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Posted: 8 years ago
I totally agree with you guys, its too soon---but the Foochar is such a temptation though!๐Ÿ˜ณ
I will be honest--thanks to the beautiful writing, I often I am imagining how all this will work out!  So the Foochar will just be additional fodder for me๐Ÿ˜†

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Posted: 8 years ago
We often get to hear that make peace with your heart by letting go of the past.. Don't spoil the present by thinking of the past... Time's the best healer but when you read stories like Suv and Neel, it strikes you that you make peace with your heart and let go the past when you only have a REASON TO do so. Until you get the reason one finds it difficult to let go of the past I think.

Waiting for Suv and Neel to be that REASON for each other...,
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Posted: 8 years ago
D or a R

Bosses tease their direct reports all the time, Corp India is somewhat like Corp anywhere these days
She knew that, but something made her dwell on the way he said "Mazaak kar raha tha" she replayed it over and over again in her mind

Didnt ask him if Nihar ate the pao bhaji at night, she didnt want to seem like Nihar's fairy Godmother or anything
She felt deeply for the child, going with his Dad everywhere, doing stuff, being dragged from place to place
And then going back home to catered or take out food each night

She noticed he played with with Aadhya, he was affectionate and kind, and easily amused
But still he was her boss's son
Over sympathy or over compassion could land her in trouble, and getting fired was not something she looked forward to
She had luckily come out professionally unscathed from the encounter at work in Mumbai
Emotionally there were unhealing scars, she never wanted to deal with something like that ever again
Which brought her back to the point of being involved with the boss

Aadhya and her ventured out in the evening when the famous Delhi sandstorm or aandhi appeared out of nowhere bringing temps down by a few notches
Kids were out, it smelled like moist earth, as they wandered inside the society first and then outside

She bought Aadhya ice cream

"U have a career in the food industry" he texted

That strange churning happened again

"Iska matlab I dont do a good job in building campaigns?" she asked

"Aap khaana ekdum badhiya bana lete ho" he reiterated

"I am very happy" she said
And then panicked and went back and corrected  herself three minutes later

"Thanks for the compliment"

She didnt want him to think she was happy because she saw him

"Can I buy you lunch sometime?" he asked
She didnt respond to that, carried the heart pounding and flutter in her stomach for the next 4 or so hours
Along with the unanswered text

When Aadhya started to sleep at 10 ish, she went out to the balcony, the floor was cool under her thighs this evening
She sat cross legged by the rail, on the smooth marble floor

And looked at it again

"Lunch to main apne room mein khaati hoon" she said

"How about dinner?" he asked in a SECOND

She felt physically weak at that point, imagining he was waiting for her text, that late at night

"Mujhe UP ki kadhi? mast lagti hai, mere dabbe mein kadhi de dena" she said

"My wife would make the best karhi in the world" he said๐Ÿ˜ณ

She stared at that statement, and her butterflies went away
There is nothing to fear, he still loves his wife

His lunch offer was merely a thankyou gesture

"Woh bhi UP ke thi?" she struggled with her Hindi

"Nupur Misra" he texted

"She made the best dahi vade, kathel ki subzi and karhi"

"So its not kadhi?" she asked

"No it isnt" he told her flat out

"D aur R mein kya antar hai?" she asked him logically

"Swaad ka" he said unflinchingly

"U dont want me to make karhi for you Suvechha" he said after she didnt respond, her smile at the swad comment turned into a self conscious moan when she saw him say her full name again

"Itna waaeta banate ho aap?" (bad)

"I dont cook much... didnt have to" he said

"Lunch mein kya dabba bharte ho?" she asked like a Mumbaiya

"School mein khaata hai"

"Karyalata khau kya?" (she cudnt stop before sending a Marathi line, do u also eat at work?)

"Hoye" he responded

"Aapki Marathi shuddha hai" she said

"Ek shabd mein jaan liya"

"eka shabda purese aahe" (one is enough)

"Nihar so gaya?" she asked

"Abhi... after I started texting"

"Aadhya usko pooch rahi thi" she declared

"He is quickly becoming her gaming idol isnt he?" he asked smiling

"Barobar" she said

"Is week vapas Mumbai jaana hai?" she asked to make conversation
"Nahi... karhi seekhne ki koshish karni hai mujhe" he spoke in perfect Hindi
She smiled fully... pleasured


Edited by Nisha0604 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Aaah!!! ID awesome update alert!  Thank you Nisha!
So cute their texting each other and how quickly he is responding.

Neel is really a cutie...now going to learn cooking so he can deliver karhi๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

"Can I buy you lunch sometime?" he asked
She didnt respond to that, carried the heart pounding and flutter in her stomach for the next 4 or so hours
Along with the unanswered text


Oh lovely... Iru ... Innum fulla padichu mudiyala. I thought I hv to respond to this one.
I will finish reading the rest if the update and get Bk . I've not registered the title also.
๐Ÿ˜† .

And good morning
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nisha ... I love this story more than sosy now..
Damn... Poor suvecha.. A simple gesture also she has to think so much just coz of that #### rutwik
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Posted: 8 years ago
Maine to  behnon,  Neel  ko Apna pehle hi declare kar rakha hai...Tum Sab koi aur dhoondhon. Super super super...suvechcha can't escape this concern, this apnapan. Chalo Aaj hi karhi banati hoon. 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Shru

LAATH bhi maara to BEHEN kehkar
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Posted: 8 years ago
Acccho!! This is getter better and better every day...
Ayyo this texting is leaving me swooning...

D and R ... I'm telling you guys this has got me wrapped ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: taramira

Maine to behnon, Neel ko Apna pehle hi declare kar rakha hai...Tum Sab koi aur dhoondhon. Super super super...suvechcha can't escape this concern, this apnapan. Chalo Aaj hi karhi banati hoon.




Nooo , I contest shruthi...
I've put my kerchief earlier ๐Ÿ˜†