Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

Destructive Love/Pg.146-16Oct

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pg.1---- intro ch.1

pg.9--- ch.2

pg.13--- ch.3&4

ch.5--- pg.20
ch.6---pg.30

ch.7---pg.34

pt.8---pg.37

pt.9---pg.42

ch.10---pg.50

Ch.11---pg.55

ch.12--pg.60

ch.13--pg.68

ch.14---pg.76

ch.15--pg.80

ch.16---pg.86

ch.17--pg.90

pt.18--pg.94

ch.19---pg.101

pt.20---pg.106

pt.21--pg.109


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pt.22---pg.115

pt.23---pg.121

pr.24--pg.127

pt.25--pg.134

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Un Mein Kuch Baat Hi Thi Aesi...

Dil Naa Dete toh Jaan Chlii Jati!!



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||Maan Singh Khuranna||eK garoor ek janoon;a player who know very well how to play and WIN.To him only two things matter Money & Power .In the age of 24 he has well established business in London,intelligence which even his rival adore,dynamic attitude with killing eyes which always made girls drool over this stunning handsome BUT he dsn't care.Because he is too much busy in two important acts of his life "to hate Sukhdev Laal Handa & success of his Dream project


|||Geet Handa|| Rose princess;daddu ki jaan,Brij bhaiya ki heart beat,mom dad ki pari.For her; world is still a fairy land & LOVE is the only thing for which people have come on earth.But destiny played its game...Far from her protective family in strange land of London with the Dusht Danav? Her hate of first sight!

What if he follow his lust?What if she melt in her desire.What will happen when sparks between them brust into helpless LOVE..the LOVE which not only shattered the world around them but their soul too.


  Its your Mahi again. Dont be gussa,Will continue my continued FFs. This FF is completed,I wrote some time ago. So, It will be updated on Daily basis. But ofcourse..ache Long comments k bdle mein๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Chapter#1



   He stepped in his grand bedroom which was illuminated by dim lights of candle only.Locking da door behind him he walked further to his king size bed hidden behind roses strings.Because of growing heat inside him he took out his coat & threw it away.Opening few above buttons of his shirt he finally moved away da barrier between them..Whole bed was covered wid fresh rose petals but their beauty had faded because of her.


She..Geet Maan Singh Khuranna was in deep sleep,ofcourse unaware how sexy her perfect porpotined figure luking in dis bridal attire.He sat next to her drinking in her beauty.His eyes gleamed sinfully on his own next action.He took a blossom rose from side table & creased her beautiful face by it.Its teasing softness made her sniffed in sleep.She removed her head from stretched arm & lay straight which gave his rose much access.


His hooded eyes follow da soft rose which went down from her cylinder neck to her deep clevage.Maybe it was heat of his gaze or da shocking coldness of rose which made her eyes open.
As soon her clouded mind registerd da world around she sat up,away from him as could possible.Geet shocked:tum?
His eyes glittered:tum yahan London men,mere bedroom men,mere bed par to ye sawal to mujhe pouchna chahey?
Her bitter reality hit her immediately.The sindoor spreaded in her maang,da mangalsutr tied around her neck was feeling like throns.
Wid all da hatness she could gathered she answered:jawab bhi tumhi ho,aur wjaa bhi.

Picking her heavy lehnga she got up from bed about to walked away but he grabbed her arm & pulled her back.His action made her balance lost.Her supple body crushed in his muscular chest.Heat of her breath increased as he settled his hand possesively around her hips.Maan:sawal jawab to ho gaya? . .ab aage kya?

