mutiny within the camp..

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IKRS Saturday 9th April 2016 ep 213 My Take mutiny within the camp

One war stratagem is to plant doubt and discord within the enemy lines. The idea is to  hit their solidarity, and dent its joint  united front. Thus weaken the leader systematically so support lessens. Making it thus  easier to smite the figure head of the war.

Greedy .klepto  mami eyes the huge empty cooking pots as she ascertains  their worth. Pity they are too large an item to pilfer. But Raja turns up with glad tidings in terms of happy days. He lowers his net  for bigger fish!  royal fish this time. Raja's mouth waters at the very thought of trapping  the princess with his  dapper looks and  dribbling tongue. It's a matter of a few days and the fish will be caught he deludes himself. Alongside he sells dreams of obsessive stealing into the klepto  mami. But she still exercises foresight to keep in hand AN..  suck out as much wealth they can! However, Viplav through Rajlaxmi vends dreams to Raja, who imagines  robbing this house too! but  all this amassing of wealth  if  Viplav allows it!

 Dhani awaits news from her husband who turns up in person.  to report back. Questions on concern about Rajlaxmi. Viplav  confirms , daam, i.e exploitation of  weakness has already  proved successful.  A hug  comes as a reward for Viplav  but  he alerts her much is to be done yet. His concern is what becomes of mami and Sulochana.. these two makes their link strong to break. It's imperative this link has to be weakened.. Raja without either of the two will lose potency. Dhanis mind stimulates and she confides in Viplav  she may just have the plan to trap mami!

Blatant lies to mislead Kayak how special just like  daughter is   Shalu to  them   Dhani hears  Sulochana   take  Kanak for a ride . How once  Dhani  was told those  words but was subjected to the cruellest abuse. Kanak   is even a bigger liar then Sulochana , retorts a daughter in law is rightly so like a daughter. Both fire invisible   arrows of misinterpretation.  Dhani had passed by both. Sulochana  in the past and   Kanak s constant  ongoing  slur! One never knows when maa ji might fall upon her again! muses  Dhani.  Kanak snubs her why is he here ? Sulochana  creates trouble for djani by taunting   Kanak .she has accepted  Dhani  her DIL.. Eventually ,what with giving her the huge task of cooking the food for the  big banquet.   Kanak snubs  Dhani instead  by buzzing off and  Sulochana delights in  Dhani  being snubbed by  Dhani.kanak  muses she will have to act fast  to stop tis witch  Dhani from accolades .

Rajlaxmi arrives at AN. Viplav  primes her ,checks she knows what to do. Viplav gives her the crux of the task at hand , separate  mami from the conniving trio! Its a nerve racking game ,that day it was only for a short while she was here..todays she's here for a longer period. Viplav   uses praise and Rajlaxmi's vigour  for the task returns. Viplav tips her, show  wonders today!   Raja turns up one look at a stunning Rajlaxmi conquers him!  Viplav glares at this rogue.

 Dhani prepares the vegetable for cooking and Kanak watches her from the kitchen door post.. thinks of how to stop  Dhani..drags her away from cooking! important work to be done..

 Rajlaxmi traps Raja,compliments, he looks  very smart in his outfit. He blurts she does too,but realizes Viplav,his wife's brother hears and changes tack to sound harmless and innocent, his whole family  awaits her arrival. Gets shirty with Viplav, he must be busy with the big banquet , so he'll look after the princess., invites the princess to have heena applied to her hands.. it'll look good on her hands. Vipav is amazed at what a big oaf! this drip  Raja is! , no shame.. muses Viplav, gives a thumb's up to Rajlaxmi , go get the rascal!

 Kanak forces Dhani to have heena applied to her hands ,so it poses an interference and Dhani fails at her task! as usual taunts Dhani , what will people say   Kanak got  heena on her daughters hands and missed her DIL hands? Dhani protest how will she cook?  Kanak  bites her head off, that's your problem not hers!

Raja s desperation for Raja laxmi is irrepressible  . He praises her   before Shalu , who is slightly put off..  put Raja is too busy catching this rich gold  fish!..dhani has no choice but  to have on her heena hands.. wants it done swiftly, duty calls..

 Raj laxmi opens her hand bag ,deliberately  drops a wad of crisp notes.. bait to allure mami. Raja  gets to it before mami  whose hands itch, and returns the money, but Raja laxmi  declines ..she's not into taking fallen money, give it to the poor ! mami snatches it from Raja hand ,confesses she's poor too!  erhh, distributes money to the poor too and this money too she'll give to the poor. Shalu listens and looks at mami's  greedy reactions!  Mami stuffs it under her sari pallu. Kanank is smug in the bug ,have to see how  Dhani  will cook with heena on her hands! She'll have to stay away from cooking at least for four to five hours! it sure will be fun to watch !  Kanak rubs her palms deviously... but is shocked to note that Dhani is stirring away the pot with a  long handle spoon!  How did she do it?? well only had heena on one hand,the other  she kept free smart girl  Dhani ..kanak  next gives her a time  limit to get the cooking done..any thing to keep  Dhani from completing  the task. Taunts don't give the excuse that she cooked with one hand hence cooked late..

