Posted:
7 years ago
You have again and again proven to be an exceptional writer and this chapter re-establishes the fact.
Because, no where in this chapter, except for the last few lines you have written directly about
Arnav's feelings on the whole issue. But still, in each line, each word I could feel his phantom pain.
Usne apane dil pe jo paththar rakha hai wo feel ho jata hain.
He is finally letting her go, from his life, the forced and stifling marriage and from his house. And it's
necessary for him too. It's his penance on one hand and on the other hand, it will clarify things to
Khushi.
Purani jaharili yaade ukhad gaai to fir new healthy feelings can take root!!
Really looking forward to next chapter. Write soon please!!