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Posted: 6 years ago
#61
Story was good...
ak was confused with the shower of love nk is imposing on her
but as she never experienced before she is unable to undersatnd her feelings...
with time i say more as of now part is going good ak was sooo confusing
nd nk is shown as a carefree guy who thinks of just frnshdip.
Ak is still unable to understand her feelings...
Now naksh apart hope to see further where things get understandable to both...
Do udpate soon.. 
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Story was good...

ak was confused with the shower of love nk is imposing on her
but as she never experienced before she is unable to undersatnd her feelings...
with time i say more as of now part is going good ak was sooo confusing
nd nk is shown as a carefree guy who thinks of just frnshdip.
Ak is still unable to understand her feelings...
Now naksh apart hope to see further where things get understandable to both...
Do udpate soon..


thanku thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally 😛 awww yupiee u liked my view haw princyu i m so happy yuhuu..
haa i thought ki yeh show karugi about confusion story was means..
past aur bhi hain abhi 😉 its not ended still..
haa she is ryt in her way na. .
i will do update soon next part than read nd say how was past. it will end soon not now 😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
mera dil bhi kitna pagal hain yeh pyar toh tumse karta hain par samne jab tum aate ho kuch bhi kehne se darta hain oo mere sajan..
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Posted: 6 years ago
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sajan sajan teri dulhan tujhko pukare aaja.. aake mere hatho main mehndi tu hi laga ja...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#65
part-10
next day nk was upset...
mo-chal nk clg tu ready nhi hua..
nk-bas yr kuch soch raha tha.. mohit i m bad kya.. is my najar bad..?
mo-nahi yr tu toh sweet hain bhut.. essa kuch nhi hain kyo..
nk-mohitt ak broke frdship with me yr... because woh insecure hain mujhe leke... kya main kuch galt kiya uske sath..
mo-kya.. par kyo.. samaj gaya tu kuch jayada hi apapan dikha raha tha na.. ak essi ladki hain hi nahi tu hi soch teri boldness piche padna woh sab uske liye frdship nhi hain.. ek ladki frd chachti hain par ek essa frd jo usse sachi salah de uska dil ka dukhaye bas wahi dosti hoti hain na..
nk-essa hota hai.. means main jo kehta tha woh close frdship nahi thi..
mo-nk close frdship dono side se hoti hain jo ho jati hain ek dusare ko help karte hue pata nhi chalta..
nk-chal yr abhi toh hum frd hi nhi hain.. chal.. dey went in clg.. ak was sat in class.. she didnt see to nk.. nk took his place..dey attand class..
in cantin ak was talking with her frd..
pa-hey ak r u fine..
ak-haa tujhe kya hua. .. tu thik ho na..
pa-yup bilkul thik hun... i m so happy ki tune meri bat mani dekhna tu pehle jaisi ho jayegi ab... hmm.. aacha sun main aati hu.. nk nd mohit were talking. .
mo-amm nk eat na..
nk-nhi yr i dont waana eat.. mujhe ghar ke khane ki yad aa rahi bhut.. yeh oily food kha ke i m getting bored..
ak heard it... she didn't feel gud..
ak-mujhe nk ki sunni chahiye kya but main reh nhi pati hu kisi ki help kare bina.. main apni food du kya it is nice today..
she went near of mohit..
mo-hii ak..
ak-woh mohit aaj mujhe yeh food mili hain house se.. it is so much i dont waana eat. tum tumhare frd kha loge kya.
mo-waaw ghar ki food love u behen... haa haa hum khayege but u eat na..
ak-haa haa i ate... .
mo-tqq ak.. he went near of nk.. hey hey..
nk-kya..
mo-ghar ka hain meri ek dost ne diya u eat.. upma hain..
nk-hmm gud thankuu so much.. ak was watching to both dey were having.. she passed smile. .
ak was in class than payal came..
pa-hey ak bunny movie lagi hain today. ringa ringa ringa ringa..
ak-waawww.. she uchalofy.. waahh waah.. but i cant go.. my bunny... 🥱 my papa will never allowed. .
nk came in same time... class starts nd dey leave. .. in nyt nk mohit were ready for party..
ak also went in party.. she went lill late.
ak-sab esse kyo khade ho haa..
mo-ak we planned for movie today.. abhi show hain.. bunny movie..
ak-wattt really but kaha..
mo-are hamare bagal wale maltipax main hain na.. chal ab.. u know yeh kiski plan hain..
all-nk ki.. ak sees to nk..
nk-chale. .. i didnt watch telgue movie but i will watch today..
dey went in nyt show.. all sat in their seat.. nd now aks turn. . one seat was only empty besids of nk.. she sat their..
nk didnt understand. ..
nk-wat he is saying i really don't understand. .. ha..
mo-sshhh... waah.. love u bunny.. ak laugh too...
nk-main so hi jata hu.. he went in sleep.. ak sees to him.. in interval. ..
nk-ruko all main lata hu kuch khane ko... he went.. ak went washroom... ak was coming suddenly she takraofy from nk..
ak-sorry..
nk-its oki..
ak-if u dont understand u can go na..
nk-i will go with my frd mohit.. nd thanku for lunch..
ak-watt lunch..
nk - i know u helped me.. not as a frd but i heard that u r bunnys fan.. so i made plan today..
maine bhi badle main tumhari help ki now balance ho gai..
ak-main jau.. dey said bye to each...
days were going... naksh first semester ends.. nk was packing things..
mo-tu ruk ja na thode din ki hi toh bat haain bas..
nk-i dont.. yr mera man nhi lagta yaha pe... aur maa ne kuch important work hain bola hain mujhe so i have to go..
mo-kya work. aacha clg start hone se bad toh aayega na..
n-haa aauga na.. main.. .
mo-chal thik hain tu ja.. kal last day hain main sabko bata dunga oki.. bye..
nk-tc.. .
next day ak sees to mohit. . he was alone..
mo-hii..
ak-hii tum aaj akle last day pe..
mo-hmm nk went home na..
ak-kyaa home means. .
