pritus ff ~kismat connection - 2~ pt 30(last pt) pg 45 - Page 4

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

It was hmm part..

it was good but now more of fighting..

khatam bhi karwaao nd strt frndship...

ak is weak in studies but intelligent in smartness...

Cute part but fight OMG...

Do update soon next part...

Vis ka naya roop only dictator chaahe mann ho ya naho...

Start naksh bonding soon...

Do update soon

i think u r also frustrated with naksh fight 😆 dont worry if fight nhi hogi toh pyar kaise hogi haa..
pyar ka maja isi main hain nd i didnt write this tipe of fight na 😳 so enjoy this also..
haa she is intelligent but u will get all about 😃 i will try to put some touchy moments also 😛 thanku so much for ur comments loved it 😃..
haa baba hogi na frdship puri dont be sad na 😆 vis ka bhi i will show..
i will do update soon next 😃

part-5 Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago

after class... ak was sad nd sat alone in class..
ak-aaj rat ko paise dene hain.. ek bar bat karugi main do tin din ka time mil jaye mujhe.. main washroom hoke aati hu.. she was going suddenly she sees to sima nd her frds in corner..
her frds-haa wawww.. u r great but wat u think for nk this time.. how u will demand money for him.. ak heard it..
ak-wat money nk se.. yeh bat karri kyo..
si-yes because today maine abhi class ke bad emotionally nk ko bulaya hain phir main dheere se uske pyar ko apne liye majbut karke... u know na last time video aachese banana.. than my money. . ab meri khawaish itni uchi hain toh main kya karu nd laugh. . are woh garden hain na waha bulaya hai usse.. washroom ke pass.. aati hu..
her frd-are sun..
ak-no ways.. if she do something his career will spoil.. i will warn him again. . she running near of garden.. nk.. sees to him..
nk-watt.. y u came here..
ak-dont meet from sima.. she is not gud girl..
nk-y u r not liking her.. she is sweet girl.. plz i dont wanna listen u.. woh meri frd hain sad hain. . i will help her..
ak-but money is everything for her.. usse kuch nhi chahiye bas tumhe hi woh. . she will cheat u.. pyar ki natak karke she will demand for money..
nk-wat.. lets me talk with her.. u go oki..
ak-hatooo.. she went in bathroom to sees to sima...
nk-huh.. hii sima..
si-nk i m so worried u know kya hua mere sath..
nk-wat happened tell me.. plz.. koi problem hain..
si-haa nk.. came close of nk.. i. . i. . i really love u..
nk-wat. she pinned to him with wall.. wat u doing.. main yaha is liye aaya because maine tumhe frd mana aur dard batne ko..
si-but i really love u.. jab tumhe dekha tab bhi... bhut.. held his hand..
nk-see main tumse pyar nhi karta.. skipped his hand.. dont to try to touch me oki..
si-nk u hurt me nk.. i really love u..i want haq pyar ki.give me oki.i understand ki yeh realtionship aachi nhi abhi but we will hide it..[DIV]pr-see yeh koi maajak nhi ak nhi hoti sach pata nhi chlta hame..nk say txx she is so helpfull girl..yeh nhi hoti tumara carrer barbad ho jata..essi bhi girl hain chii kud ki ijat daw pe laga di.. thanku beta... nk u r safe because of aks dareness..
si-sry sir plz..
pr-esse students ki hame jarurat nhi... sabak hain sabke liye girl ho ya boy..
ak-thanku sir can i go... she went outside...
sima came nd made face...
nk also came.. ak nk were besides..
mo-kya hua yr.. dekha sahi frd chunne chahiye girl ho ya boy..
ak-bye mohit m going.. she went..
nk-woh..
mo-bol na chali jayegi atleast txx..
nk-haa.. ak.. she stooped. . woh came close.. plz see here.. i m.. woh..
mo-bol..
nk-woh i m sry... she turned..
ak-its fine.. smile.. be careful next time.. she went..
nk-she helped me mohit.. i hurt her nd usne bola tha yr mujhe ki sima se mat milo. i showed her attitude so much..
mo-she is so sweet.. sabki help karti hain because usse raha nhi jata kisi ka bura hote dekh yeh is girl ki problem hai but khas koi iske dard ko bhi samjhata.. main kosish kiya but no she dont say me..
pata nhi par she is sad today warna woh kelti kudti rehti h.. tune toh usse bhut jayada hurt kiya hain bhut..
because party main cheap aur pata nhi kya aaj bas txx huh.. chii.. i m going stay with ur attitude oki.. he leave..
nk feeling guilty..
nk-i m bad kya.. ab main kya karta main samaj nhi paya.. she is gud one.. oki main usse bat karuga.. she sat in chair in cantin..
nk sees to her.. he sat besides of ak..
nk-hiii..
ak-kya..
nk-see main tumhe kuch bolke fasana nhi chahta.. tumne help ki maine mana.. i liked u as a frd.. mujhse frdship kar lo hii..
ak-main tumse bat hi kyo karu.. she was going..
nk-hey listen to me.. gajab hai..
she was going but nk following to ak..
ak-plz go piche kyo aa rahi..
nk-meri bat sun lo.. i waana say sry for that nyt. .
ak-no ways.. i helped to others but u hurt me no ways..
nk-suno toh..
ak-no means no.. he came in front.. i will not. .
nk-oki.. now phir go.. she was going.. nk starts dancing infront of all..
nk-thinak thinak.. oo oo oo ooo ooo... starts singing also besura..
ak-ok fine sab dekh rahi.. bolo.. but sidde..
nk-smile gud.. i waana say sry for that day.. i said so much but i was in anger.. now i can trust u that u r sweet. .
ak-ho gya..main bhoolti nhi kisi ko which dey hurt me really.. maf.. u know wats meaning of this word.. bas sry bolna dil jitni nhi hoti.. u said me bad but now u sees a gud human being on me.. ryt..
nk-haa..
ak-than prove to u also.. essa kya aachi h tumme ki tumse frdship karu main.. if kuch dikhi na toh main mafi bhi de dungi aur dosti karuga bhi but prove u.. attitude hai bas aur hain kya tumme tell me.. nothing na.. nk was numb.. meet me that day wen u will win my heart oki.. bye.. be careful nd tc..
nk-main bura hu.. really nhi i m gud one.. oki jo bhi hu but frdship karke rahuga really.. i promise u..??
so wat will happen next.. plz press like button if u like this part nd leave comment.. if u will give soon comments i will write so soon ff..
thanku sry for mistake..
precap-ak nk frdship starts but how.. 😲 Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago

