fan fiction (my tale) - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
undoubtedly one of the best i've ever read! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
itss too good please if u get time do continue
neetu23 thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

i realli liked dis fan fiction...it waz great and realli funni

i think u shud continue

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Posted: 18 years ago
i cudn't stop laughing !😆 plz continue that was hilairious !
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Posted: 18 years ago

wow...thats was soo good...plz continue....

~sweta~

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Posted: 18 years ago

😆ok so here goes.

before: Mishty falls into kritik.

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Mishty: ouch that hurt.

Kritik lying on the floor with his arm tangled: you're telling me. I have a suggestion for you too.

Mishty relieved that kartik didn't seem mad: yep what?

Kritk: could you eat less, i mean how much do you weigh my stomach really hurts ouch ouch owwwwwwwww.

Mishty smiling: I think i accidently may have punched you in the stomach anywayz i am sorry.

Kritik pushes mishty aside: fine what ever but you are clumsy, you do so many things accidently you know.

Mishty: forget that, think about what we should do about kripa and angad i can bear to see them.

Kritik: I don't know. Let me think. give me some time.

Mishty: Well ok.

Kritik walks around the living room thinking.

Mishty: how about know, did you think of an idea.

Kritik: what it's only been 5 mintues.

After another 5 mintues mishty asks again.

Kritik: Leave me alone, i don't blame angad for not marrying you you are a pain in the butt.😆😆 If i were angad i would have shipped you to africa by now.😆😆

Mishty: what????????

Kritik: nevermind, let me think.

Mishty taps her finger humming to the tune of kyph ofcourse.

Kritik thinking: i think when she fell she hurt her head hard, she can't shut up can she ugggggggggggg.

Kartik: You know what, i just thought of something amazing omg.

Mishty happy: A way to get kripa off angad back.

Kritik: Well, atucally it's that kkusum is going to be on for an hour today and i can't wait becuase i love kkusum. 😆😆

Mishty really mad walk s away.

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ejaz4eva thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

wht do yall think? yep awesome.

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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 lolz!!!!!!! wnderful! 
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Posted: 18 years ago
cool. kusum part was great. 😆😆😆
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Posted: 18 years ago

a funny fanfic its really great

i loved it

plz cont

waiting for ur next part

lots of love

esha