AsYa FF: Mohabbatein - Part 18 Updated: Pg 140 - 20/12/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
Author's Note:

For the silent Readers:  Please don't just stalk but comment, it encourages us to write ๐Ÿ˜†! 

For all Readers:  I know most of you probably skim over the drama and wait for AsYa scenes which haven't been too many thus far.  But, the drama is necessary for the story to progress. The story will gradually eliminate many characters (e.g. whole of Farooqui Household for many reasons barring Zoya and Ayaan) and will revolve around Asad & Zoya as individuals and AsYA as a couple.  

However, Asad is a lot more damaged and dark in my story which is why they will take time to fall in love and get together but we will get there (one day!).  Their story will be taking a different turn in the next part and a new character (or not, take your guess) will be introduced in the next part.  My story also has a story revolving around Kasauli and the parts the different characters will play to save it and this will be a factor which brings AsYa close and drifts them apart hence many scenes will revolve around that.  

My story is not short.  It is a long fanfic which I do not want to rush.  What I have posted so far is an intro and the real twists and turns are just about to start.  I understand that due to so many characters the story can be a bit confusing so I will be making a clarification post soon breaking down the characters and story a little so it will be a little less confusing.  I hope that helps! 

Other than that, I once again request silent readers to please drop comments or questions so I can know what your liking and what your not!  Just because I am so eager to write the upcoming parts I will drop a spoiler below.  Thank you for reading! 

Spoiler - Zoya will very soon be moving into Asad's house.  I'll leave it up to you to guess why?  

xo - DailyDaisy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
So good upadte n thnx for always giving long updates

luv the asya moment ( more ) finally

n nw as per ayaan & zoya talk i m sure, she is going to stay with them

cn't wait for more . update nxt soon ..

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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting work
Update soon
AsYa
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Posted: 7 years ago
Loved it 
Asya  <3
Big family confuses me a little
Continue soon :-))
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Posted: 7 years ago
superb part
asya fight in every meeting wow
excited for next
thanx for pm
plz pm me for next
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Just came across this amazing story
Loved reading it to the core
In love with the plot and the characters of the story
And hats off to you for the amazing execution
Surely the story would get more interesting once zoya moves into asad's house
Looking forward to know what happens next in this amazing story
Please continue soon
Will be waiting impatiently ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 7 years ago
The characterization looks promising..thought too many characters...
Hope the story sees the end and you don't leave it in between..

Will read the story soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
ITS IS RALLY A NICE CONCEPT๐Ÿ˜Š
PLS TRY PM ME๐Ÿ˜†
a small advise๐Ÿ˜†
 "pls try to maintain gap between each character conversation so tat it looks good & easily understandable". 
ITS JUST A SUGGESTION IF U WANT U CAN TAKE IT
NICELY WRITTEN CONT SOOON๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
I UNDERSTAND TAT U DONT WANT TO RUSH BUT TRY TO UPDATE SOOON
and more asya movements๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
and try to write with this         type of writing 
it looks really good .๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ its just a suggestion.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
try to complete it dont leave in middle without completing๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: MysticRiver

interesting update..๐Ÿ‘


Thank You!  Hope you enjoy the upcoming parts just as much!  
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Posted: 7 years ago
Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

So good upadte n thnx for always giving long updates

luv the asya moment ( more ) finally

n nw as per ayaan & zoya talk i m sure, she is going to stay with them

cn't wait for more . update nxt soon ..


Thank You!  I really can't give short updates even if I tried ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.  

I know you're really eager for AsYa moments but you have to be patient for a few more parts before the story starts revolving more around them and less around the family and drama (Sorry ๐Ÿ˜ณ).  I want to set the background story because it carves the path for the AsYa love story and the actual plot and if I don't set it right it will lead to confusion later.  The background will help you understand the characterization as well.  The upcoming two parts will have less scenes of AsYa but then after that it will be filled with them.  \

The parts that I am currently writing (2-3 parts ahead of the one's I am editing to post) AsYa are already under one roof and it is disastrous to say the least ๐Ÿ˜†.  Yes Ayaan and Zoya's convo hints at that but she will go there for reasons that will be exposed in part 6 or 7.  

Will be updating soon!  Hope you continue to enjoy!