nice part.. nk is a good student that's I like very much.. mohit character is so interesting 😊ak poor girl can't live her life the way she want.. naksh fight is like endless but I like nk anger.. I like golgappa fight too...precap is interesting.. ak will definitely save nk do update next part soonEdited by Pragati-naksh - 6 years ago

Wat was ak problem ND past I wanna know
So much drama for sima OMG wat a trap plan
But good that finally nk to came to know who is wat. ..
He wanna do frndhsip with ak. .
I liked last part so much..
Ak words u have only attitude haha.. .
Masth fighting horahi lol. ..
I really want to know how nk proves ND gets ak frndship.. .
Do update tomorrow next part. . Waiting.. .

Originally posted by: Pragati-naksh

nice part.. nk is a good student that's I like very much.. mohit character is so interesting 😊ak poor girl can't live her life the way she want.. naksh fight is like endless but I like nk anger.. I like golgappa fight too...precap is interesting.. ak will definitely save nk do update next part soon

thanku so much dear late comments haa koi bat nhi 😳 u loved this part m so hpy..
haa he is gud but fight karta hai... haa dont worry i wrote na full part..
thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it 😳..
i updated part

Originally posted by: _nakshi_

Wat was ak problem ND past I wanna know
So much drama for sima OMG wat a trap plan
But good that finally nk to came to know who is wat. ..
He wanna do frndhsip with ak. .
I liked last part so much..
Ak words u have only attitude haha.. .
Masth fighting horahi lol. ..
I really want to know how nk proves ND gets ak frndship.. .
Do update tomorrow next part. . Waiting.. .

past hihi pqta chalegi na baba 😉. . haa nk knew it now his tapasya starts 😆.. haa u liked na 😳 fight i learned now how to write fight 😆 thanku so much dear for reading this ff nd ur lovly comments loved it totally. .
haa ho jayegi haa i will write next part aaj hi oki 😳

keh du tumhe ya chup rahu dil main mere aaj kya hain jo bolo toh janu guru tumko janu chalo yeh bhi wada hai..

