make hay while the sun shines!

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IKRS Tuesday 15th March 2016 ep 189 My Take ~ Make hay while the sun shines!

The episode is all about grab the opportunity. Time bound too plays an important . For evil its for time to fly by so they can commit a crime of grand theft in AN. For Dhani  its a race  to get to AN to thwart  evil plans from happening.   

All is  crystal clear modern technology verifies it. Both  Raja and Dhani   face the  biggest  fear factor of  their lives. The hunter becomes the hunted now. Dhani  is on the chase now , she needs to speak to Viplav  she  calls for him!  her cries are to no avail . The hunted  switches of the sound of the phone.

 Wedding apparel  of the daughter about to be married ,is  ravaged  and rendered non wearable courtesy of  mami. But  Kanak blames  her daughter for its ruin and is about to strike her daughter in front of mami, forces Shalu to wear  another ill fitted   outfit !kanak has very much shown her daughters in law that Shalu is used to being ill treated even in her own home. Symbolically all is incongruous , Shalu's match with a  fraudulent thief now she's forced to wear clothes  that are ill fitted. The girl has no choice but to adhere , for that is the expectation. The wedding hour approaches.

Viplav  out looking for Raja stumbles across him in his room . Raja  leaps towards him and  purposely stages a trip  and dashes Viplav's phone on the floor and thus successfully   aborts chances of Dhani  getting in touch with Viplav and  puts an end to the lines of their  communication.  The fall may be feigned but  Raja's   guilt has been exposed and he is now  downward  bound! But the ever present  Viplav's helping hand symbolically  saves  his   sisters husband  from falling flat on  his face and half jokingly  boils it down to the grooms pre marriage jitters! Its not pre wedding jitters! Raja  loses his  colour over the fact that he might really land in muck along with his family. Mumbles an apology to Viplav about destroying his phone. Viplav   cool as a cucumber tells Raja not to worry,Raja makes a  quickget away to theloo,Viplav  meawhile collects the pieces of his phone with a big regret  ,Dhani will miss out on the actual  wedding. He has a quick word with the man in the sky dear god ,  perform a miracle  that Dhani herself turns up here in person.. what fun it will be! Looks like Viplav stole the words out  of mouths of the deities in the skies, for they to stand for the pure selfless goodness of the upright!

Dhani tries her phone to Viplav ,cannot get through. Blames  Raja's meddling  for sure, as he wants his truth concealed from the family.Dhani feels morally bound she has to inform Viplav stop the marriage from happening otherwise  grave injustice  will occur! She is desperate to reveal the truth!

At AN.. preprations continue for the   wedding. In passing  Kanak asks  Sulochana   when her husband and brother would arrive? seeing  they missed all the other function.. Sulochana lies to  keep the truth about them concealed and fobs Kanak off they are  looking after business as Raja to is here.. Kanak stupidly and politely  is content just to hear  Sulochana's lie that they have a huge business.

It's a race against time !dhani's feet come into action !as her  brain tells her if their phones  malfunction, now , the only way is to  go personally to Viplav's house to tell him about Raja. Thus begin Dhani's  hurdles she will have to cross before she gets to the finishing life The first  hurdle is the ashram door bolted from the outside by Dulari and other widows. Dhani screams and calls for help ,but to no avail .

Sulochana and mami come to collect  Raja wonder what takes him so long to come  to the mandap? Seeig  Viplav there too, Sulochana  taunts nowadays   the grooms taken longer than the bride to get ready.But Viplav  teases  ,he thinks the very thought of marriage  is giving  him cold  feet! Jokes apart this marriage where it once made Raja  see cash ,now  makes him see  himself drowning in a sea of ignominy ! Suclochna   retorts,  marriage  itself is such a challenge that  even the smartest of mind  tends to sweat  and go weak! Raja is forced to do his final preening .. but  he wants to convey some bad tidings. Viplav  is sent out of the room  on the pretext that the pandit seeks him!raja   warns his mother and manmi of the approaching doom , Suman has seen him on Viplav's mobile , he  trashed it ,viplav is in the dark!  Sulochana calms her son wants to be given time to think.. so basically the evil trio has been granted time to plan their offensive

 Dhani has FBs of atrocities suffered at the hands of both  her husband and his brother Raja she is egged on no, two ways about it! she has to stop the marriage!  She has to get out of the ashram  She recalls how Viplav  used  to clamber over the ashram wall! The spirit of purpose drives her as she prepares to scramble over the ashram wall to cross over to the road on the other side!in panic she falls and so does her phone!

The evil trio congregates.. Sulochana comes out with a novel idea tells mami to go to the police station! tell them to arrest Suman also called Dhani  for the murder  of their son from the ashram! while here she'll swiftly get the wedding done and dusted asap! To Raja  the greedy witch gives words of courage , quick get ready ! leave everything to his mother besides once the marriage takes place ,no one will listen to Suman! They will listen to terms they dictate!  Make haste  as the time runs out!