mo-pata nhi usne kaha usse yaha utna aacha nhi lagta so he went. . but aa jayega next semester main..
ak-oohhh... smile but not happy main aati hu... she opened her notebook.. nk drawing was their..
she remembered it...
in reality :-
ak was in hadabad..
na-kya hua ak.. y u shivering so much..
ak-i dont waana go office. . plz chalo yaaha se she went.. nk was searching to ak..
nk-ak... kaha gai..
ak-in car... woh naman plz mujhe ghar drop kar do plz.. main disturb ho gai hu thoda..
na-par oki as ur wish.. he dropped to ak.. she closed d door..
went in bathroom opened shower..
ak-nk.. woh mera bharam tha ya sach... she starts loud crying so much.. kyo nk kyo aaye tum meri life main.. phir aaye ho mera sabkuch lutne ke liye.. trust ka yeh fal milta hain kya.. kyo god kyo.. khas woh dubara aaya hi na hota...
after some month. . ak was upset.. so upset..
she was getting ready..
ak-pata hi nahi chalta time ki.. really i got bored now a days..
clg jane ki bhi man nhi ho rahi meri..
she got ready... vis drooped to ak...
ak sees to mohit..
mo-hey ak.. howz was ur hly..
ak-it was oki... urs..
mo-great.. my father nd my mom.. i spend time with them..
are mera dost aa gaya.. aa na nk.. ak got happy to sees to nk..
nk-hiii.. smile... hii ak.
ak-hii..
nk-kaisi ho.
ak-aachi hu... tum..
nk-chal na mohit chal class main chale..
ak-kya hua isko.. he is not seems so happy...
dey attend class... nk was in garden...
mo-u look so down nk kya hua.. kal aaya h jabse udas hain..
nk-kuch hain nhi bas.. tabiyat kharab si hain.. i want koi sahara yr jiske pass main thoda relax feel karu..
ak came nd heard it..
mo-main hu na..
nk-thabhi toh aaya hu yr yaha main... tere pass thoda thik feel karne.. chal na ghar rat main party main chalege mujhe sor main jana hain.
ak heard it..
ak-jo maine nk ke bare main sochi woh sachi thi ya wrong... he is upset par kis hak se puchu main ki yeh sab kya hain.. y he is sad.. woh kyo batayega mujhe. ..
in nyt nk got ready..
mo-tu thik h na means ur eyes see red ho gai hain thodi..
nk-i m fine chal...
dey went in party.. ak too came...
nk was in bar area...
ak came for coke..
nk-i waant drink..
ak-it is not gud for health ak thought...
nk-give me.. took one zip.. eee.. . throwed it.. bakwas hain ekdom..
shopkeeper - sir pehli bar li kya...
nk-plz dont say anything to me oki.. he went near of mohit..
mo-chal yr party main se. .
nk-hmm chal.. dey were outside than ak came.. some boys were admiring to aks..
nk didnt like it..
nk-mohit ruk pehle ak ko jane de yr phir hum chalege..
boys-waah kya lag gai is gown main..
ak didn't like it.. she didnt like it..
boy-baap re baap... jisko milegi uski toh chandi ho jayegi..
nk-yee.. mohit stop to him..
ak-kya kaha tum logo ne haa.. bakwas ki na muhh thod dungi oki.. ek ladki ki chalni haram kar rakhi h.. juban kich lungi..
bo-chal kich le chuyegi toh sachi.. laugh..
ak-hey..
bo-dekh tu chup reh hum 4 hain aur tu ek akeli.. tere kapde bhi uthar denge toh kya kar legi suna hain na hadsa.. nk came nd sooo much hit to that men..
ak starts crying she felt hurted so much..
nk climbing on that men... starts hitting..
n-sale teri himat kaise hui meri dost ko yeh kehne ki bhi haa.. ek ladki ki ijat nhi kar sakte tum log bakwas karte ho.. one men came from nks behind nd start hitting to nk..
nk-aah.. got blood.. he hit to that boy..
nk-rukkk.. tu bhi ruk.. take wood nd start hitting. .
he was badly hitting to that boy who said to ak..
he took pattar nd was about to hit but mohit stooped..
mo-bas nk bas.. chod inko.. nk stood..
nk-tune dekha nhi kya kiya isne..
ak was crying.
nk-ak.. held her hand.. ro kyo rahi haa.. chapal utharo utharo.. she did it.
nk-hit him..
ak-par..
nk-hitt... she starts beating to him from chapal..
ak-kam se kam apni maa aur behen ka soch ke toh ek ladki ki ijat karo... kya milta hain yeh sab karke tum log ko.. tumne itnni hurt kari mujhe..
nk-aaj ke bad essi harkat ki na bachoge nhi..
skipped aks hand..
he leaves...
ak sees to him...
more part coming soon Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#66
in house..
ak-yeh kya tha aaj nk ne mere ko bachai...main samaj hi nhi pa rahi hu which i saw pehli wali nk now he changed.. but mujhe uski thanks toh bolni hi chahiye na... kal i will say to him..
now next day... ak was searching to nk.. mohit came..
mo-kya hua ak..
ak-woh nk kal i waana say tqq..
mo-par woh nhi aaya.. he has having fever tomorrow nyt.. main usse room main chod ke aaya hu.. bechara rest bhi nhi le pa raha because usse kich aacha nhi lag raha aur fever bhut tej hain..
ak-kya.. fever hui.. mohit abhi clg start hui nhi kya main jau nk ke pass thodi care bhi ho jayegi.. she runned nd went in auto..
nk was getting cold..
nk sees to ak..
n-tum..
ak-haa main.. woh main yaha tqq bolne aai thi yesterday u helped me.. really i m so thankfull..
nk-its fine.. but clg u didnt go..
ak-woh kitchen main soup bana du.. maybe u will like it. .
nk-woh waha hain kitchen.. ak start making it.. nk was feeling too low..
ak-yeh soup banai hain maine.. give to nk... he took.. it is gud thanku so much ak..
ak-hmm.. wohh... nk u r nice person.. yesterday u save me na yeh bat main dil se nhi nikal pa rahi aur i m feeling too gud..
