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Twinj FF || YeH MeRi DeeWaNaGee !!! part 4 page 15 - Page 6

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Thanks Samy .. I am glad u liked it..😳


Sona never doubt.. remember that .. we love ur Ff  

Kunj as police officer.   Wake me up before u leave hahaha 

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Posted: 8 years ago

 Part 2

             (  Sion Police Station... INTERROGATION ROOM  )
               " Speak up bas***d, under whose instructions ws this smuggling undertaken ", Aman started with interrogation.. But tht goon ws not budging ..and ws all shut...not giving out any information... Aman gave him a hard hit on his face but still no answer... Kunj ws standing behind leaning on the pillar and silently watching him.. After about 10 mins of interrogation by Aman, Kunj walked towards him..He asked others to move out..  " Ali , is ur name., rite  ,? ", Kunj said walking towards him.. He stood in front of Ali and kept his one foot on the Chair and bent down... " Ali ,  do u knw Who I am ?? ", kunj whispered in his ears,... Ali looked terrified by mere listening to his voice and nodded in no.. " I am an encounter specialist..and i ws suppose to kill u in tht raid.. ", Kunj said smirking at him.. Ali sensed the whole thing.. Kunj reload his gun and kept on Ali's forehead... " If u din speak up, i'll hav no option but to jus pulled the trigger and  burst ur head...and no one will even question me.. ", Kunj said Looking straight in his eyes..conveying tht he is not  lying and he do hav a potential to do such thing... Ali went cold.. " Sir, this smuggling ws carried by Sardar Saheeb , Mafia .. He has hiered us for this job... ", he said... " Wat else u knw abt him and his future plans ", Kunj asked... " After 3 months on December 20th, he is goin to conduct a major deal .. Smuggling teenage girls with cocaine , but i dunno the location...he is having some goons working for him in Datta Chawl but i dunno who thy r.. Please dnt kill me.. !! ", he said  desperately pleading for his life.. His confession ws recorded and he ws sent to central jail...
                  ( Police Headquarters) 
                  " Officer Sarna and Officer Singh,  you both are selected for this new mission ", said the commissioner... " Yes Sir ", both said in Unison.. Commissioner continued " See , we will raid 3 months later.. And after all the information which we hav now, we will hav to get those goons at Datta Chawl for major info of the location... I want u both to stay at Datta Chawl for around 3 months as tenant undercover... And identify thm and keep track on their movements...dnt make any arrests and Encounters. ", looking at Kunj... " Are we clear, gentlemen.?", he concluded..  " Yes Sir. !", again in unison, saluting the commissioner... 
                    Aman and Kunj are colleagues but they r best of Friends... Aman knws Kunj more emotionally thn Kunj knws himself..  " Hey bro, today ders a party organized by our seniors.. We r goin..and i am nt asking ...i am telling u.. ", Aman said in excitement... Kunj Doesn't like to socialise...but Kunj's mother has given Aman orders to make Kunj socialise , meet people especially girls... And today's party ws wer grls will b der.. 
                   ( party location) 
                   Kunj and Aman arrived at the party location... It ws an open ground beautifully decorated... As soon as Kunj entered the premises.. All the grls looked at him with jaw dropped.. He ws looking ravishing... Wearing a black suite complimenting his complexion, slight stubbles giving him all the manlyness desired by any woman... Simply Dropped dead Gorgeous.. Aman grinned at the.sight.. all grls looking at his friend with tongue out.. He ws never jealous of Kunj, coz he knws Kunj ws nt interested in desperate grls.. . " Dude, grls r checking u out, dnt disappoint thm by being rude ", Aman poked Kunj,.. " I dnt care Aman.. , i am nt here fr grls ok...commissioner called me personally fr some discussion .. U knw i ws not goin to come " , he said rudely... Aman jus nodded his head in yes , smiling.. Thy went to the commissioner... After all the greetings commissioner told thm abt their living arrangements and abt the location and told thm from whom to collect the  keys to the room... " Kunj and Aman..All the Best. ", said Commissioner...   " Dad, Lets hav dinnner ", said Alisha... Aman and kunj looked at her.. And she ws definitely looking at Kunj.. " Who r thy Dad ?? ", she asked... Before commissioner cud say.. Aman prompted.. " Hi, i am Inspector Aman Singh and He is Inspector Kunj Sarna ", pointing at Kunj... Alisha ws intensely gazing at Kunj... As she ''ll jus eat him up... " Nyc, meeting u Mr, Kunj ", she said placing a hand fr handshake... Kunj too politely shook hands with her and faked a smile... While goin away she looked back at Kunj twice.. " Dude, she seems totally clean bowled.  ", Aman chuckled..  Kunj ws jus whatever .. Tomorrow thy'll be moving to the Chawl...and Kunj's life ws goin to take a new turn and he totally being unaware... 