part-6
nk was in class... ak was studying...
mo-oye likh na udar kya dekh raha..
nk-kuch nhi. . ek bat puchu. . ak ko kya pasand hain bata na mostly kis tipe ke logo ko woh pasand karti hain..
mo-she like helping boy.. like jo usse chede nhi aur kisi ka dil na dukhaye aur jo sweet ho caring ho bas..
nk-laugh wat r u like that because u r not this tipe of boy..
mo-oye khud ko dekh pehle. .
nk-m best u dont know but nk essa hain jisse koi bhi apna frd bana lega see
main ak ko apna frd bana ke rahuga..
mo-means tu attitude main usse frd banayega ..
nk-stupid.. hit on his head.. mujhe pata toh hain nhi kon bura hain kon bhala par i liked one thing ki maine itna bura kaha usse phir bhi do bar meri help ki.. bhut aacha lga yeh soch ke.. sima ko frd mana but she was not gud but ak usse main fight kar sakta hu like u tease kar sakta hu nd woh tere tipe frdship nibhayegi because jab dusmani nibha sakti hain toh. .
mo-mere dost ka ek aacha dil bhi hain pata nhi tha mujhe.
nk-laugh bhut kuch hain aacha u wont understand.
mo-jaisa bhi hu tera frd hu oki. chal ghar.. rat ko party main aayege.. in outside ak was waiting for vis..
nk-hii to ak.. ghar ja rahi..
ak-kya.. leave me plz mere abba is coming.. he will not like that m talking with a boy plz.. if u want my bhalai na leave me alone plz.
nk-par y u fearing so much.. i waana only say bye na..
ak-bye oki.. . she went near of vis car.. nk was seeing.. wats her problem yr.. really i waana know wat she shows which is not she.. kuch problem toh hain jisse woh kisi ko batati nhi but problem main toh hain na woh.
ak went with vis..
ak-abba can i go mandir now.. u drop me der... i will do pooja nd come in house in one hour..
vis-which pooja... tell properly..
ak-actually i prayed for u today u had meeting na.. so i prayed that u get this deal.
vis-thats so sweet.. i liked liked that u understood me now. daughter i dont want to hurt u but i want to control on u. . ur lyf. i waana know wat is happening in ur lyf u should say all to me...
ak-abba u cant know all wat is happening in my lyf... i said all but if u will do a deal with me than it will not a realtion of daughter nd father..
vis-dont to try spoil my mood oki... i will drop u in mandir.. dont make my amma.. u have only one hour than i will take u from mandir...
ak-thankuu... he dropped to her in mandir... she went in dadis house..
dadi dadi i really miss u now a days..
da-kaisi hain meri bachi..
ak-m oki..
da-kya hua bata... u r upset pehle wali ak nhi lag rahi meri..
ak-dadi can i use ur scooty.. i will go hospital. . waha money deni hain mere ko..
da-puch rahi pagli key le aur ja par khana kha ke ja.. u r hungry i know..
ak-u r world bestest dadi... give me oki.. she was having lunch..
amm best chapati i never eat.. only juice fruits nd upma.. i cant eat gupchup no chat nd all.. boring food..
da-samaj nhi aata tumhare papa ke liye sab kuch deal kyo hain..
ak-dont say.. i dont waana listen anything.. i have no respect for my abba. main aata oki..
da-aati hu baba..