nk-kya fark padta hain ki main aacha hu ya bura.. mujhe frd banana kon chahta hain. sab toh mujhse dir ho jate hain. kal help ki maine aaj tumne meri kar di.. yahi hota hain balance na..
ak-woh nk.. pata nhi mujhe par jo sayad maine sochi woh galt thi maybe.. par..
nk-ek bar darar aa gai now main woh jagah le pauga hi nhi.. woh meri jagah thi bhi nhi..
ak-hamara frdship toh aachese hua hi nhi.. maine suni hai ki frdship khud ho jati hain aur chinta nhi hoti hain khud ki bas dost ki hi hoti na..
nk-hmm... i m feeling too weak.. . he was feeling sleepy nd sleep.. ak put cold patty on nks head..
ak-i think i should leave now.. she was going.. sees to nk.. pata nhi nk ko dekh ke yeh nhi lagti ki woh buri hogi.. in nyt ak was feeling to call nk but she didn't call..
next day in clg. .
mohit nk came..
ak-mohittt nk thik h na..
mo-yup he is gud. txx for ur soup.. he will come tomorrow..
ak-got happy.. really... chalo aacha hain..
mo-tum itni khush kyo ho for nk or something as..
ak-means.. for nk na..
mo-wattt.. . he helped u yr because woh tumhe khush dekhna chahta hai aur frd bhi manta hain.. dar ko chod do aur aachese frdship nibhao oki... went..
in clg ak was thinking about it.. . in nyt also...
ak-main kya karu really i m not getting... nk ki think karu toh bhi buri nhi think kqru than also.. god give me way plz.
next day nk mohit came in clg. ak too.
ak-nk how u feeling..
nk-better... i m fine now... really.. i m gud nd fine..
ak-thats so better nk.. i m happy..
nk-kis liye..
ak-u happy nd fine..
nk laugh.. chal mohittt... dey attand clg. ak was in garden she sees to nk near of room.. than one girl came. .
gi-hii nk..
nk-hloo aap kon..
gi-nk i really like u.. maine disco main bhi tumhe dekha hain.. u soo hot u know. .
ak heard it. .
nk-watt.. tum essa ek anjan ladke se kaise bol sakti ho kam se kam khud ki ijat ka khayal toh karo.i m not like this tipe of boy who want only girl... plz leave me... ak sees to nk..
ak-i was wrong totally wrong nk waisa boy nhi hai jo payal ne boli mujhe.. sach main kitna wrong thi. . nk ko pain hui hogi na yeh sab jan ke i broke frdship also. .
.. now ak was waiting for vish..
but only car came.. ak got a call..
ak-hloo haa abba g. . wat u will not come.. oki fine ok hmm..
yuhuuu i m alone..
than she sees to nk nd mohit...
ak-mohitt hiii... sees to nk..
mo-hiii..
ak-tum aaoge rat ko party main.. aaj we will dance haa.. aur main chahugi mere sare dost aaye sare..
nk sees to ak..
mo-sab kon..
ak-sab meri dost.. sees to nk..
suddenly ak got a call..
ak-hloo chiki waaa.. watt dadi is.. haw.. she had tears in her eyes.. dadi... her cell phone went on floor..
meri dadi dadi.. woh..
nk-wat happened..
ak-dadi ko admit kari woh serious hain woh city hospi.. i m coming.. she went in car..
mo-kya hua yr.. hum chale..
nk-dekhte hain.. nk took aks cell nd dey following to ak..
she reached in hospital...
ak-chiki wat happened to dadi.. rat ko i talk sith her.. she was fine na..
chi-main kal hi apni sasural se aai aur dadi se bat kar hi rahi thi ki she got chest pain nd turant yaha lai toh she was fine.. apko batai nhi kyoki unhone kaha she is feeling better aur aap dar jati.. nk mohit listening all..
phir jab aaj abhi jane wale the again she got pain.. it is heart attack..
ak broke..
mo-akk... handle karo khud ko... ak-dadii woh batai bhi nhi ki woh bimar hain.. kal toh bat hui na meri..
nk was just seeing her pain..
ak-dadi cheat me mohit. . i.. hug to him.. mohitt kuch hogi nhi na..
mo-no nhi hoga kuch bhi nhi hmm.. bas...
chi-bas operation chal raha inhone bill bhar diya hain.. dey were waiting..
ak-kuch nhi hogi kuch bhi nhi.. walking.. dadi apko bat karni padegi mujhse haan..
nk was watching her becheni..
ak-dadi u cant broke me bas.. i really love u.. dadi i dont waana loose u bas. .. than nk gave cell to her..
nk-dont worry woh tumhari abba ki call..
ak-aane do dadi se bat karke i will talk bas.. than doctor came..
ak-howz dadi..
do-woh kya kahe.. plz samaliye sab khud ko.. ak kon hai woh actually unse bat karna chahti hain but dont think.. ak runned inside.. unke pass bhut kam time hain..
ak-dadi.. .
da-betaaa.. akk.. in low voice... she said come in isara... beta maf karna mujhe main tera sath nhi de pai..
ak-dadi u will be fine dadi.. plz... dadi..
da-beta time nhi h jayada mere pass.. beta maine tera dard dekha h beta tu hasna kelna aur ek wada.. held aks hend.. beta tu apne papa ki bat man ke apni life barbad mat karna haa beta.. meri wish wahi h jiske side tera dil jhukega tu wahi karna.. apne liye jina.. bas..
ak-dadda... she was hell crying nn.. plzz.. dont sayy pll..
da-wada kar.. tujhe khush karne wala milega beta der se hi.. tujhe khushi milegi haa wada kar..
ak-aaa.. hhaaa.. main main main.. haa jiugi apke sath.. dadi passed smile.. nd she lost her sence.. she died..
ak-da.. da.. daaa.. nk was watching to ak nd dadi.. dadddaddiii shouting.. dadiii.. aap hain n yaha dadi.. hug to her.. mera kya hoga kon hai mere sath dadi.. mujhe bhi le chalo na dadi plz.. dont go.. talk with me.. chiki was crying mohit too..