She pushed at his hard chest,feeling of his ripple muscles beneath her palm made her so uneasy.She walked away from him to dresser.Her heart pounding rapidly.Her fingers fumbled as she tried to remover her heavy chunri from her head & bangles.Her voice loud in result of her shattering confidence:aage yehi k men yahan sirf apni family k lye aai hun..jo tumhe krna tha wo tum kr chuke ho aur ab
She paused feeling his body behind her.His fingers replaced her & in swift motion her chunri fall on floor.She lifted her heavy eyelashes up & look in mirror.His eyes..lyk dy were unknotting her backless choli.Her breath quickened as butterflies & nervousness intensified inside her.She tried to move further bt his hand slipped on her creamy stomach & pulled her more inside him.His whisper dangerously husky:naa men kuch krta hun,naa tum kuch krti ho...hmare beech sb khud hi ho jata hai.isnt it?
As his lips touched her sensitive earlobe,she turned to face him.Her mouth opened for warning or pleading but her words remain in her throat as he claimed her lips wid his burning mouth.
Her delicate figure blocked btwn him & wooden dresser.In a moment his tounge was raceng in her mouth on its own will while his hands roaming everywhere on her body..could possible.
Her hands went to his broad shoulder bcoz her legs had became rubber.His mouth dn traveled to her jawbone,chin to da softness of her neck.She hated da way her body had reacted for him.He contnued to suck da sensitive flesh of her neck while his hands abruptly undo her choli & against her will pulled it away.She wanted to stop him,she wanted to cover herself but damn his wicked mouth had stoled her every sense.His strong arms lifted her & placed her hips on dresser.His hands or his mouth nothng stopped for a single moment.
His hands pulled down bra steps while his mouth contniued to taste her newly exposed skin.Her each fibre shiverd at da warmth of her mouth.
She blushed furiously as his hand toyed wid her creamy untouched blosoms enclosed in exotic silk before.Countless moan escaped from her mouth as his kisses trailed down in her clevage..turning red her tender flesh. 
Her back felt silk sheet beneath,da gose bumps on every inch of her made her realized dt she was just in skin.Sharp tingling began to radiate from deep within belly when he lowered himself on her.His weight,his roughness,da coming next action . . .
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Wid almost a scream she got up from this nightmare.Her disturb breath echoed around.The atmosphere,her dress everything was like a dream but da closed door gave her kind of relief.She instantly got rid of her bridal jewelry & mangalsutr which Dadi maa  made her wore by emotional blackmailing.She luked herself in mirror & found a helpless girl who came in far land,because of a meaningless relation wid a strange man who was far from emotions,far from relations,only interested in his revenge just for happiness of her bro,for family. But will she able to face da coming conflict of her life?

 

Flashback(a month before)

 

    D.J voice brought chains of Dadi maa thoughts:tu yahan akeli bheti hai,men nashte par intezar kr rhi thi..lagta hai tera dil nhi lag rha.haan ab London men reh kr tujhe ab pind kyun acha lge ga?

Dadi maa walked away from window & sat on bed:nhi,bs purani yaadon men kho gai thi.yahan kyun nhi dil lge ga? Daar ji sahab aur unhune milkr ye haveli khridi thi.hmari shadi se Rudar,Mohindar,deepa sb k bchpan ki yadeen hen yahan. .

Then after a pause she added:abi phone aaya,Meera k kehne parr Maan aa gya hai.

D.J happily:Meera ki shadi hai,Maan use sgge bhai se bhi zyada pyar krta hai,use to aana hi tha.

Dadi maa worriedly:mujhe darr lag rha hai.use sb yaad hai.wo in 12 saalon men bhi kuch nhi bhoola.

D.J became quite,her face became pale as da memories of past flew in her mind,wid a sigh she added:hum sb ko un baton ko bhool jana hi behtr hai.Darjii sahab bhi bhool gaey tbhi to wo Brij ki shadi Meera se kr rhen hen.aur ab jb Rudar is dunya men hi nhi rha..mere lye to Maan hi Rudr ki parchai hai.

Dadi maa maa smiled:yaad hai?apni shadi se pehle hi Rudr aur Mohindar ne wada kya tha apni dosti ko rishte darri men bdlne ka?

 

 

  Her beautiful voice got their attention:to dunya k sb se khubsurat ladies yahan bheti hen aur men unhe hr jga dhundh rhi thi.

They smiled seeing their sunshine.Her kohl eyes shining like a pure,fresh ocean.Her smoth cheeks had glow of her youthful age 20.And her pink poo night suit on her perfect curvy figure was giving match to her innocence.

Keeping da tea-try down she slipped in comfort between them:to kya batien ho rhi thi chupke chupke?

They laughed,Dadi maa cupped her face lovingly:yehi k mere potte ko bhi tumhara trhan chand si dulhan mil jaey.

