FF: Masoom Mohabbat (Eng subs) Ch 21 posted 12/08/2018 - Page 6

Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by mishtimohabbat




Hey Avi!!
How are you hun?! I thought you might be upset with me or sth.. coz I have messaged you asking for link to Ch11 for sooo long ! I didn;t know how else to let you know but anyhow glad to see you here..

Hope you had a good break ...are you still off from work?


Thank you for coming on board with my little story..hope you like it

i never get mad 😆 it is a waste of time 😉
i get even 😆 much more efficient use of resources 🤣
anyway i had a computer crash on the first day of vacation so i was out of touch for so long
i did catch up with the story after coming home
ch 11? i sent it 😲
comment is pending
needless to say i loved it
waiting eagerly for more 😳
Posted: 6 years ago
I had bookmarked it, but got busy before I could start it, reading it now.
am not on blog or wordpress so commenting it here.

Part 1

that was an awesome start..the language with the mitti di khushboo, the unfolding of the characters through the simple, yet realistic conversations..the update left a pleasant feeling reading the contented Handa family.
It reminded me of another story to relate with their simple and happy life.
and the vibrant and energetic Geet, loved her reply "Kya hua agar main jal gayi kamse kam jal kar meethi toh rahungi na Amma" Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 6 years ago
Posted: 6 years ago
Congrats for the new story
Posted: 6 years ago
any possibility of an update?
Posted: 6 years ago
Part 2

loved the bonding of Geet, Meet and Roop..
Geet's character is lively like a flowing spring water..the words of wisdom she innocently puts through are so thoughtful and meaningful..that knack of touching the hearts with such simple words.
Posted: 6 years ago
Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September! 
Here is a link to catch up:



Posted: 6 years ago
Here is a small teaser with a hint on the upcoming nokh- jokh of our Maan and Geet... 

Chapter 8 teaser


Posted: 6 years ago
Originally posted by mishtimohabbat


Not sure, if anyone noticed but updated Chapter 7 already on 29th September! 
Here is a link to catch up:




didn't know...thanks 4 link 
Posted: 6 years ago
chap 7 - fascinating update! well written! loved how u described the rituals! dadi is nice!  Geet n Maan argue yet again n Meer intervenes! Haider wants 2 talk 2 Meer! Maan offers 2 arrange! love dadi! Haider teases Maan! update soon
Posted: 6 years ago
Chapter 7 was hilarious...
Loved sherni geet .. n dust maan
Aww cute maaneet moments

Teasing teaser
Please update soon

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