ak was feeling aks pain..
ak-dadi.. dadiii.. mohit came near..
mo-ak.. plz samalo khud ko dadi is no more..
ak-hey gooo.. meri dadi.. meri..kyu bol rahi haa.. nk came near..
sab jhooti ho.. dadi is playing with me u know bachachan main bhi like esse hi..
haa really laughing dadi is playing.. nk..
nk-akk.. dadi is no more listen to me..
ak-hain na..
nk-akkk.. reality main aao oki... dadi nhi rahi.. esse mat karo samalo khud ko oki.. ak hug to him..
ak-nkkk meri nkkk... she grabbed to nk... dadi meri jan thi nk.. life without her.. kaise kategi..
nk-hum hain na.. promise sath denge.. we will not hurt u... jindagi main hum kya kar sakte h kuch bhi nhi..
ak-dadiii... dadiii.. my dadi... crying...
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enjoy.. sry for mistake. .
precap-nk gave support to ak... nd teacher says in class say about mother but ak didnt say anything. . will nk understand to her? Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
It was so emotional part...
Naksh care for each other but still for each other
So cute caring
but end be bechaari dadi...
But y did u end her part she is so sweet other dan her ak has no one to care for her...
Hope ak understnads the true meaning of relations now...
Do update soon...
Nk sitting nd others enjoying mve was hahhaha...
  
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Posted: 6 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

It was so emotional part...

Naksh care for each other but still for each other
So cute caring
but end be bechaari dadi...
But y did u end her part she is so sweet other dan her ak has no one to care for her...
Hope ak understnads the true meaning of relations now...
Do update soon...
Nk sitting nd others enjoying mve was hahhaha...


aww u liked this part i m soo choo happy 😃 thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments 😃..
aww haa abhi aur bhi care hain na 😳 dadi ko i showed died karni thi for naksh bond.. u will get na in next part all..
i will do update soon next   ⭐️
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#69
part-11
after some days.. after dadis death... in clg... ak was sat in garden. . she was so upset.. she was silent..
nk sees to ak.. sat besides of ak..
nk-ak i m seeing from a week that u r hell upset... yeh toh u know na ki koi aaye toh na hum rok sakte hain aur na jane wale ko pakad ke rakh sakte hain.. i cant see ur pain.. tum us din hospital main roi thi aaj tak na kuch bol rahi na has rahi na fudak rahi.. apni pain ko toh bahar lao kam se kam.. ak didnt say any single word.. she stood nd going.. mohit came..
mo-isse kya ho gya.. yr esse toh ghut jayegi woh andar hi andar..
nk-pata nahi mohit.. mujhe toh ak se bhut kuch share karna tha par uski yeh halat dekh ke kya kahu main.. main usse pain main nhi dekhna chahta hu... sach kuch karna hoga hame..
ak was silently eating. ..
nk-hey ak aaj maine poatato ki paratha u liked na.. lona.. she eat..
kuch kaho toh main ek week se tumse bat karna chahta hu but y u took talk with me haa.. ak stood na going..
ak ak stop... he held aks hand.. bas.. kyo de rahi khud ko pain haaa kya hum dard main nhi hain.. hain phir bhi has rahe na muskura rahe na.. kyo essa karke pain de rahi khud ko bhi mujhe bhi haa..
ak-kyoo kyo haa.. shout piche padi ho meri.. i dont want any hamdardi. oki..
nk-toh raho dukhi always hina sad sad sad bas.. has nhi sakti for u haa.. dadi wants ur happiness aaj jaha bhi hogi na woh she will be sad.. dekh ke esse tumhe.. sach jo help karti thi khush rehti aaj dekho usse ro bhi nhi rahi haa..
ak-nk.. kyo mujhe ehsas dila rahi ki dadi.. nk kisko bolu main ki kya pain h meri nk.. sochi bhi nhi ki jisse itni bat kari she will leave me. har koi chod deti hain mujhe.. start crying i m bad one nk.. i m bad one.. u also go warna u will go away from me nk.. plz nk.. plz... aahhh... she put her face on his chest.. annn.. nk i m tired nk.. kyo le gai woh dadi ko nk.. i m really missing to her. essi lag rahi jaise meri ek hand cut gai.. grabbed nks shirt.. nk was about to held her but he put his hand back.. mujhe mat jana chod ke kisi ki sahara toh nhi meri pass kyo god ne chin li ek pal bhar ki khushi.. nk...
nk-bas ak bas.. plz.. caressing her hair.. plz samalo khud ko plz..
after some time ak realize that she is in nks arms.. she broke hug... she sat on table.. nk was watching to ak..
he gave rumal to ak.. she wiped her tears..
ak-dadi meri kuch thi nhi par pata nhi sab kuch lagti thi.. meri ko khana deni aur toh aur i shared all with dadi.. dont know y god ne chin li mujhse.. khushi ki way..
nk-god ne nhi par haa memory hain na sath.. aur khush hone ki wajah khojni padti hain u told me na.. tum bachapn se khud khushi ka rasta kojti aai ho aaj tut gai kyo..
ak-pata nhi aaj kuch mili hi nhi rahi..
nk-main dilauga.. ek essi jagah leke chaluga jaha u will be feel happy.. bolo chalogi mere sath.. happy day pe aur chalogi half day..
ak-no nk.. i dont waana roaming. .
nk-ak trust me.. u will feel much better ek frd ke nate.. plz..
ak-nk jiddi bhut ho gyi ho..
nk-because u skipped na.. i want ur ziddipan back.. . plz... forward his hand..
ak-oki as ur chalo... dey took permission... nk took to ak in bike.. in way ak was still not happy.. he stooped in one place his bike.. yeh kon si jagah hain i didnt come here..
nk-aao... come.. dey went inside of house.. ak sees it was oldies house.. she surprise to see all d old woman who has balloon in their hands...
all-wlcm beti...
