...fashion designing ke course ke time jan pehchaan hui thi she says
"amar he states
"hmm she nods her head
"acha naam hai...and iss amar ke liye tum humare pune ke ladke ko mana kar rahi ho he asks her
She giggles
"yeh toh bhi ghar pe pata hai kya? he asks
"kya?...shaadi ke liye naa karne wali hu ya amar? she asks
"dono he replies
"hmm she pursued her lips and fumbles
"haan!...yehi!...yehi farak hai Mumbai mein aur pune mein...main ghabragaya , mujhe darr laga ...maine uss ladki ko like a gentleman uske ghar drop kiya...aur tum!...tumne toh apne gharwalon ko hi andhere mei rakha hai he again starts his comparison.
"eh hello..aisa kuch nai hai...meri mom ko sab pata hai she says.
"sab pata hai? ya amar ke baaremei sab pata hai?he asks teasingly
"amar ke baaremein sab pata hai...plz aise kisiko bhi ghaas nahi daalti main she says.
"Mumbai ki hoke bhi? he asks.
"Mumbai ki hu.. isliye dhangse shaddi ke liye mana karne aayi hoon and pura din waste kar rahi hu idhr she says.
"waste!he says shocked
"obviously she says.
"alright he goes away little hurt.
Parking lot
"jiss kaam ke liye aaye hain...uske bajaye kuch aur kaam karne ko toh time waste karna hi kehte hain...at least humare Mumbai mein she says teasing him with his own sentence,noticing that he took that comment personally.
"chalo tumhare rajkumar aagaye kya dekhte hain...ek baar tumhe wahan drop kardiya ...toh tumhe bhi mujhse chutkara miljayega...and mujhe batting karne miljayega he says as if wasn't even upset about her statement.
"agaya hoga toh wait karega na who she states.
"hein? he makes a confused face.
"usko bhi wait karne do mere liye she continues.
"ab yeh kya naya? he asks.
"haan toh barobar haina...ab usne mujhse milne ko aana chahiye, mujhe propose karna chahiye...phir main decide karungi kya karna hai woh...ek toh uske liye main itne door se aayi, ab jab mera mood hoga tab milungi main usko. She gives her final decision folding her hands across her chest.
"and ismei time waste' nahi ho raha hai? he asks and goes towards his bike
"arey maine aise bhi itna time waste kiya hai...usmei thoda aur waste hogaya toh kya farak padne wala hai, waise bhi meri train shaam ki hai she says trying reason out.
"tumhe time waste karna hai karo...main chala!...wasie bhi meri batting pending hai he says starting his bike.
"ok he starts his bike "tata he says "bye she replies ...he goes a little further when she shouts
"aye woh saarasbaugh ki kuch toh bhi yahin haina? and he applies brake harshly.
He gets off the bike and comes to her.
"kya! Kya boli tum? he asks in a angry tone.
~~~~~~
English Version
#6
Mumbai's boyfriend
"I am talking about my uncle!!!!" she yells at him
"hahahahha...thats what I was thinking you and raghuvendra bakshi...sorry sorry sorry" he laughs
"what his name??" he again asks her
"whose?" she asks with a straight face.
"his?" he asks and wiggles his eyebrows with a teasing smile.
She walks away
"arey say na say na" he says jogging beside her
" frankly speaking, there's no need in telling you about him...still...amar, met during the course of fashion designing" she says
"amar" he states
"hmm" she nods her head
"nice name...and you are rejecting our Pune boy for this amar" he asks her
She giggles
"have you said at home about this atleast??" he asks
"what?... I am not marrying pune boy or about amar? " she asks
"about both" he replies
"hmm" she pursued her lips and fumbles
"yeah!...this!... this is the difference between mumbai and Pune...i was scared and afraid...I dropped that girl back at her home as a true gentleman...and you!... you are keeping your family in dark about your relationship he again starts his comparison.
"oh hello... its nothing like that...my mom knows everything" she says.
"she knows everything? Or she knows everything about amar only?"he asks teasingly
"she knows about amar only... but plz I don't entertain any roadside romeo okay" she says.
"even though being from mumbai?" he asks.
"I am from Mumbai that's why..i am here to reject that marriage proposal in a proper way...and I am wasting my whole day here she says.
"waste!"he says shocked
"obviously" she says.
"alright" he goes away little hurt.
Parking lot
"not doing the work you had actually come for...and doing something else only is called time waste only...'at least in our mumbai she says teasing him with his earlier sentence, noticing that he took that comment Personally.
"lets go and see if your prince charming is back or not..once I have dropped you there, you are also freed from my company...and I have my batting pending" he says as if wasn't even upset about her statement.
"he'll wait na if he is back" she states.
"huh?" he makes a confused face.
"let him also wait for me now" she continues.
"now whats this new drama?" he asks.
"yeah then...its right na...'now that boy should meet me, propose me, and then I will decide what to do...I came here from so far to meet him, now I'll meet him, when I feel like meeting him." She gives her final decision folding her hands across her chest.
"and you are not "wasting time in this??" he asks and goes towards his bike
"arey but I have already wasted so much of my time...who cares if more time is wasted as it is now i have to wait till evening na, train is in the evening" she says trying reason out.
"if you want to waste your time, waste your time... I'll get going...my batting is still pending" he says starting his bike.
"ok" he starts his bike "tata" he says "bye" she replies ...he goes a little further when she shouts "aye that sarasbaugh or something is nearby only na??" and he applies brake harshly.
He gets off the bike and comes to her.
"what! What did you say?" he asks in a angry tone.
-----------
thanks
sammy
also...should i change the bf's name??...amar?
bill deney k naam pr : mr. Punekar's expression 🤣
comment:
p_commentcount