MB+ZY: Mehbeer And Zaya Love Story - Page 7

movie scene was so cute.surprising that abeer proposed meter.what will she say?missed zaya

Chp 12

Abeer: I love you Meher

She opens her eyes and looks at him, she gets down the car, he too gets down the car, she walks a little further. Zain and his friends weren't there anymore.

Abeer: what happen Meher? R u ok?
Meher: how can u love me? Don't u think it's too soon.



He goes and stands in front of her and cups her cheeks which were wet from tears.
Abeer: I can't see your pain since the day u came in college, don't u remember when u couldn't hear and used to cry? I got pained as well, I helped u just to see u smiling and happy, when pranks were played on u, I couldn't bear that also, I fought with my brother's friends just for u, don't u think its love?



Meher: no, it's just friendly closure
Abeer: no it's love

Suddenly she keeps her arm around his neck unknowingly and he too holds her waist, they didn't realize what they were doing. They join their foreheads and stare into each other's eyes.

Suddenly it starts raining and she parts away from him and gets happy seeing rain. She opens her arms, they both get wet, Abeer just stares at her as she looked beautiful. He lifts her up on a height and she enjoys the rain even more.

Zain drops everyone home and goes to Alia's house and rings the doorbell, her mother opens the door and allows him in. She calls Alia and on seeing him, anger boils in her.
Zain: I need to talk to Alia alone.
Alia: but I don't want to talk, just go
A.mom: Aloo don't be so rude, Zain, u can talk to her.

They go to garden, it was raining, they sit on the swing.
Alia: what did u come here for?
Zain: to apologize for my behavior
Alia: oh, go ahead, apologize as much as u want because now u won't get forgiveness, enough is enough.

She stands up and was about to go but he pulls her back. They have an eye lock and get drenched in rain.



Kuchh kam roshan hai roshni
Kuchh kam geeli hain baarishein
Kuchh kam lehrati hai hawa
Kuchh kam hain dil mein khwahishein
Tham sa gaya hai, yeh waqt aise, tere liye hi thehra ho jaise

Zain: I am sorry, let's become friends again, or maybe more than that.

She keeps looking at him and turns to him, they get close, she keeps her hands on his shoulders and he holds her waist. Their face drew closer and closer, their lips were inches apart.

The sky gives a lightning thunderstorm and she hugs him.

Zain: relax, it's nothing.

She parts away slowly.
Zain: I want to apologize for my behavior, sorry Alia, really sorry, but I really love you

The sky again gives a lightning thunder and the screen freezes.


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago

Very nice update

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Nice update
Abeer confessing to meher
Her not believing at first
But then their wee moment in rain bringing them closer
As for Zain he went to apologise
Again the rain works its magic n brings alia closer to zain
Looking forward to seeing what's comin next
Thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

hope meher too accepts abeer.their eye lock was passionate. rain scene was sweet.zain apologizing to alia was lovely. he confessing his love to her was unexpected. what will be her reply?rain scene was very passionate. beautiful song selection. I enjoyed it more because of the pictures. please put pictures like this always 

Abeer and meher romantic moments...

zain sounds like a coward...

Chp 13

Abeer puts Meher back on floor and she just looked at him amused of his earlier act.
Meher: u do anything to make me happy na?
She asked smilingly.
Abeer: umm maybe because I got attached to u.
Meher: no, u really love me, I can see it in your eyes, u have done so much for me since the starting, u know what? Even I love u, tum itni assurance dete thay mje, mere sabse achhe dost bnay tum, mje motivate kiya tumne, main sun nh pati thi, tum ne vo mushkil bhi door krdi, mje koi kuchh bhi kahay, tum mje support krte thay, apne bhai k friends se or apne bhai se bhi larai krli mere liye, mera itna khayal rakhtay thay tum, main kaise na karti tumse pyar?

She said lovingly encircling her arms around his neck looking deep in his eyes while he held both her waists and joined their foreheads together.
Meher: I love u Abeer
Abeer: I love u too

They have a hug, a very tight hug, he lifted her during the hug and laid her on the roof of the car. He lays beside her.
Meher: ye kuchh ziada hi romantic nh hogaya?
She asked teasingly. He smiled knowingly.
Abeer: I m having fun.
Meher: we're already drenched, let's go back to our house, else we'll catch cold.
She says and they get down from above the car and sits inside the car, and this time she kept her head on his shoulder.
Meher: u made my day
Abeer: u too.

Zain and Alia stare at each other in the rainy night standing in the garden of her house, she was finding the answer.
A: umm Zain, we'll talk later, it's too soon.
Z: tell me soon.

She nods and goes inside and dries her hair recalling Zain's words. She didn't think a lot and changed her clothes, and slept. Next day in college, Zain and Alia meet.
Z: so what u thought about the yesterday's confession?
A: we're not even friends, first we should get to know each other, then we'll think.
Z: so u want that we become friends again?
A: u tell? I broke our friendship because of u
Z: umm ok.

They shake hands.

Zain goes to his friends while Alia goes to her friend circle.
A: hi guys. Sorry I couldn't come tomorrow.
Nisaar: even I couldn't.
Sasha: me also.
Meher: but I came and we had lots of fun

She says blushing. The new girl Sneha comes to them.
Sn: can I join?
Abeer: yes

She sits with them.
Sneha: hi I am Sneha Manish from Patna.
Meher: welcome Sneha

Everyone welcomes her.
Abeer: so u were saying something about fun? Meher
Meher: ohh haha nothing, I was talking about that horror movie and ur predictions.

She laughs. She tells them everything and they burst into laughter.
Sasha: nice comedian
Nisaar: my joker
Sneha: my new friend
Aliya: my enemy's brother
Meher: my love

Everyone looks at Meher in confusion and she looks down.
Abeer: r u all done with ur description?
He said laughingly looking at Meher. She glares at him.

mehbeer confession was romantic. zaya becoming friends. waiting for their love story.New character sneha.wonder what twist she will bring

Awesome update