Geet hold her hand,could noticed worry on her elderly tired face:aap kyun preshan hoti ho?jode to aasmano par bnte hen,bhagwan sb k lye perfect match hi bnate hen.

 

 

   "luck?...What rubbish! men apni kismat khud bnane par yakeen rkhta hun." 

He stepped out from his car,talking wid Saleel on his phone.His black suit fixed on his muscular broad shoulder,his lips clenched in a line,his burning attitude...even da security guard found no courage to stopped him when he entered inside haveli.

 

 

 She handed tea cups to both of them:aur aap aese hi preshan hen,jin k sath bdo(elders) ki duaeyn hoti hen,unke sath to kuch galt ho hi nhi skta.

 

 

 "what umar ka lahaz?uske bche hue 4 dino k lye men apni company k bne wale 4o saal khrab nhi kr skta..just fire him.

 

"so dont worry aap k pote ke lye jo bhi bni hai wo usko jald hi mil jaeygi.She left da room & bumped in something hard which instantly made her balance lost.

 

  Feeling some one arm around her waist she slowly opened her eyes & instantly found herself lost.Clearing of throat broke deir eye lock.They instantly arranged themself.Brij teased noticing crimson colour of her little sis cheek:to welcome ho rha tha.

Geet embarassed,walked to her bro side & slid hold him by arm:jii nhi,men to inse ye pouch rhi thi ye yahan kyun aaey hen?

Brij nodded in yes:haan bhi kyun aaey ho?jinhe meri ladli behn ne bulaya hai bs shadi men wo hi allow hen.

He gave her one of hi cutest smile:pr men Dev Sinha aap ki ladli behn ka fianc hi nhi aap ka bestfriend bhi hun.mera bhi to kuch haq hai?

Brij laughed instantly changed da party & hugged him:haan ye to men bhool hi gya tha. .teasngly:chlo jao hum dono k lye cofee lao.

Geet mumbld:cheater bhya!She showed them thumb while he secretly winked at her.She instantly leave for her room blushing.

 

Dadi maa maa:ab bhi mene wo choti si anghoti smbhal k rkhi hui hai,Mohindar ne wada kya tha Rudr se..mene hmesha Geet ko apni bahu mana hai,ab tum bdl rhe ho.

D.J helplessly:ye mumkin nhi hai.Dev Darjii aur Brij ki pasand hai aur wese bhi. .

 

 

 "What da hell is this?" His roar echoed in whole haveli.Dadi maa maa instantly recognzd his voice:Maan. .

D.J made her understood da fact:chand aur suraj ka kbhi milan nhi ho skta hai.

 

 All gathered in grand living area of haveli as he continued to bark:clean it right now.

"hmare yahan naukro se is trhan baat nhi krte" Widout looking he recognize him by his power of voice,wid an equal strong voice he replied:aur shayad aap k yahan naukr bhiii kisi kaam k nhi hote..Mr.Sukhdev Lal Handa.

Guest luked eachother in shock on such disrepect attitude.Brij clenched his fist in anger while Mohindar who was standing next to his dad Darjii whispered:plz dad,bardasht kren Meera k lye,Bi jii k lye..bs 10 din ki baat hai,shadi skon se ho jane den.

 

He turned to face Darji luk straight in his eyes which were only showing hatness.Mohindar came downstairs & call servants to wipe his shoes which had spoiled by juice:sorry beta,shadi ka ghar hai mehman hen..bichare naukro se galti ho jati hai.tum sfar se thak gaey ho gen,pehle fresh ho jao phir bheth kr buht sari baatien krte hen. He called servant:car se saman nikal kr guest house men rkhvado.

He raised his hand to stop him in way:saman "mere" room men rkhvao.

 

Leaving all in shock he ran up stair,giving Darjii a challengng look he went to his room.Brij complained to dadu:ye kahan ja rha hai?Wo room to mene Dev ko diya hai.

He quickly went behind him.

 

 

"tumhari to awaz men bhi ek nasha hai" were da 1st words reached Maan ears when he opened da door.Dev instantly cut da call,luked confused when he walked in wid a luk of authority,dropped his coat on bed,placed his cell on charge:mera room hai,khali kro.

"room hai nhi,"tha".Brij said as he came wid Darjii & Mohindar.He luked in Darjii eyes:jo mera tha wo mera hai aur mera hi rahega. .

