Originally posted by: savindi.db
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hey sweet heart..🤗you made me like this☺️uff i was flying in akdhalandbut came out from it when i read the next part..hehe😆omg both of them busy in their fantasies☺️superb os drupdate an other os soon and eagerly waiting for it..thank u soo much for the pm dr🤗
Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
It was nice dear..so the concept was also yours 😊
It was sensuous and the choice of ur words were decent.
I am generally not comfortable.commenting on these kind of updates(though I read them)😆but u made it easy for me.
So it remained a fantasy,Jalal's concentration was only on her back and not face..so he missed it 😉 😆
Thnx for the pm.
Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
NICE OS ...😊
Originally posted by: Geetbaala
It was a beautiful read Vincy.. Nice OS dear.
It was sensuous..ending was good both were fantasizing about each other.
Originally posted by: natashathakur
Lovely os dear n plz continue n update
Originally posted by: avika444
Lovely os vincy
So this was from ur side
I liked it
Thanks for pm :-) :-)
Originally posted by: mamtasingla
nice shot
jalal didnt see the expression of jodha
both r busy in their fantasies😳
Originally posted by: lovespari
hii dear..
read both os in one go
both r nice n lovely dear
the vow is really diffrnt nvr read tht a girl is vry rude n whn she fall in love she try to change hrself normally its happen with boys u hav wriiten vry beautyfully dear
n fantancies was superb lovly os dear
so this was fr ur side nice concept .liked it
pless pm me also whn u updt nxt os.
Nice os dear... Both in their fantasies.. It was great.. Thanx for the pm...
Originally posted by: RSlovesJA
awesome perfect title... both missed good chance.. let it full filled in next os😉
Awesome buddy plz continue dear
Originally posted by: shruthikarthik
FIRST OS SOULMATE'S VOW
Very nice OS VincyJodha's characterisation was well described ek dam. hunterwaali behaviour 😆Jalal came in her life ..may be his indifference hurt her.. his ignorance n retort resulted a changed Jodha.. very well written ..Enjoyed reading it .. Pls keep writing more .. Thanks vincy for pm😃A big round of applause to U dear for putting others ideas in to beautiful words 👏👏👏U r doing a great job dearie 🤗Thank u savindi for the OS req😛Shruthi darling !!!Thank you so much dear. Lots of hugs and love for you !!! 🤗❤️❤️OS No 2VINCY 🤗Girl U write amazingly 👏⭐️That was a lovely read😳 Good concept 😳That was Passionately sweet one beautifully penned down by UThe words U choose to weave the hot scenes r soo 😎😉 given the uniqueness to this OS⭐️And the ending was just SUPERB ... Awaiting for the next oneThank u so much for pm dear😃
Originally posted by: cuty1997
nice idea
superbly writtenthanks for pm meThank you dear, your welcome.😉
second os also superbi truly loved itand this thread idea is nice
awsome updates dear
Update nxt asap...
Plz pm me
Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan
awesum os.
both r superb.fabulous they were.
jo was a girl of attitude becoz of lot of pampering .
she always make fun of guyz nd crush their hearts bt when she met ja it was she who give her attention him.
she wondered why he didn't fell for her beauty .
she get jeaolus seeing ja n ruks together.
ja angered on her for hurting ruks .
nd when she came to know that ruk is his sister she take a sigh of relief.
she realizes that she loves him nd vows to change her attitude .
Deepa darling,Thank you for reading and enjoying this OS. 🤗
nd second part was amazing.
for once i really thought it was reality bt reading nxt i felt sad that it was just ja imagination.
bt his fantasy was really hot n erotic .
really so sensual nd even jo having same desire.
bt he come out of his dream land nd left from there before noticed by jo.
bt he don't know that jo saw him nd hv same fantasy n desires as like him
really love it.
Originally posted by: 1357raksha
nice os... ayiooo it was jalals imagination. ...
thanks for pm...
Originally posted by: AkankshaJA
Awesome os... 👏 😳
Once Upon An Essay
My day always starts the same way, which is receiving a kiss on my forehead from mama and hearing her call out my name with her sweet voice. Mama is always the first one to wake up followed by me and lastly papa. I'm not sure about my baby sibling though, for he or she is in mama's tummy but mama once told me that my baby sibling spends most of the time asleep so I guess it's good to say that they are asleep too.
Papa always wakes up late because he works till late hours. But papa's late isn't really late for he is always in the dining hall when I am all dressed up. Papa always makes sure he spends time with me no matter how busy he may be. Papa always attends my school functions and takes me to the park and plays football with me.
Coming back to my normal days, every morning at breakfast, papa would tease mama either by saying how her cooking isn't nice or that her dress makes her look fat causing mama to be angry at papa. The first time I understood what was happening I pulled papa to a side and asked him why he was bullying mama when her food was nice and her dress made her look pretty.
Papa just laughed said that he was not bullying mama but he was actually teasing her. I asked papa isn't teasing and bullying the same? Papa replied that bullying is when someone says something very mean to another person to hurt them and that it is a very bad thing to do to someone and teasing is an attempt to pro... What's that word? Pro... provoke someone in a playful way. Then you like it when mama is angry at you papa I asked him and papa said that he likes it when mama gets angry because after a while mama would have this small smile on her face.
Since then I just enjoy watching papa tease mama because mama's reaction to papa's teasing is so fun to watch. My papa and mama are just so... What's that word again? A... Ado... Adorable. Many don't believe papa and mama when they say that their marriage was an arranged marriage, because papa and mama love each other so much. Actually they said something else too but I was too young to understand them.
I really love listening to stories about both papa and mama and how they met me, they make me so happy. I am thankful to have such a great papa and mama who love me and take good care of me. I couldn't have chosen anyone better to be my papa and mama.
I ended my essay by saying thank you to my papa and mama and that I love them so much. As I went back to my sit, I looked over to where papa and mama were seated and waved at them. Mama was crying and kissing flying kisses to me while papa had a proud look on his face with eyes filled with unshed tears.
And I knew then that papa and mama would never be as proud as they are at their adopted son.
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