PraNushka LS : Don't Love Me!/ Scene edits on PAGE 39/4th Sep - Page 2

Kaushi, what a start ! 👍🏼

Hello 😊 I've been a silent reader of Bahubali thread and have read many of your wonderful write ups. You write so beautifully !

This was a brilliant start..eagerly waiting for the next chapter 👍🏼

Originally posted by: RyReyFics

This is really interesting and a great start! I wonder why Vivaan's so depressed and withdrawn? And the portrait of the beautiful woman in the end... who could it be? Poor Shruti... she loves him a lot... but his indifference is killing her... and yet she comes back only because she loves him... can't wait to get to the bottom of this! Do continue soon. This was great. 

Originally posted by: sri_divya

Nice go
Im eager to know who's the woman in the portrait

Originally posted by: poetic

Kaushi, what a start ! 👍🏼

its really fun getting to read these stories and imagining DS in the various roles. Very intriguing.

The start is beautiful, gives us a glimpse into Vivaan's life and perspective. of course, yearning to know more. 

Pl update soon.🤗

Originally posted by: tweetie19

Hello 😊 I've been a silent reader of Bahubali thread and have read many of your wonderful write ups. You write so beautifully !

This was a brilliant start..eagerly waiting for the next chapter 👍🏼

https://youtu.be/hZlxQBpPyOc

Fabulous start ...I am definitely in...curious to know the identity of the lady in pic.

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Kaushi! I loved the first chapter so much! I am a sucker for angst, and this angst-ridden, mysterious Vivaan is really appealing to me. Poor Shruthi, though. Please do update soon! And PM me when you do, please! Can't wait for more.