A stool! Dhani stands tall against the wall she plans to go over!  Her motive is lofty!  She will have to over come the wall of the ashram! to tumble down the walls of a fake marriage..

Raja starts jumping through  the hoops, brought to the mandap, sat down for the ceremony at the end of which he receives the pot of gold.. delay ,snags start.. Shalu wears tight clothes she looks uncomfortable and unhappy. Viplav suggests to his mother, get her into something  comfortable! apologies won't be long.. Raja and mother exchange disdainful looks. Still Sulochana is content, Dhani will be arrested soon so all good.. mami ends up at the police station as planned. Police  van heads towards the ashram to arrest Dhani.. at AN  Shalu is brought back and Sulochana  insists the  rituals of marriage begin!.. but Dhani is over the wall and  the police misses her finds the ashram door locked  from the outside. At AN the groom and bride greet each other with varmala. Even the god's smile at Dhani and matters again drag and delay in the mandap! Pandit  asks Sulochana for the dolna ro be purified with holy water, she doesn't  have it ! dhani begins her marathon to Viplav's home.. her spirit urges her the stakes are too  high !she has to save Shalu! stop the marriage! like the wind she runs on the road . At AN, Sulochana says, dolna's   not important continue the marriage with out! But  Kanak  digs her heels in and says the marriage   has to been carried out according to the traditions! Besides what's the big hurry!  We can wait! so much to her displeasure  Sulochana and mani look high and low for it and cannot find it! Dhani continues her frantic running. The dolna is purified with holy water!time conscious! dhani then catches a rick shaw! Time  is running fast ,she has to run  against time! she decides to ring the house instead of Viplav! its a matter of urgency..  Dhani talks to ramdin asks to speak to Viplav fast tell him to phone her back he says he pass on the message. Evil mami  overhears, asks ramdin who the caller was he says it was Dhani. mami sends him on an errand and  tells him she'll pass the message on..Dhani moans why has Viplav not phoned her?

At AN   pandit asks brides mother  to tie  ghat bandhan.   Kanak steps forward but dshrant reminds her she cannot dothis auspicious deed as she is a widow. He asks dadi to do the   ritual. Dadi joins them and Shalu beams with a smile. Dhani travels in the rickshaw with the phone to her ear waiting for Viplav's phone call! .. time is running out . the marriage rituals are progressing on!the circumambulations  begin both stand. Sulanchana too wants time to fly she is desperate for the rituals to end and marriage completed! dhani urges  rickshaw driver to hurry . Raja  leads first and Shalu follows!flower petals are showered, Dhani gets   looks  restlessly how far she is from AN! Priiest announces 4 circumambulations are complete , three more and the marriage will be complete. Solochna  gives mami a greedy smirky look! , he asks Shalu  to step forward for the fifth  circumambulation .. Dhani! reaches  her destination! She gets out of the rick shaw and runs in through the gate in haste he asks for his money! she says she hasn't any! she has to go in some one's life depends on her! but the man won't let her off!  In side AN Shalu takes  goes around..  and then Dhani takes off her mangulsutra  that her husband give her Viplav gave it to her as a sign of being her husband, her lord, and her protector! today with the  sacred symbol she assumes the role of being his wife and a brother just like Viplav! to save his sister Shalu! ... she gives  it to the driver ad runs in!  and  commands from outside  stop right there!!! Shalu  stops! Raja stares!  they all look at the direction whence  the authoritative   voice came from?  Viplav frowns.. dadi looks ,on as in walks Dhani  through the door. Viplav is confused..kanak glares at Dhani, mami too glares at Dhani, its obvious she has not been arrested! Fearlessly Dhani comes and confronts the lot and  commands this marriage cannot take place! Raja looks innocently confused. Dashrant  is keen to know the meaning of this bold  order! Dhani glares up at Raja. Viplav grabs her arm and asks her what is she saying? Dhani replies ,just a hold on a minute, then boldly she steps on the stage in a white sari no one dare stop her! not even Viplav or dashrant! The widow stands before Raja stares at him defiantly then at Shalu and then at the ghat bandhan that dadi tied.. Dhani calmly steps forward and unties it  under the watchful eyes of all present! Dhani  like the invincible goddess  Durga sets Shalu from the clutches of the evil one! Defiantly  she looks up at Raja! as Shalu looks despairingly at  her mother...