nk-smile wlcm ak... this is surprise for u... dekha tumne ek dadi khoi but here all d dadis knows ur pain.. yaha aake tumhare pass bat kam pad jayegi but itni sari dadi ki love se ur life will be happy..
all came-haa beta hum tumhara pain jante hain.. essa dost nasib se milta hain.. hum tumhe bhut pyar denge aaogi na pe hamare pass.. hum apne pariwar dwdra thukra diye gye hain par ek alg khushi ki duniya bana li gai h.. beta dukh hona aasan hain khush rehna muskil.. haso kam se kam apne dost ke liye.. ak admire to nk..
nk came nd wiped her tears..
nk-be happy haan.. ak passed smile.. are baap re main sapna dekh raha kya..
ak-haa sapna main hi hain hum..
ek women - are beti dekho na see see... hamne yeh banaya hain gave duppata to ak.. hum banate hain ussi se hamari jivan chalta hai yaha rona mana hain... nk was seeing from door to ak.. she was happy..
nk-kam se kam hasi toh...
one women-are beta tu khada kyo hai aa baith na..
dey gave food to naksh.
ak-yum hain ye toh plz give me recepie i will make it..
wo-haa beta tu yaha aana jab jab tera man kare aur leja le.. ak sees to nk.. dey passed smile..
ak nd nk were going..
ak-i will come dadi... aapse milke khub aachi lagi mujhe.. she sat on bike.. took all things.. in way ak took hand on nks shoulder... nk drooped to ak in clg..
ak-thqnku nk tumne meri ko bhut khushi di aaj pata nhi y but jine ki new vajah mili.. i m feeling relax now..
nk-thanku unko bolte hain jo apne na ho par main toh tumhara dost hu na. ak ek aur bat puchni thi... kya tum aaj rat ko party main jane ki bajaye mere sath bunny movie dekhogi plz.. cd pe room main..
ak-bunny movie really in tengue..
nk-nhi in hindi..
ak-laugh oki oki... i will watch. . but which..
nk-i dont sees any movie u say..
ak-woh wali arya ek prem khatha. . ringa ringa. . oki we will watch in nyt bye tc..
nk was seeing to ak...
nk-bye ak... got happy nk uchlofy than mohit came..
mo-wattt. . nk kissed to mohits cheeks..
mo-ewww chi yak..
nk-kya haa.. chal natak mat kar.. i m soo happy... are haa yeh cd ki shop kaha h jaha all in one movie mile..
mo-kyo. nk- mujhe leni hain. . chal.. dey went in shop...
mo-haa woh waha milegi south doubt movie..
nk-hmm woh cd dikhana.. suddenly his phone ringing so much.. nk got irritating so much..
mo-utha le na kiski h soo me..
nk-essi hi hain chal na.. he took a cd.. in nyt nk was arranging things here nd der..
mo-main bhi dekhuga na..
nk-ha baba tu bhi dekh lena oki... ak aai nhi abhi tak..
ak was seeing dresses..
ak-meri pass ek bhi aachi dress nhi... haa nk likes indian wear na.. she wore chuddidar kurti nd jacket short. she went in nks room... nk opened to door.. . he sees to ak..
ak-hii nk..
nk-admire to her... tum Indian wear main.. means u looking nice. .
ak-thanks.. than mohit shout..
mo-aao behen ji meri. . sab taiyari ho gai hain came inside.. but room was not clean. ak sees it..
n-wohcis mohit ne kara yeh essa maxup.. hit to mohit..
mo-main ya tu haa.. chal baith.. mohit sat in side.. naksh were besides..
mohit got a call..
mo-kya... are.. hmm i m coming. . woh nk jo mere fufa g hain na yaha woh bula rahe mujhe main aata hu.. u both enjoy oki... leave... nd now naksh were alone.. movie starts nd comdey scene coming up..
nk laugh..
nk-oo god.. he is truly notanki baj... nice to watch..
ak-now dekhna na iski frd hain jo nd he will love too girl see..
laugh see my bunny... yuhuuu.. eating popcorn..
woh woh main aati hu nk..
nk-sshh baitho na.. wat u want..
ak-pani lati hu main..
nk-ohoo here hain na.. abhi dey r in lift wat will happen. .
ak-woh yaha woh nk main.. nk held her hand..
than bunny kissed to kajal nd nk skipped aks hand.. naksh felt weird so much..
nk-so this is ur bunny..
ak-dont say anything for my bunny he is my hero..
nk-aacha g... esse karte hain boy first meeting pe..
ak-watch movie na it is so nice.. dey were enjoying movie...
ak was laughing nk was seeing from side to her..
ak-oo god how many times i watched this scenes but still i m getting laugh.. she put her head on nks shoulder without thinking.. nk felt her hair touch..
ak sees to nk..
ak-woh sry.. main aati hu..
nk-hmm jabtak i stooped. . she went in kitchen.. kya ho raha mujhe essa lag raha bas uski smile ko dekhta rahu but it is not gud.. main essa kuch soch bhi nhi sakta. . sab kuch galt hain..
ak took water...
ak-y nk is seeing to me like this... i cant take it more.. she made coffee for both..
nk-it is great coffee. ..
ak-thanku... woh dadi ne sikhai mujhe.. feeling sad..
nk-so now mujhe bhi sikha do..
ak-coffee.. really..
nk-hmm.. ab hamesha tum rahogi nhi na toh khud pi lunga main bana ke..
ak-jab tumhari man hogi toh aa jana i will make for u..
nk was slight for some time..
ak-kya hui..
nk-wohhh... ak main.. his phone was ringing.. nk cut it..
ak passed smile.. again nks phone ringed so much.. nk again called..
ak-bat karlo na kiski call aai..
nk-haa.. woh bad main kar lunga movie watch kar le... dey sees..
ak-main rakh ke aati hu cup.. she stood suddenly she was unbalanced... nk caught to her. .
aah.. nk sees in her eyes..
nk-hamesha girti rehti ho.
ak-woh water aai paw main... thanku mujhe sahara deni ke liye..
nk stood to her.. .
ak took cup in kitchen.. nk was thinking..