Rajlaxmi set the  trap is. A half open bag that displays money. Raja sent to get water for her parched throat.. a moment into her phone ,and mami, the fly falls in the trap of the  spider. Rajlaxmi leaves the room, returns and yells,how dare she go through her bag? Raj laxmi accuses, before the whole family , mami is a thief tells Viplav how had he got his sister married off to  a bunch of thieves..Tirpathi family hears, as the idiot Raja yells this time, he will side the truth  and the truth is that mami lied in fact she has stolen things before.. and that from a guest mami protests so he has decided that mami will not be living in this house ! So as he is literally kicks mami  out the house, he mutters to her, he has to do it to avoid police visit. Mami takes mighty offense but leaves. So by creating this split in the trio the likelihood is  mami might  execute a back lash against the mother son. Meanwhile Raja makes use of this situation and pumps up his image too, apologetic, but with a huge sense of responsibility to the family as son in law. Shalu is impressed by her husband's image,but it's not her he creates an impression on .. it's the  maharani .Viplav makes sure he milks the situation! Sulochana tells Raja off by turning  mami out. Raja shows his frustration by yelling he is fed up of being forced to do things he  to please.like marrying  an obese girl who can only think of  food! Raja tells his mother by kicking out mami ,he knows exactly whose favour he strives to win! But then his mother  won't understand, he has not taken her in the loop

In the privacy of their love nest, Viplav enhances Dhani with floral buds  jewellery. Flower  bracelets for her bangle clad wrists. He confers with Dhani ,feels good, all moving to plan, looks like tonight their plan will  culminate as they planned. Raja will be exposed today and naught can stop it from happening. Viplav  and  Dhani's love is what instigates, executes and implements strategies  to wipe out evil from their household..  

Sorry this is  very outdated take.. thought  I'd do it any way ..old habits are hard to get rid  off ..  overall a positive episode ,viplav dhani putting in place their strategy of Daam.. Raja is wily , he bigs himself too in  this situation.. viplav will have to strike harder..  shalu is only just beginning  to look worried.. not not enough to see the dirty dodgy side of raja..

precap: raja with queen behind closed doors.. viplav  with shalu outside the door.. is viplav on to a winner??

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Dear Hammie 😃 ...Some people are never satisfied at all throughout their lives such as raja and sullu ...greed is such a quality where the more you have the more you want ...its like akshay patram which keeps filling food inside the vessel...though this is for a good cause the other one is not and simply leads to destruction. Let raja dream all he wants to for viplav will never let him achieve what he wishes to.

Yes daam has worked raja's weakness has been hit at bulls eye and viplav did think right in separating the forces into small portions so that the enemy becomes weak and it's easy to conquer ...the divide and rule policy is being applied.It is easier to break a stick compared to a bundle of sticks ...this is so true and viplav's unity is stronger compared to weaker raja's forces.

It's easy to dig mami's weakness and exploit it the greed for wealth and viplav and dhani did succeed in bringing the truth before the tripathis yet they forgive wow just great...had it been dhani they would have called cops at least they succeeded in kicking mami out of the house.

Kanak causing hindrance to dhani again is nothing new...how dhani can prepare food for so many people is beyond our understanding and that too with one hand...yeh cv's kuch bhi dikhate hai...hum sab ko kya ullu samjhte hai huh.

I really appreciate raj lakshmi for risking her life and helping out viplav and dhani...she is such a true friend and vidha are both lucky to have her in their lives...at times of need like this she didn't hesitate to help them out.

You have as usually written exceptionally well 😃...waiting for your next part. Till then take care.

Edited by pearl100 - 8 years ago
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We always welcome your updates and unique write ups, so please continue even if belated.  Enjoyed reading a lot.  
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Hamlet... #Appreciate...
I Do not get to be around much, but havent failed to notice your consistent contribution to the fandom and forum...

Your write up and updates have always been special and they contiue to make a difference...

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Hammie have missed two of yor poats . have to go back and read them . I now dont have words. just that i love your posts.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank hammie for  the wonderful take .

You have written very beautifully ...


viplov is taking the same route ,  how RA has broken the trust and faith with AN family ..  Via taking the same connection to break Ra family . He acheived on this mission

sulochana button is Mami ..  (So she cannot be active without her ) ...  
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Dont you guys like the written update here and the effort put in to write it.  Only 6 comments folks, we need to pink it, so please give your input.  
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I think Rajlakshmi's character is so refreshing and different as a friend of the lead character.  She has had so many shades in the show so far and her character has really progressed.  Do not know if it has been Viplav's influence and positivity in her life also.  It takes a magnanimous hearted person to let go of their love for someone so their close friend can be happy and then to be friends with the couple and be accepting, and so helpful.  How does she do it with no jealousy, negativity.  She is such a practical and no nonsense person.  I really hope CVs find someone to make Rajlakshmi happy.  
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It was a brilliant plan by Viplav and Dhani to make Raja's team weak by removing his mother or mami from the equation.  And Dhani knowing the Awasthi's from before brings up Maami's kleptomaniac tendencies and Vidha along with RL spread their hunter's net and our foolish RA and Maami conveniently fall into the trap.  

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Posted: 8 years ago
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As you said Hammie Raja does not only want to have his cake(AN) but eat it also (RL). He wants to enjoy wealth and beauty. Wealth from the queen as well as beauty, because as long as Vip is there, he is not sure he will manage to get much. He is trying to have another way out if mission AN fails.
As for Dhaani and the mehendi farce, I believe that was just to show how great a dil Dhaani is as well as make the episode longer.
Thanks for the detailed update.
RL is having fun playing the queen as she always wanted to have such a life at the same time she is doing a good action. Hope she does not fall into any trap though. raja is quite cunning.