He softened his face as Dadi maa maa & D.J too came there.He luked away in reply of Dadi maa maa angry look.Mohindar tried best to cool da atmosphere:koi baat nhi,ye dono hi room share krenge.He gave introduction to Dev:ye love deep k bhai Rudr ka beta hai,Meera ka cousin brother aur Maan ye Dev hai Brij ka friend aur mera hone wala damad.Patting their back he said:tum dono jaldi se fresh ho kr neeche aa jao. 

All left expct Dadi maa maa,Dev tk his towel & went to washroom.Dadi maa maa luked at Maan who was asusually looking like a statue;emotionless:Tumhara aana Meera k lye sb se bda tohfa hai,apni kisi harkt se yahan ki khushyon ka rang nhi khrab krna. Dev aa jaey to fresh ho kr Meera se mil lena.He snapped:men intezar krta nhi,karvata hun..

Dadi maa maa irritated:to phir uper chath(terrace) pr washroom hai wo use krle..aur jaldi aa men Meera k room men intezar kr rhi hun.

 

 

His sadu expressions

exactly like "kahan phass gya"when he stood infront of still constructng wshroom.He opened one of da door & stepped in a narrow place which had only a shower which proof it as a washroom.He placed his clothes on its one of brick wall which already had a pink towel.He quickly tk out his shirt to gt da quick shower.But he stopped in his way in shock when not only da towel but his shirt too slipped on da other side.

 His confused mind state soon changed into anger on da thought"is some one playing tricks on me?". Without thinking anymore he climbed on da brick wall to get da look of other side & got frozed by da sight infront of him.

 

   He instantly lowered his body but his forbidden eyes just refused to moved a inch away.Wrapping towel around herself she was standng showng her back,busy in putting lotion on her arms.Ofcourse unaware there was some one in connected next washroom whose shirt she had droqed on floor.

 His breath was grew hotter as da towel was slipping from her silky back,exposing da creamy sking wid da seductive mole on it. 

 His eyes watched widout a blink when da towel reached her lower back just above her upper hips but just then she pushed back her silky hairs from shoulder & walked to her clothes to get dressed.

 Her this action gave him view of her face through mirror.Sharpness of her nose,dancing of her eyes,pulmpness of her lips...she sound completely sex package to him.She took her bra to wear it but his luck she instantly noticed tow eagle shaped lusty eyes on mirror.Holding her towel tightly around him,sh8ing her eyes in horror she screamed on da top of her voice.

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   Tina(Meera friend) worriedly asked:r u ok Geet?

Naintara(Geet mausi daughter) laughed:washroom men chuan b gya tha to dar gaii.

Tina laughed:to kya hua,chuha tha ladka to nhi.

Geet kept her hair brush down,her heart instantly raced on da memory.From last 1 hour she was tryng best to convnce herself dt it was just her 'nazar ka dhoka':Meera bhabi kahan hai?

Naintara:uska cousin aaya hai London se,usi k sath hai.

Tina dreamily:buht hot hai wo..kya adda hai men to dekhte hi fida hogai.ab asal maza aaey ga naa shadi men.

They laughed,Tina:tum ne abhi tk dekha nhi islye mujh par hans rhe ho..aur Geet tumhare pass to tumhara Dev hai ab tumhe kyun koi acha lge ga?

Geet smiled while Naintara replied:engagement hai shadi nhi!

Their convo broke wid D.J calling"Geet puttar jaldi aa"

 

    He was looking extra ordinary handsome,sitting in his casual clothes jeans & yellow t-shirt which was proudly fitted on his muscular body.He was using goggles to block shiny sun which had filled da beautiful lawn.Maan on phone:raasta chahey sahi ho ya galat bs manzil milni chahey to jesa mene kaha hai wesa hi kro.

Saleel on da other side of call:sb se pehle tu apna x-ray kra.m sure God ne teri body men dil ki jga bhi dimag hi rkh dya.

 Saleel was Maan legal adviser,his childhood friend,his best friend infact da only  2nd man who can say anything to him widout any fear(1st to Dadi maa maa hen naa).

Maan answer was asusall:shutup. client se baat hogai?kb aa rhe hen wo yahan tumhare sath?