A powerful episode today two issues happening simultaneously, a marriage  and one brave young girl who wants to stop it from happening. Dhani  is the huntress  today going for the kill! She is the embodiment of Durga maa today! bold and unstoppable!  The episode belongs to Eisha Singh well done missy you did us proud today..if looks can kill she lynched Raja today with them! hamlet53 16.3.16

Precap: this boy is a despicable person Shalu cannot marry him! and his family  is worse substandard,Shalu cannot be married  tohim.. Viplav says  look what ever you have t o say say it cklesrly  not in riddles! Sulochana says,  she is the girl  who got married to ou older  son! and she after marrying him .murdered him and then ran off! Viplav stares at her and Raja joins in she is not Dhani ,she is Suman! Viplav shge is the same forl  I told you about! Its her she is a murderer! Vioplav glares at him him with sided lion like looks.then asks Dhani tell me te truth and she  replies, yes its true iam  Suman! viplav is gobsmacked ...

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Excellent take Hammie dear👏...wat a narration!! loved reading it..Dhani heroic entry at last minute was superb..Episodes r getting interesting day b day...Viplav vl stand for dhani at any cost..he wont leave her..eagerly waiting to see Smart vakeel babu..felt bad for shalu bt its good for her..her life us saved by dhani..otherwise dat Creepy RA family wont live shalu in peace..their eyes all for money!!! KT vl definitely poision shalu..now Viplav hav to balance both wify nd sister bonding wid two..Hope for d best..Thank u soo much for d wonderful take Hammie!!! Take care😊..btw Mishuuu looks damn hottt in black dress..Mishal/ ViDha rocks!!❤️
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Excellent description and views of the episode. You presented it a lot better than how the episode has actually turned out to be. Very innovative title. Thanks...
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Look who is here after ages in the wonderful thread of urs😆😃😃
hi Hammie🤗
How r u ?
I hope u are doing well😳
I am still not done with my exams but thought of visiting this forum badly missing it 😳

What a mind blowing analysis as usual loved it a lot ⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Oh Am I Impressed !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How well you write hammie. 

And yes when viplav said kash bhagwaan dhani khud hi yahan aa jaaye and she turns up , it struck me too that gods have granted his wish . but why only this one ???????????
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Brilliant title ,
D episode sounds very interesting.I must watch it.
d way u portrayed all d suspense from d beginning till end , its mindblowing u r a professional writer, that's all I feel.
Dhani is my rockstar for today go dhani n hunt him down.save shalu.it looks so bad that in spite of being d daughter of such a well off famlily she is treated this way.kanak is d worst mom on earth.
Feel so bad for vipu. 😕
very well done hammie dear.u r such an entertainer , entertain us everyday with ur words , d sketches u make with them r much more lively than d original one.
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Hammie

What a great take for an equally poignant episode. Thank you!


Yesterday's episode, aptly titled in your take, was all about timing. Time is of essence and the hero of the episode.

--Time lags when Shalu has a wardrobe malfunction, and needs to go get changed again. Another sari torn, another bad omen makes its presence felt.

--Time speeds up when Dhani has to escape from the locked ashram, despite a couple of false starts and minor injuries sustained during her heroics.

--Time somersaults when Dhani and Raja stare at each other in horror and disbelief on the video call on Viplav's phone

--Time stretches itself as the whereabouts of one missing dolna is located by sly sisters-in-law

--Time collapses when another dolna is sacrificed in lieu of the auto fare, allowing the rider to finish the job she came to do

--Time stops along with the marital rites when Dhani makes her revelation.

That is all for today, Hammie. Time to go now😆
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Originally posted by: vijayasri88


hiviji 😊  
Excellent take Hammie dear👏...wat a narration!! loved reading it..Dhani heroic entry at last minute was superb..Episodes r getting interesting day b day...Viplav vl stand for dhani at any cost..he wont leave her..eagerly waiting to see Smart vakeel babu..felt bad for shalu bt its good for her..her life us saved by dhani..otherwise dat Creepy RA family wont live shalu in peace..their eyes all for money!!! KT vl definitely poision shalu..now Viplav hav to balance both wify nd sister bonding wid two..Hope for d best..Thank u soo much for d wonderful take Hammie!!! Take care😊..btw Mishuuu looks damn hottt in black dress..Mishal/ ViDha rocks!!❤️
thanks for sharing your  wonderful ideas viji.. yes  we are certainly waiting for some judicial wonders from vakeel babu. Have to say this would be a case where  heis subjectively involved..conflict of interest..    yes Mishal looked very nice indeed in black.  It gves a  formal look.  cheers for commenting   ,love hammie

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hi  adhiabhi , 😊  thank you so much for reading and commenting   much love hammie
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Originally posted by: captkirk

Excellent description and views of the episode. You presented it a lot better than how the episode has actually turned out to be. Very innovative title. Thanks...


 hi captkirk , 😊 thanks for reading mate..   do feel the takes are too long..  but findit impossible to be concise. will have to dosomething about it.  however , thanks so much for  your  support and encouragement//  enjoy forthcoming episodes.. much love hammie