ak-wat happened nk..
nk-khabhi khabhi yeh kyo hota hain ak jisse hum pass mehsus karte hain woh dur hota hain kyo.
ak-pass rehne ka ehsas hi badi hoti hain.. jo hamare pass hogi usse rok leni chahiye agar bas main ho toh.. time jane ke bad kuch nhi bachti.. see in movie.. kajal will feel she cant live without bunny.. pyar essi hoti h ek pal hoti jispe we can feel bas ek pal...
nk-essa hota hain kya..
ak-haa hoti hain aur jisse pyar karte na usko we cant hurt..
dey were watching movie...
its ended..
ak-now it is soo late mujhe jani hogi..
nk-itni jaldi time bit gya pata hi nhi chala.. ak chalo tum main bhi aata hu rat ko it is not gud alone jana.
ak-but main toh daily jati hu na..
nk-haa but aaj se nhi i will leave u... shecwent in scooty nd nk follow to her.. she went inside of house..
ak-bye..
nk-tc.. dey went..
next morning..
ak went in clg.. nk said hii to her.
ak-kaise ho..
nk-how r u..
ak-aachi hu txx for nyt.. i felt soo gud..
nk-ak dont be txx if mujhe frd manti ho dil se.
ak-frd ko txx nhi bol rahi bas khushi express kar rahi chale class pe..
dey were in class.. teacher came..
te-soo aaj main nhi bolugi aap sab bolege.. say.. one by one aap log kya sochte hain maa word ke bare main..
one by one all were saying..
nk sees aks tears..
te-now nk ur turn..
nk-maa woh hain jo hame samjhti hai.. jisse hum kulke bol sakte hain aur hak se khabhi gussa bhi kare woh bura nhi manti hain..
te-gud now ak u say..
ak stood..
nk-woh maam.. ak..
ak-khabhi khabhi essi bhi maa hoti hain jisse bacho ki koi chinta hi nhi hoti.. khabhi god hame maa papa toh deti but sayad unki pyar nhi deti..
te-y u saying like this ak.. maa kaisi bhi ho aachi hoti hain..
ak-no i hate mom word went from class..
te-hey watt..
nk-maam ppz. woh ak hain uski mom usse chod ke gai bina kuch kahe plz.. give time to her.. she is sad..
te-oki.. she starts reading to all.. after class ak was sat in garden..
nk sat besides of ak..
nk-gussa ho..
ak-plz ab kuch samjhao mat.. i dont waana listen..
nk-laugh.. main kya samjhau.. r u stupid...
more part coming soon...
Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago
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ak-u know everything na... maine face ki problem mom gai chodke mujhe.. i broke at that time... abba bhi khabhi nhi le gai unke pass..
nk-mujhe nhi pata tha ki yeh sab tum sochogi.. maa is maa ak.. tumne mujhe samjhaya ki maa alone feel karti tumne khabhi yeh nhi socha ki jis insan ke sath tum rehna nhi chahti baap nhi manti usko.. socho tumhari maa kaise rehti uske sath.. ak thought a little... nhi sochi na yeh bat..
ak-nhi..
nk-socho tum toh unki beti ho woh toh unki patni thi kaise rehti hogi aasan nhi hota hain yeh sab jhelna ak.. kitni dard hui hogi unko.. tum fight ka soch sakti ho.. ho sakta hain tumhari mom ka bhi koi pain ho ak.. esse nafrat mat karo aacha nahi hain... aacha tum mujhe yeh batao pehle kaha rehti thi tum..
ak-we were in chandigarh nd city school main thi main but y..
nk-are waha toh meri masi rehti hain.. esse hi tum apna ghar kaha tha bata sakti ho aas pass kuch..
ak-haa devsar colony pe the hum. . par y u asking all this..
nk-kuch nahi bas esse hi.. chale class main dont think much oki.. after clg vis took to ak..
ak was watching to vis nd remembered nks talk..
ak-abba... i waana ask one qu.. i waana know about my amma nature..
vi-watt.. after so many days u waana know her nature... she went alone didnt say anything.. she fought me always.. she dont want to attend parties with me.. daughter she never care which i said..
ak-hmmm.. . kya puchu main samaj hi nahi aati thought..
in nyt ak was thinking about it.. . than she got a call..
ak-are mohit ki call... hloo haa mohit..
nhi main nk bol raha..
ak-tumm..
nk-ak plz u will come kya today plz mujhe milo na room main i waana share about ur past mujhe kuch pata chala hain. . plz hum jo party main garden hain na waha i waana meet from u.. tumhari mom se related hain plz..
ak-kya but how u know.. i m coming nk i m coming..
she got ready nd went in pqrty searching to nk..
ak-nk.. sees to him..
nk-ak come. . dey went behind. . sat in table.. ak plz take this.. mujhe sab pata chal gai ak sab kuch. .. tumhari mom.. she was a gud women... maine apni masi ko bheja tha jaha tum rehti thi.. she went in ur school.. pehle ke record se tumhari house number mili... waha aur koi sift ho gai ak.par padosh ki ek aunty se pata chala tumhari mom ka past maine unse bat ki aunty se. phir pata chala ki tumhare papa hamesha se hi tumhari mom ko control main rakhna chahte the hamesha woh unhe party main le jate show off karte ki he is perfect hubby but yeh fight badte hue itni bad ki tumhari mummy sirf roti thi aur un aunty se hi share karti thi because dey were best frd phir ek din tumhari mummy ne tumhare papa se alg hone ka fesla kiya. unki love marriage thi haa thabhi woh kisi ko blame bhi nhi kar sakti thi par unki shaq aur batamizi ne unhe tod diya tumhari mom ke pass unhone do raste chode the ek divorce ka jo woh unhe us sart pe dete jab woh tumhe unke pass chodke jati.. sirf is liye kyoki woh aache kehlaye. . unke pass tumhe palne ke liye ek ghar bhi nhi tha aur tumhare papa unke sath life was nhi nothing kuch thi hi nhi.. so tumhare safe future ke liye she leave u dil pe pattar rakh ke.. rat bhar roi thi woh subah mil nhi pai phir bhi aunty ke pass latters aate the tumhari mom ke.. woh job karne lagi wahi pass main chandigarh ke pass.. aunty kuch din tak tumhari har bat batati thi par ek bar unhone tumhare papa ko bataya ki she waana meet u toh tumhare papa sab chod ke dusare seher sift ho gye aur tumhari mom ka dil tut gya kisi ko pata bhi nhi chala ki tum kaha gai.. phir ek din jab maine unse bat ki woh bhut khush hui par tumhari mom ki chithi aani band ho gai unhone mujhe address di jaha se latter aati hai ak.. hame jana hoga tumhari mom ke pass atleast tum unse mil paogi sayad mehsus karna khabhi khabhi hamari narfart hame kuch nhi sochne deti jo dikhta h woh hi sach lagta hai.
