ss on tanshi (dharkan))completed ,updated last part at page no 5

Hello 😆 me write a short ss on tanshi to increase forum activity 😃 it's not too good but phir bhi hope everyone like it if some mistake happen to ignore it please 😊
A story start from a beautiful girl sit down in room with teary eyes and asked god about what has written in her faith actually that girl name is tanuja . She is simple,bubly cute and beautiful girl 20 years old girl live in a small village of punjab.
On other hand a cute young handsome boy live in Mumbai sleeping in room but can't able to sleep because of a girl dream and that girl voice continuesly rang in his ears. He tried to sleep but can't be able he continuously said in sleepy condition please don't cry please don't cry mein bachao ga tumhe kasam tere pyaar ki and wake up with sudden jerk take breath fastly and shout dad dad and his dad come running towards rishi's room. rishi mere puttar kya hua to thik to hai and give water to rishi and he drink water in one breath.
papaji wo mein phir sy wahi larki dakhi rishi puttar to pehly shaant ho mein janta ho tune phir wahi khawab dakha to bus preshan na ho mein janta ho k tumhe bachpan sy yahi khawab tang kr rha hai god knows k iska kya raaz hai but pandit only told us that k jab tum 23 k ho jao gy to tumhari zindagi mein koi aye ga jo tufaan ly kr aye ga or tumhari zindagi badal jaye gi and both hug each other. Putar to ab mood acha kr or jaldi ready ho ja hummy shadi pr jana hai punjab or waha to mere liye ake sundar si rishi said loudly papaji you mean mere liye ake maa pasand kr lo wao and his father hit on his head oye khote sharam kr mein tere liye larki pasand krny ka kah rha ho or to mere liye biwi dhonde rha hai khote teri maa to bachpan hi mein expired ho gye thi ake accident mein ab to hi mere zinda rahne ka sahara hai to janta hai na to meri zindagi hai jaan hai meri mein chahta ho k to jald shadi kr ly rishi hug him tightly acha mere baap but i don't want to marry soon you know kitni larkiyo k dill toot jaye gy abhi to meri pori life pari hai
Suddenly a young boy came running and horrified both and then hug them from back that boy is manpreet rishi ka chota bhai uff ap dono ye kya kr rhy ho dad and my cute bro both hit mp and said ye kabhi nai thik ho ga mp said mein aisa hi rho ga dad kya bhai ny phir wahi larki dakhi wah bhai ye kon hai hummy bhi btao rishi said chup kr or ab tayar ho hummy punjab jana hai or shayad waha hummy nai maa bhi mil jaye rishi run from there and raj run after him to beat and mp laughing to see them
Next :- they go to punjab and rishi feel strange to see a room and feel atraction towards it.Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 6 years ago

So basically its the punar janam of Rishi and Tanuja? Really good start , waiting for the next part. Edited by Lornab - 6 years ago

Good starting. It means rano is dead on this ss 🤣 well done

Love it soo much and best thing is there is no rano.Please continue.

Originally posted by: Lornab

So basically its the punar janam of Rishi and Tanuja? Really good start , waiting for the next part.

Thanks for liking but it's not punar janam of tanshi it's first janam of them actually i am getting free from my exams so sub ko dakh kr mara bhi dill kiya ake heart connection story likhne ka to jo mind mein aya likh diya it's only short ss it consist on only five to six updates it's not like that good but thanks for liking

Originally posted by: mommyangel55

Good starting. It means rano is dead on this ss 🤣 well done

Thanks for liking ya i end the problem of our irritation   😆

Nice starting 👍🏼update soon

When is the next one update... 😉

Thanks for liking and commenting guys i update next part soon 😊

Part:- 2
Next mp ,raj and rishi arrived at the wedding house. Raj yelo hum puhanch gaye hummy yahi pr shadi k liye ana tha. Rishi but papaji ye kis ki shadi hai rajji Putar wo hamare business partner k beta ki shadi hai or wo mare bachpan ka dost bhi hai ary khoto ab chalo sari kahani yahi btao kya and they start walking towards the haveli which is very big and beautiful.
In room tanuja's heart beat getting faster and she stood up from bed and running towards window or start finding something and said kon or achanak buhat speed sy hawa chalna shoro ho gaye due to which her hairs covered her face. Rishi feel like someone is calling him and he suddenly looked at the window where a girl is standing but didn't see her face and he just looking at that girl with so much love and his heart beat also goes faster. Tanuja also didn't see rishi because their is so much dust due to strom. Suddenly mp call rishi bhai and other side ahana call tanuja di both turn their faces to see who call them. Mp bhai kya kr rhy ho andar chalo tufaan ane wala hai chote wo dakh bhai kya dakho koi nai waha he drag him inside. Ahana hug tanuja tightly with teary eyes di to kis ko dhond rhi hai koi help krny nai aye ga hummy yaha sy bhagna pry ga warna wo cheap pawan tere sy zabrdasti shadi kr ly ga and both start crying
Fb start. .. tanuja is a cute and smart girl have sweet mother sharda and lovely father rajeeve Khurana and a cute younger sister ahana and they lived happily in small house. Tanuja is comming from Mumbai after completing her studies. She came to meet them every one is happy to saw tanuja because she is the jaan of village every one loves her. Everyone celebrating her success but suddenly pawan came their with goons and said Mr Khurana to sold his house warna mein khud ly lo and tanuja came between them and tightly slapped him and insult pawan which hurts his ego but he mesmerized to see her beauty and falling in love with her.He asked her for marriage and in return wo sub kuch chor dy ga but tanuja's father slapped him again or ordered him to leave but he came in a stromy night again killed her parents and brought her and his sister along with him in haveli for marriage and no one in village do smothing because of fear fb ends. Ahana in crying voice di meine tujhe kaha tha bhag ja tanuja nai mein nai bhag skti warna wo tujhe mar dy gy mein pehly hi sub kuch khoo chuki ho ab or nai but aj mujhe aisa laga jaisy koi apna aya hai mere dill ki dharkano ny kuch mahsoos kiya but di kon hamari help kry ga sub us kaminey pawan sy darta hai tanuja cup ahana face and said koi aye ga apna wada Nibhaane apni kasam ko pora krny mujhe yakeen hai humne kasam khai thi ake dusry k pyar ki kasam hai us pyar ki wo zaror aye ga me belive in god and both hug each other. Rishi feel strange connection to see a room he start walking towards that room
Kya rishi tanuja ko bcha sky ga or kya wo dono mil sky gy stay tuned hope you all of you like my story if some mistake happen so ignore it.Edited by ManazzaShahid12 - 6 years ago