FF: JANE DIL ME KABSE HE TU...!!! Updated @page 46 - Page 4

Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by -meru-


Wohoo lovely  ;) great. Updt sooon
Thank you. will continue soon 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by silla


Wow this is really awesome can't wait for next update :))
Thank you so much. Glad you like it 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by ganganavya


Awww my cutipies . loved their first meet.love them sooo much .I could just see them in front of me 
Thanks alottt. will continue soon 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by JutheeAlam


Awww so cute update ... Continue jaldi jaldi ...
Thank you so much 
Posted: 7 years ago
CONTINUE... 
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Next morning, there was a puja in Mishra house. Everyone were sitting infront of mandir where panditji was reciting mantras. Anant's eyes were searching navya. He was in his off white color kurta pyjama. Navya enters from kitchen. She was in her yellow color anarkali suit. He was just mesmerized looking at her. Navya gave prashad thali to meeta. Everyone gets up for arti. Ritika distributes flowers amongst all when Anant drops it from his hand. They both bends to take it when their heads hit 
RITIKA - ouch 
ANANT - oh so sorry ritika. Do you hurt it? 
RITIKA - no it's ok 
Ritika looks at Anant and smile while Anant was busy in his own. She goes from there towards Ranbir. 
RANBIR - ritu.. Mujhe thoda jyada dena 
Ritika fakes smile. She handed whole basket to Ranbir and goes from there. Ranbir looks at her and smile in disbelief. The puja came at its end. Everyone were sitting in hall 
OM - so.. Aaj ka kya program he? 
SUGANDHA - kya aap bhi. Sabko sabke office aur kam he 
DEEPAK - are nahi bhabi. Office to apna hi he. Aur rahi bat navi aur ritu ki to un dono ne aaj chutti li hui he 
RITIKA - yes aunty. Don't worry about it. Uncle sahi keh rahe he. Aaj kuch karte he 
Everyone were talking and deciding about today's plan 
NAVYA - papa.. Shimla ki sight seeing karne chale. Us bahane picnic bhi hojayegi 
Everyone became happy hearing about picnic 
MEETA - Ha ye sahi rahega. 
SUGANDHA - mausam bhi acha he. Bohot maza ayega 
ANANT - ha.. Bohot maza ayega 
Said Anant looking at navya. Navya smile and looks down 
OM - chalo then baccha log. Get ready 
Everyone moves towards there room to get ready for sight seeing 
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After some time Anant came down in his black t-shirt and blue jeans. While Ranbir was in red t-shirt and black jeans. Navya was wearing sky blue chudidar suit. Her hair were left open 
RANBIR - navi.. Ritu kaha he!? 
NAVYA - arahi he. Actually use tayar hone me thoda jyada time lagta he 
She smile and started packing their picnic basket. In this process her bracelet was making sound. Anant smile looking at her Bangle and then at her 
ANANT - nice bracelet 
Navya looks at him in wonder. Suddenly ritika disturb them 
RITIKA - hey 
She was in her white top and blue jeans. Anant and navya looks elsewhere 
RITIKA - kaha he sablog? Jana nahi he kya? 
RANBIR - sablog bahar wait kar rahe he. Tumne hi late kiya.. Ritu 
RITIKA - hey you don't call me that ok. It's ritika for you 
NAVYA - hold on guys. Bahar sab wait kar rahe he. Ab chalo 
Anant took the basket when navya was going to pick it. They smile looking at each other. They went from there. They did a mini bus in which they started travelling to different places of shimla. They started singing and dancing in bus 
ANANT - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE 
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
Anant started singing looking at navya. Ranbir also joins him looking at ritika 
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE 
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
NAVYA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI 
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI 
Navya also started singing. Anant and navya started dancing together. Ranbir takes ritika's hand 
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE 
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
RITIKA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI 
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI 
Ritika remove her hand and fakes anger on him. Everyone laugh at them. They reach a place near Lake. They started doing boating. Navya and ritika were dancing together while Anant and Ranbir watch them 
NAVYA - HUM SATHI KITNE PURANE 
FIR KYU HE ITNE ANJANE 
Said navya back hugging meeta. Meeta caresses her head. Anant smile looking at them. Ritika came near them. Meeta also caresses her head 
RITIKA - HUM SATHI KITNE PURANE 
FIR KYU HE ITNE ANJANE 
NAVYA - KYA RANG LAYE NA JANE 
BACHPAN KE YE DOSTANE 
Anant and Ranbir inturpts them 
ANANT - KAB KAHA KYA KHABAR 
JA RUKE YE NAZAR 
RITIKA - ARE KYA PATA KON HE 
KISKA YAHA HUMSAFAR 
Ritika said smiling at Anant. Ranbir came from her behind and she got scared 
RANBIR - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE 
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
RITIKA - DEKHUNGI SOCHUNGI 
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGI 
Ritika said to him and goes from there. Anant came beside Ranbir while navya came from other side 
ANANT - KEHDO KE TUM MERE DIL ME RAHOGE 
KEHDO KE TUM MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
Anant makes his hand forward but navya teases him and goes from there. Ranbir shakes hand with Anant while he fakes anger 
They all travel to other places. It was a picnic spot, garden place. They had snacks there. Navya was standing near a tree when Ranbir came near her 
RANBIR - TUM BHI TO HO DOST MERI 
TUM TO MERA SATH DE DO 
Navya smile at him. There Anant and ritika were playing 
ANANT - TUM BHI TO HO DOST MERI 
TUM TO MERA SATH DE DO 
Ranbir looks at them and smile 
RANBIR - APNI SAHELI KA MERE 
HATHO ME TUM HATH DE DO 
Navya laughs at him. She dreams about Anant 
NAVYA - INTEZAR INTEZAR 
AUR KYA HE YE PYAR 
Anant came from her behind while she looks at him and smile 
ANANT - JHUT HI YE SAHI 
KEHDE WO EK BAR 
Ritika came in between and looks at Anant 
RITIKA - LO MENE KAHA TUMSE DOSTI KARUNGI 
TUM BHI KAHO MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
RANBIR - DEKHUNGA SOCHUNGA 
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGA 
Ranbir said to ritika while ritika looks angry and stamp her foot. Navya also looks at Anant 
NAVYA - ARE MENE KAHA TUMSE DOSTI KARUNGI 
TUM BHI KAHO MUJHSE DOSTI KAROGE 
ANANT - DEKHUNGA SOCHUNGA 
KAL PARSO KUCH KAHUNGA
Navya's jaw drop. She runs behind Anant while Ranbir and ritika also follow. Sugandha call them and all four headed towards the bus. It was dark now and everyone headed towards home... 
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TO BE CONTINUED... 
Posted: 7 years ago
This is really awesome ;))plz ritika ko hatao 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by silla


This is really awesome ;))plz ritika ko hatao 
Itne jaldi hatao?  abhi to shuruvat hui he
Posted: 7 years ago
Great update.pls I don't want anyone between my anya 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by -meru-


Ohooo lovely ;) 
Thank you 
Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by ganganavya


Great update.pls I don't want anyone between my anya 
Thank you. well the story line is that only. don't worry no one will come 

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