ak had tears to listen..
ak-i was totally wrong nk.. my mother kitni tadpi hogi na mujhe milne ko main bhi milni chahti hu unse kehni h i love her.. main kitni buri hu ki unhe samaj na pai i hate myself..
nk-yeh waqt kisi ko blam karne ka nhi yeh waqt hain apno se milne ka.. sach ak.. agar unse mila saku toh bhut khushi hogi main tumhe kal leke chaluga par tumhe kuch bahana lagana hoga agar tum milogi apni mom se ek din ek rat lagegi ak.. do din ka time mangna hoga apni dad se..
ak-main milugi jarur milugi nk... thanku held his hand i really love u tumne ek frd hoke meri dard mitai nk i m soo hapy aaj hi aaj u gave me so much happiness i dont waana loose u.. koi kuch bhi kahe i really trust u.. bhut bhut.. itni khushi meri ki tumne pata lagai meri mom ke bare main sach jo nafrat sochi woh wrong thi maa aachi hoti nd unki mamta bhi..
i will go i will go.. thanku nk.. dey were seeing eachs eyes..
nk-pata nhi ak but mujhe kya hua i cant see ur pain.. main tumhe leke jauga tumhari maa ke pass..
ak-nk hug to him.. nk was apart lill.. i m feeling so relaxed i can trust u..
nk-ak i think u should leave now hmm.. bye..
ak-tc.. she went to house... in morning ak put her cloths..
she went near of vis..
vis-gud morning ak..
ak-abba i waant ur permission..
vis-watt..
ak-abba my frd payal she is going in satsang pooja for one day..
vis-wat pooja.. mandir who is taking..
ak-her mom she is taking to her... can i go nd pray for u..
vis think a while..
vis-for many days..
ak-two days only i will come on monday...
vis-amm oki but my driver will drop u.. ak got happy.. ak it will be ur last trip if u r hiding somthing than it is ur risk but i m trusting u dont break it..
ak-abba my eyes opened now i can understand my bad or gud thing.. now i will not do any fault in my lyf.. bye.. she leave from der... she went in nks room..
nk was getting ready..
nk sees to ak..
nk-are u came ak.. wat u said to ur abba..
ak-smile i said mandir..
nk-but unko pata chal gai toh sach..
ak-mom se milne ja rahi hu pata chal bhi gai toh unke qu nhi meri qu hogi he should give ans to meee
nk-yaha se kuch hour lagegi oki than nyt pe we will come.
ak-nk ek din u was giving me teddy.. aaj i want. mujhe de do because i told u ki meri bdy bhi nhi nd kuch nhi but today i m feeling that itni close dost koi nhi thi meri jitni tum ho gai sach.. give me..
nk-ak woh teddy u want sach.. he gave to her.. i m so hpy that tumhari life pe bhi koi h jo love karti so much tumse. . really so happy for u..
ak-chale. dey leave from house... in car... ak was seeing to nk...
nk-agar bhook lage toh bata dena mujhe oki.. bas thodi der..
ak-she was watching to nk...
nk also sees her hair.. which was bollowing on air.. nk was feeling to attachment with ak..
ak-mujhse wait hi nhi ho rahi really wen we will reached..
nk-bas thodi der.. after some hour dey reached in one place..
nk-yeh hi toh hain maybe.. waaw garden.. house was in between of garden.
nk nd ak entered in that house..
someone opened to door.. .
one women was here-hmm kon..
akshara. ..
wom-kya got happy ak.. u r ak.. our ak.. suniye ak aai hain.. aao beti aao beta andar aao.. dey went inside.. sat in sofa..
ak-aunty woh yeh mera frd nk.. woh main janni thi ki meri amma yaha she was south indian.. nd meri aunty means.
wo-beta rajshree meri ghar pe rehti thi.. as a ping guest..
yahi se woh latter likhti thi apni frd ko tumhare liye puchne ko par phir tum kahi chali gai toh unhone khat likhna band kar diya..
ak-my amma howz she..
wo-beta she is no more now..
ak-main jaha jau woh mujhse alg kyo ho jate hain.. aunty hug to her..
au-beta kisi ki mot rukti toh nhi par unki latters hain u r 21 years old na..
ak-hmm..
au-beta aao.. she took inside to ak.. nk too went.. rajshree pic is der..
wo-beta yeh unki jab ki salary.. ek note tumhare liye woh kehti thi ki ek na ek din tum aaogi kojte hue unhe.. woh tumse bhut pyar karti thi beta.. opened cupboard.. see urs bdy gift har year ke liye. ak touches to all..
ak-amma... her heart fullfilled with emotions. .
i.. cant. main kya..
wo-beti pata hain kehti jab tumhara wedding hoga woh apna saree pehnayegi watch.. ak hug to saree..
nd yeh saree unko bhut aachi lagti thi.. tum ekdom unke jaisi ho.. pyari si.. i m happy ki tumne nafarat nhi ki unse.. woh darti thi ki kahi esse chod ke aane ke bad tum kya sochogi nafrat toh nhi karogi na..
ak sees to nk..
ak - essi lagti h jaise woh mujhse dur nhi bhut pass hain kya main yahi baith jau alone unki yad ki pass..
