Shear Beauty!
It was perfect, be it story-wise or dialogue-wise.
You've weaved the emotions so effortlessly that it felt real!
I'm a north Indian, so I loved that it had Hindi dialogues (easier for me to understand otherwise I always have to sit with Google Translate app😆)
I also loved that in the end he didn't revive his memory, like I had been expecting rather you gave a more fitting and realistic closure. That clearly meant that what if he had his memories stored in his brain, it was his heart that held love for her.
Do bring more and more stories on them.
Keep writing and I request you to please pm me whenever you update next.
Love,
Swarnima.
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