                     " Twinkle Di ..Twinkle Di... Wer r u ?? .", little Tamanna came shouting to Twinkle... Twinkle ws washing clothes in the bathroom..  " I am here.. Tamanna. ", Twinkle called..Tamanna slowly walked behind her and hugged her.. " Di .. I got u. ", she giggled.  .. Tamanna is the one who can make her sad day into a brighter one jus with her smile and laughter... Twinkle washed hands wwiped thm and took Tamanna into her arms and came out frm the Bathroom..  " My little , kiddo... U seems to b very happy Today. .. Wats the reason...?? ". asked Twinkle smiling at Tamanna.. Tammu Giggled at her and gave her a kiss on her cheeks.. " Di.,.u knw i hav A Princess Doll and A Prince doll...  My Princess dolls name is Twinkle...coz she is u.. And U knw Wats my Prince Doll name Is ???? ", Tammu asked with joy in her eyes... Twinkle smiling at her nodded her head in No... Tammu kept her both hands on her head.. " Offoo Diduu... Its Kunj...my Prince Doll name is Kunj ", she said and strted laughing.. Twinkle still smiling at her hit her and nodding her head side ways.. " She thinks anything, nw who is Kunj?? ", she whispered to herself... But Smart Tammu heard her.. " Aaree Di, Kunj is our new Neighbour... Came i'll show u.. ", she strted dragging her hands ...  " Neighbour ?? ", Twinkle thot and stepped out with Tamanna.. She saw two boys talking to Jyoti Tai.. " Thank you Tai for helping us in renting this room.. , My name is Aman and this is my friend Kunj ", Aman said pointing at Kunj.. Listening to this Twinkle manage to flip her eyess to fully see the man Tammu was talking and getting so excited about... She looked at Kunj and at the same tym Kunj looked at Twinkle... Their eyes met.. And fr few seconds thy.Stared into each other...as if,  His dark jet black eyes searching some light in her clear brown sparkling orbs... " Beta , this is Twinkle, she stys in this room.. ",... Twinkle joined her hands in Namasty to greet both Aman and Kunj and manged to smile mildly..  Aman greeted her wheras Kunj grabed keys frm Aman and went to open the lock of their room... AS he passed her to their room.., Twinkle eyes immediately dropp ...and she went inside her room... Tammu went to her grandmother after thanking Kunj fr the chocolate...
                     " Twinkle!! ", Jyoti Tai called by knocking on her door.. Twinkle opened the door... " Twinkle, Listen dear... I have made this kheer for those boys..Can u go and give it thm.. I need to go down to Mrs. Atres house.. Der is some important meeting arranged.. ", said Tai...Twinkle cn never say no to Jyoti tai.. She nodded her head in Yes and took.the bowl of Kheer frm tai's hand..." And ha , tell thm tht its the rule of our Chawl to welcome new members with Sweet dish... ", said Tai and went.. Twinkle smiled at her as tai is most humble human being..  Few.minutes later, Twinkle knocked Kunj's door... Aman opened the door and saw Twinkle standing with the bowl in her hand.. ..Kunj came out frm kitchen to see who it ws ..whn he saw Twinkle standing at the door... " Wat the hell r u doing here ", Kunj raised his voice... Twinkle almost shivered listening to him... Aman also looked at Kunj... " I ..ii.. I jus came here to give this Khe..Kheer...tht...", she stammered..but before she cud complete.. " Wat,. , we din ask fr any kheer, and I knw Girls like u and wat u exactly here for... ", Kunj bluttered in most harsh ttone... Twinkle looked at him with widen eyes..  " Kunj ", Aman snapped at him... " Look, we dnt need any of ur kindness ok..and dnt dare step on our door again.. U get it.. Now leave...", Kunj again shouted... Tears welled up in Twinkle eyes listening to his sharp words,.she took off her eyees frm Kunj .. " Aman Sahhab , Wo Jyoti tai has made kheer to welcome you both in our Chawl.." she said handing over the bowl to Aman and ran away into her room and immediately closed her door.. Aman nodded.at Kunj in No.. " wat the Hell Kunj , y u hav to b so Heartless always... "..he Said And Closed the door...
                 Twinkle dropped down on the floor, clutching her hand on her.mouth so tht noise of her cry wnt reach her neighbors... Kunj's harsh words pierced her heart... "Gril like her..", kept repeating in her mind... He indirectly called her a wh**e..  She silently cried, sitting and decided to never cross his path... After abt an hour, Jyoti Tai knocked the door, Twinkle some hw gathered herself and cleaned her face.and opened the door... " Twinkle, u knw Mrs.Atres daughter in law is going to be delivering a baby tonight .. Thy r taking her to the hospital i'll b goin with thm.. Cn u look after Tamanna ? ",.Jyoti tai asked..  " Tai, y r u asking , off course i'll take care of her.. ", Twinkle said.and took sleepping Tammu frm Tai's arms.. " And btw, did u gave the kheer to those boys?" , Tai asked.. The whole blaming thing again snapped at Twinkle..her face fell at her question but she somehow managd to fake smile and nodded her head in.Yes... Tai.smiled.and went.. Twinkle eyes again moistened and she close the door. . she went in and placed Tammu on her bed.. Kunj's harsh words killed her appetite..and she slept beside Tamnu hugging her.. .. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ohhh...this is sooo interesting!!!! 
I am so hooked on this story, it's absolutely brilliant!!
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Eagerly looking forward to more soonπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
This content was originally posted by: neverlandspirit

