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ArHi: Innocence to a half-mad city [Complete] - Page 4

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-BeYourSelf- thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved summery
Plz continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it...i'm a great fan of ur works... 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great to be reading more from you KB/RB ... Always loved your writing style ... 
Arnav seems to be in quite a brooding mood ... 
wearing a watch which doesn't work any more ... almost picking up a fight with 
his sister whom he almost prays to πŸ˜†

By any chance did the flavour of the tea (jasmine mixed with orange) remind 
him of someone special ? Khushi perhaps ... πŸ˜† 
Overall in a funny mood ... 
Only Aman seems to be the love of his life at the moment ! 
Finally walking off from the party and finding himself in front of a shop 
called "Watching!!!" πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
I am in love even with your 2 line summary. How brilliantly you write!!!

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Posted: 8 years ago
I am so excited to see your new story. 
Loved the way you describe characters of your story. 
I agree what that man said to Arnav for wearing watch which is not working. But can understand why he wear it. He wants to feel close to his parents. 
The cat mouse fight between brother and sister was awesome. But no matter how annoying anjali may be, but sometimes  such kind of people helps you keep on going in life. If she would not be around him, he might lose peace of his mind.
So Aman is gay and Arnav knows about his feeling for him. Still they are best friends, interesting. Looking forward to know more about them.
Name of the shop watching carry so much depth in it. You can think of it in any way. 
Let's see if this shop can help him.
Looking forward to read more.
Are you writing this story in your blog? If yes then I will follow there because sometimes I miss update here. I can get notifications from blog,πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
I have always liked "your" Arnavs...
Watching! 


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Posted: 8 years ago
loved it... very interesting dear...
u are the most unique writter on this forum...!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love loved it!
Cant wait to read more!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hello RB
Interesting start,
Start with watch and ended with watch, so this watch is very important aspect of the story, I believe,
Thanks for the pm, and SORRY for late reply.
Thank u
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Posted: 8 years ago
Interesting.. well curious to read more.. loved first part.. πŸ˜Š