wo-haa main tumhare liye kuch bana lati hu hmm..
nk also leave.. ak was crying nd remember all old talks. .
she memorized to rj infront of her.. she was caressing her hair.
rj-tu aa gai beta teri khushi ki chah ki thi maine aur tere pyar ki bhi esse hi kelte rehna mere pass rehna beta..
ak-haa maa.. she put her head on rj... feeling so much happiness..
after sometimes nk was waiting for ak.. she opened to door.. she was in rj saree..
wo-waaw beta..
nk was felt on ak... she was looking truly gorgeous. .
wo-aao beta khana kha lo.. she sat near of nk...
ak-is saree ko pehen ke i m feeling like meri amma mere sath..
nk was still seeing to ak..
wo-are nk beta lo na.. ak was eating.. ak beta mujhe tumhe latter dene hain jo har bdy par tumhari maa ne likhi yeh unki wish hain gave all things to ak.. nk beta tumne ek maa aur beti ko mila ke bhut aacha kam kiya essa dost sabko mile.. nk got happy..
nk-sab ak se hi sikha h. . she is sach a sweet girl.. bas unse kosish ki khushi dene ko..
wo-dono khush raho...
ak-tqq aunty sach bhut aacha laga yaha aake par dukhi bhi hu unse mil nhi pai starts crying.. she hug to ak.. bas. . esse hi rahu sach ke karib... haa..
dey talked for sometime about rj..
nk-i think we should leave now ak.. it is so late..
wo-aaj ruk jate beta..
ak-nhi aunty meri abba allow nhi karegi jayada late hui than dekhegi na.. raste main ruk jayegi if late hui toh.. bye..
w-khush raho beta apni maa ki yad ke sath sab rakh liya na..
are haa pani bottle.. sees in table.. gave to her..
dey leave.. that women hubby came..
hu-are meri drink ki bottle kaha h..
wo-kon si. Table wali woh toh maine nk ak ko dedi..
men-oo know water tipe dikhti but drink hain.
nk-bye.. ak took all things.. she took one latter.. starts reading..
rj-main nhi janti yeh tum tak pahuchega ya nhi par main hamesha se chahti hu ki tum apni abba ki tipe nhi bano.. main tumhe hindi padana chahti hu because i did love marriage with ur dad.. but we didn't understand to each.. par tum jisse shadi karo ya na bhi par trust is important. . tum jisko trust karo uspe aankh band karke visvas karna kyoki jisko tumhari chinta hogi woh tumhare sath galt nhi karega..
ak got happy soo much...
ak had tears..
nk-ak yeh socho mat ki tum kuch kho di yeh socho kya pai tumne.. ur maa ki bundle of joy.. love. ab tumhare pass yeh bolne ka reason nhi ki tumhare pass kya hain sab kuch hain sab kuch hena.
ak-hmm.. nk gave water bottle to ak.. she drank it.. amm yeh kuch alg taste ki hain..
nk-hmm kya nhi it will not be.. are mujhe do he stooped to car.. took it are haa thoda ajib sa taste hain na..
ak-hmm..
nk-gum raha sur thoda..
ak-mera bhi.. suddenly rain shower came in full swim..
nk-oo god.. barish. .
ak-oo god now kaise jayegi.. suddenly lourder voice came from sky. . ak grabbed nks shirt..
ak-aahh..
nk felt her hot touch... he waana apart from ak...
nk-woh.. hame aaj rat rukni padegi.. main dekhta hu koi hotel.. he start driving..
he saw a hotel.. nd stooped to car..
nk-yaha milegi toh maybe kuch ho..
ak-dekhni padegi.. dey went inside of hotel..
ak nk took their cloths..
nk-sir we want two rooms...
men-sir i m really sry only one room is available.. if u want..
ak nk heard it..
nk-but one room ak..
ak-it is heavily raining nk atleast ek room toh lo.. yeh bhi na chali jaye..
nk-ek kam karege main bahar so jauga tum andar..
ak-oki.. dey took a room nd put their things.. nk was in washroom..
ak was wiping her hairs suddenly nk came outside nd sees aks back nd her white belly from back her wet hair..
nk-y i m seeing to ak no i have no haq on ak..
ak sees to nk..
ak-wohh.. she covered her stomach nd she packed her hair with ponytail..
ak-i m hungry..
nk-hmm chalo yaha milegi food.. dey went in hull.. dey were having.. than one waiter came..
wa-sir aap dono honeymoon pe hai kya so nice couple waha swimming pool hain visit kariye nd went..
nk-yeh kya bolte hain puchte bhi nhi..
ak-meri sar gum rahi.. i ate nk.. pool i will go.. i loved it.. she went in pool area..
nk - haa mujhe bhi lag raha thoda sar gum raha.. ak went.. nk was searching. .
ak-laughing nkkk... she was sat in side of pool.. her leg was on water..
nk-hey kya ho gya tumhe esse kyo kar rahi.. aao go for sleep..
ak-pata nhi bhut gudgudi ho rahi.. sab kuch aachi lag rahi mujhe aur tum bhi in low voice..
nk-ak... drink ki asar starts now.. nk grabbed aks hand..
ak-hey leave me na... hamesha pakad ke rakhte ho freedom bhi do na main tumhari came nd said in ears wife nhi na..
nk laugh..
nk-aacha g.. dost ho in low voice. . ak stood..
ak-ryt ryt...
ak was surrounding..
suddenly she went on pool..
ak-ammm nk... laugh..
nk sees..
nk-dekha ziddi pan ka natiza..
ak-pichi pilloudu..
nk-wat u said..
ak-mad boy.. sshh mujhe nikalo na laugh.. main toh girl gai.. nk too went in pool..
nk-main bhi aa gaya... sees aks back.. akk..
ak-hmm.. nk. u r sach a sweet boy sach..
nk pinned with ak from back.. she closed her eyes..
nk-ak.. u r so fair.. ak-wat.. turn.. tum toh mujhse bhi gori ho..
nk-gora in low voice... nks low air went on aks face..
ak-fair... 😲?
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