ak-haa wai.. she went in hospital. . doctor kaisa hain woh.
do-gud asking for u only.. uski dad mom aa gai..
ak-thank god is dey r rich..
do-dey r so poor. woh rahe... she went in room..
ak-kaise ho..
boy-aacha hu didi apne mujhe bacha liya kya hota mera.. mere papa ka chota sa chai ki dukan hain..
ak-dont say na meri farz thi yeh i m so happy that i helped u.
his mom dad-beta tumhe har khushi mile.. par hamare pass paise nhi dene ko aur yeh mang rahe..
hum dheere dhere karke chuka denge..
ak-i have.. bhale bad main aap log de deni mujhe oki.. i m talking take care oki..
doctor mere pass itni money hain bas two days ki time i want phir i will give money all..
do-amm thik hai aadhe ho gye two days ka time de raha because i can trust u.. but uske bad i want money all..
ak-thanku so much... that boy parents heard it..
pe-thanku beta jiti raho.. khub khush raho..
ak-my pleasure.. aap chinta mat kariye jab bhi de sako de dena oki.. nd no bhi chalegi.. m going my time got over..
she went mandir again..
vis took to him..
in house..
vis-we will watch movie.
ak-i dont waant aba..
vis-but i want to see how a daughter respect his father. u will see in that movie..
ak was watching it..
in nks room.. dey got ready for party..
nk-main kaisa dikh raha.
mo-bandar nd laugh.
nk-hey.. hit to him.. jayada udd mat na.. tu toh pura bhalu hain.. main bhut cute nd smart hu oki..
mo-gore rang pe na ittna guman kar gora rang do din main dal jayega..
nk-uuuff.. kaha tera dost ban gya main huh.. aacha teri frd aayegi kya party main.
mo-dont know bat nhi hui meri..
nk-kuch poocho toh pata rahega hi nhi tumhe.. pagal chal..
dey went in party...
mohit was enjoying in party but not nk.. he waana see to ak..
mo-oye chal na dance karege..
nk-man nhi ho raha yr. ek hour ho gya..
mo-toh..
nk-kuch nhi... tu ja.. kya hua yr ak aai kyo nhi aaj.. i really want to show ki main aacha hu.. hum frd ban sakte hain..
in room... ak was thinking..
ak-my ring also i lost... uff.. kya karu main ki paise mile... haa bagal main bholu hain usse read karau aur advance..
in party..
nk-mohit..
mo-haa tu call kar aur puch is she coming or not..
nk-oki.. he called to ak..
ak-hloo..
mo-tum aa rahi ya nhi.. we r missing u..
ak-no i cant come today... mohit i have small works plz i chat u latter..
bye..
mo-bye woh nhi aa rahi..
nk-watt.. but y..
mo-she didnt tell me.. i m going bye..
nk-mohit mujhe nind aa rahi main ja raha hu oki. bye... chii...
he went..
ak was seeing to vis from Windows of her room..
ak-party drink.. khas abba samaj pati ki main bhi time chahti hu sath baith ki movie dekhna clg lani time spend nhi karni hoti.. love is everything...
in morning ak got ready for clg... vis drop to her.
nk sees nd felt anger..
nk-ak..
ak-wat..
nk-i waana ask u something..
ak-watt..
nk-uff y u so ziddi.. i really dont like it..
ak-phir lad lo mujhse hain na aati nhi aur kuch..
nk-hey dont fight ruko.. bat puri karni hain mujhe..
ak-tell.. i have other works also..
more part coming soon.. Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago

nk-y u didnt come in party.. u know main white shirt pehen ke gya.. kitna pyara lagta hu usme main aur tum aai hi nhi..
ak-watt tumhari white shirt dekh ke main.. u have no brain kya.. frdship esse nhi hoti.. usme dosti nibhani dil jitni hoti hai..
nk-how tell me than..
ak-dost ki sadness our sadness nd help karni others ki koi paresani ho pucho mat usse dur karni yeh sab hoti hai.. but u wont understand... never.. hamara frdship hoga bhi nhi.. she leave..
nk-essa bolo na hogi na baba hogi.. laugh.. he was going suddenly he sees to one girl.. she was taking book from floor.. nk helped her..
that girl-tqqq..
nk-my pleasure... ak sees it.. hey ak..
ak-wat..
nk-frds.. i helped her..
ak-mujhe dikhani jo thi hena..
nk-i really helped her.. show nhi karni na mujhe.. zid zid bas maine help ki but no value he went.. ak laugh..
ak-stupid... dey attand to class... teacher asked one qu.. nk gave ans..
ak sees to him.. he passed smile..
ak-donkey read karti hai but dimag nhi..
in break.. ak was making notes..
ak-samaj hi nhi aati mujhe yeh.. kaise complete karu.. haw.. pur her head on book..
nk-u want help..
ak-noo...
nk-but i will do show me hey i read it.. multiply karo isse aur yeh isme main less karo than u will get ans..
ak-really.. she did it.. laugh.. wawww.. gave hand but took it back.. i didnt tell na for help y u did..
nk-hehe.. wen maine nhi mangi thi y u helped me.. warn kar rahi hu but kiya tha na so i did also. . bye..
ak-smile.. stupid hain but sweet bhi thanku.. nk came..
nk-wat u waana say txx..
ak-m going oki.. smile..
nk-yuhuuu dil jit raha main.. ak turned nd sees to nk.. after class ak was waiting for vis..
nk-i waana ask one qu..
ak-bolo..
nk-party main aaogi..
ak-dont know maybe no.. bye... she went..
nk-huh.. made sad face..
mo-oye aaj tu dikh nhi raha kya hua..
mo-nothing chale..
mo-kya..
dey went in house... in house ak went near of vis..
a-abba i waana ask permission from u..
vis-tell..
ak-abba can i give coaching to chinnu our neghiour. . it will improve my knowledge too..
vis-u can give but he has a big brother in house.. so sees to other house chinnu no possible. .
ak-but abba i m not like this tipe of girl.. . u have no trust on me..
vis-i have trust but u r young girl.. i cant trust on ur age got it..
went ak too went in her room.. she throwed her all things here nd der..
ak-samajhni toh hain nhi unhe meri problem only shaq yeh nhi karni woh nhi karni.. main kya itni buri hu..
in room mohit got ready..
mo-chal..
nk-mujhe nhi aana. .
mo-kyo..
nk-esse hi m not feeling gud... mohit understand..
mo-oki.. he called to ak.. hey hii ak r u coming..
ak-haa mohit m not feeling happy so i m coming..
mo-oki.. meet in party.. nk heard it..
nk-kya hua main ready hoke aata hu..
mo-aacha g hmm hmm... chal aa... dey got ready nd went in party..
mo-hiii yeh hain mera frd nk.. he also waana join our gang..
all-hiii..
nk-hiii... to all than ak came in full gown... she looking simple yet beautiful..
nk-hii ak..
ak-hii to all.. sab kaisi ho.. main nhi aa pai yesterday i was busy..
nk-wat happened tell na..
ak-aao na dance karte hai game zone main chalte hain..
she was playing games...
one boy-mujhe yeh game kelna aata hi nhi.. koi batayega..
nk told all..
boy-thankuu..
mo-ak tum kisi problem main ho toh sachi tell na..
ak-nothing mohit..
mo-nk is changing a little bit for u.. u know usne kisi ki help nhi ki but now woh kar raha nd woh sach main frdship karna chahta hai tumse..
ak-i m worried. . mujhe problem nhi usse koi bhi but ek bat dosti ho jati hain karte nhi na.. that day honi hogi ho jayegi frdship.. how i will trust him batao..