Ohhh...this is sooo interesting!!!! 

I am so hooked on this story, it's absolutely brilliant!!
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Eagerly looking forward to more soonπŸ˜ƒ


Thank you so much.. I am really glad u liked it.. πŸ˜³
Its goin to get more interesting ...ahead trust me...
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Posted: 8 years ago
gogo babes i am so sorry about being this late
exam time
anyhow i loved this!
the whole concept is too good. idk why but reading this made me super happy 
kunj is our very own angry young man lol
i loved how the whole encounter was written and the op was excellent
his meeting with twinkle gave me the feels
Mr Sarna is clearly affected by this dame for sure
and he scared the girl for sure
i am excited to see this love story develop 
do continue soon
signing off now
still have teds' and NVL's stories to catch up on 
love ya tho 
Edited by .Ragini. - 8 years ago
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I an totally intrigued with this story, you really write so well, all the emotions are captured perfectly. Can't wait for you to update I'm officially a huge fan of your work!!
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This content was originally posted by: .Ragini.

gogo babes i am so sorry about being this late

exam time
anyhow i loved this!
the whole concept is too good. idk why but reading this made me super happy 
kunj is our very own angry young man lol
i loved how the whole encounter was written and the op was excellent
his meeting with twinkle gave me the feels
Mr Sarna is clearly affected by this dame for sure
and he scared the girl for sure
i am excited to see this love story develop 
do continue soon
signing off now
still have teds' and NVL's stories to catch up on 
love ya tho 


Aww Raghuu rulayegi kya Sorry bolke... Pagli i knw exms tym hai...isiliye maine b disturb nai kiya...nai toh pata hai ne .Me kaise piche padhti hu tere.. 
Hehehe.. I am soo happy tht u liked thia concept ..
Yes Kunj is A Angry Young man... .
I bet U'll love this story.. I am kinda trying to bring in the feeling of movie...
I love u baby..
Pls Reads Teddys and NVL...thy have done an incredible job.. πŸ˜³
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I an totally intrigued with this story, you really write so well, all the emotions are captured perfectly. Can't wait for you to update I'm officially a huge fan of your work!!


Thank u soo much dear.. I am glad u liked it.. πŸ˜³
Sty Tuned its goin to b very interesting . 
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm late I know but I love this concept! I'm such a sucker for such storylines.

I was going to ask if Twinkle would be one the girls that gets smuggled but then I dont think that'll happen now. Unless I just gave you the idea πŸ˜³

Whatever lol I really enjoyed this, please update soon! Cant wait to see how Kunj softens towards Twinkle. And poor Twinkle thinks she's a wh**e. I'm already getting giddy thinking about the amount of times protective Kunj comes out to defend her honour  


P.S. I know this is minor but can you please make the font colours slightly darker? The light versions really play with my vision πŸ˜† Thank you! 
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it...pm please πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks Dear.. Yup sure..😳