mo-u na.. chalo. .
ak-aati hu oki.. she was thinking about vis talk.. kya main sach main itnni buri hu..
no u r gud one said nk nd sat besides of ak..
ak-i didn't ask u.. u said me cheap na..
nk-because i dont know now i knew that u r gud.. problem batane se slove ho jati hain..
ak-tum sab jante ho na than tell me wats my problem..
nk-ofcourse money.. us boy ke liye hena ak was surprised..
sachi kahi na maine.. dusare ke paresan ho sakti ho but keh nhi sakti.. maine tumhe frd mana hain yeh tumhare upar hain batao ya nhi mujhe.. sayad kuch kar saku paise nhi toh atleast way hi bata dunga..
ak-aacha main choching dene ko boli abba said dont go in other house because he shaq on me batao kya karu..
nk-smile bas itni si problem.. us bache ko apni ghar bula lo.. u can do na..
ak-are yeh toh socha hi nhi..
nk-yes.. ur me both problem r same.. hum dono gussa karte hai help nhi chahte kisi se bh8 but tumne yeh ehsas dilaya ki share karne se problem slove ho sakti hain.. think m coming..
ak felt lill dif nd happy..
ak-pal bhar main aai aur itni badi bat boli.. aachi lagi sun ke.. aaj tak maine help ki others ki first time i share my problem nd got solutions bhi.. suddenly she sees to nk.. he was beating to waiter..
ak runned..
nk-how u did sach a big mistake haan..
ak-nk.. she slapped him.. he was shocked.. i thought u getting changed but no u cant change.. amir hoke garib pe hath uth rahe. . i hate u..
nk-tumhari himat kaise hui mujhe marne ki.. reason jan leti na.. i changed to me because reason of u.. pehle fark nhi padta tha mujhe now padta hain.. issne batamizi ki us girl ke sath so i beat him.. but tum yeh soch chuki ho ki main bura hu so i m bad hi. . oki fine dont do frdship with me oki.. bye..
he went..
ak felt guity so much..
ak-mohit woh nk se sry..
mo-abhi gusse main woh nhi sunega but main samjhauga usse hmm.. be happy oki..
ak-hmm.. . dey returned to house.
next morning ak asked for choching nd vis said fine..
she was happy..
ak-waaw he said yes.. i will say txx to nk.. i got advance also..
main pehle jaldi se mandir ke bahane paise de deti hu doctor ko..
she went in hospital. .
ak-sir yeh lijiye paise..
do-but payment toh ho chuki..
ak-wat kisne di..
do-wahi jo us din tumhare sath tha na ussi ne rat ko aaya aur de di..
ak-really.. thankuuu.. she went in her house.. vis dropped to her in clg..
she sees to nk. ..
ak-hey.. nk..
nk-wat..
ak-gusse main ho.. paise lo..
nk-for wat..
ak-esse hi.. jab frd help karti kisi ki toh ans nhi puchte hain na..
nk-wat frd.. i did because mujhe laga payment karni chahiye.. main yeh money tumse nhi lunga because woh tumhara kuch nhi tha.. maine bhi aachai ke liye uski help ki.. tumhe dost mana thabhi uski help ki.. but u slapped me..
ak-hey hisab barabar.. u hurt me i hurt u now frds.. gave hand..
nk-na karu toh..
ak-bai main toh chipaku hu u know it.. jab tak nhi mani tumhe main utak baitak kar lu..
nk-ok start karo.. do..
ak-really..
nk-yes ur punishment hi na.. do.. she was doing up down grabbed ears..
oki 5 6..
ak-hey..ho gai now my turn for that day. . punishment i will give..
nk-aacha itna tadpaya mujhe frdship karne ko main kuch nhi karuga..
ak-oki hisab kitab hui now frds.. gave hand..
nk-oki frdsss.. smile..but u will say all problems to me..
ak-main sart pe dosti nhi karti.. frdship hui hain god ke upar hain jaisi bhi ho oki.. tc.. she was going suddenly her duppata atkofy from behind.. nk chodo yeh kya majak hain..? 😲. .
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precap-ak nk got a chance to perform in stage.. Edited by ruchinaksh - 6 years ago