Saleel:yaar tu to mare ga mujhe bhi marvaey ga. .ye asaan nhi hai.

He snapped:nothing ix impossible for Maan Singh Khuranna.

Saleel:fine. .par pehle ye bta wahan ladkyan kesi hen?

Maan:what?

Saleel:hbn. .wo meri love life men problem chl rhi hai.

Maan:par tum ne to last week kaha tha naa k tumhara breakup hogya hai.

Saleel:han to phir hogya naa. .Wo Miss Marry hain naa hmare office ki canteen men

Maan raised his eyebrow:wo. .widow,60 yrs?

Saleel shyly:haan. .kyun buzrugo ka dil nhi hota kya?

Maan:tum pagal ho aur mujhe bhi pagal krdo ge.

Saleel:uda le mazak,in a sad tone:peechle teen saalon se 16 se 60 sb try krli.par pta nhi mera perct mtch kahan hai. To bs done hai,pehle mujhe ye bta wahan ki ladkyan kesi hen men phir btaunga,mujhe aana hai ya nhi.

 

 Chan chan of her anklets caught his attention as she walked in hurry.She came here to set breakfast table on D.J order.He didnt turned his head back but still recognize'da morning girl'by her scent.As she again passed by near him,da cool breeze of morning caused her soft pink dupatta creased his handsome face. She stopped in her way when she felt a strong pull on her dupatta from behind. 

   In shock she turned her back & for a moment found herself stunned on his perfection..Perfect like a hero of fairy stories she had heared in childhood,

 

He lifted up his wrist & pointed toward his watch where her dupatta had stuck.She looked at her busy hands which were carryng heavy big fruit basket.He was lost how waves of her silky hairs creasng her cheeks,her juicy lips had a pout..Saleel yelling brought him on earth:gam se meri awaz chli gai hai ya tu sch men behra hogya hai?

She lowered her eyes,even she didnt made direct contact wid his eyes bt still felt herself reacting to his gaze strangely.

 He tk out her dupata from his wrist watch,aD.Justed his bluetooth:sexy!

Yeah he replied to Saleel infront of her'ab gaun ki chori ko english ki pta'

Saleel surprised asked:kitni?

He watched as she placed da fruit basket on table:so much.

Saleel suspicsly:mujhe aesa kyun lag rha hai koi chorri(village girl) tere aas pass hai?

She delicately set plates while he picked an apple:yeah infront of me.

Saleel:kesi hai?

Watching her he simply answered:nice figure..right weight at all right places.

While leaving,she paused & asked:will u like coffee or tea?

So she was aware of da english words he was using for her but instead of his shockng surprise he remain composed.While Saleel hearing her voice brust into laughter.

 Wid warning look in her eyes she snatched da apple from his hand & kept it back in basket,proudly cleared his misunderstandng:M.BA in Mangement from Delhi university.

They both looked in Brij voice direction:Geet yahan aao abhi.

Geet puzzled on her brother tone took steps to him & Dev.Brij:yahan kya kr rhi ho?

Geet:bhya wo D.J ne bola tha mehmano k lye table lagvane ko.

He gave Maan a hatefull look:aese faltu mehmano k lye aur bhi log hen..tum chlo Dev tumhara car men intezar kr rha hai.

He almost dragged her wid him by holding her arm.

His lips played a playfull smile:so this precious doll belong to Handas? Not Bad!



  So here is the 1st chapter. The story will continue in present,Past will be covered in 3 updates.

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Edited by AAKMH2 - 8 years ago
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congrats on the new story! update soon, waiting!

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congrats on the new story! update soon, waiting!


thank u love

haa.. i hv updated...Do comment jaldi๐Ÿ˜›  
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hi thanks 4 da fab update n cs! Hmm Maan hates the Handas! Maan admires Geet! she is gorgeous! Maan thinks she doesn't  knw hw 2 speak English bt she does! she surprises Maan! So they get married! She did it 4 her family! update soon

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Nice start want an interesting start to the story geet having dream then go back in time
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Superb start 
Plz continue 
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awsome start keep up the good work please update soon
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ooh! what a Mahi-licious beginning ๐Ÿ˜†

Am getting all excited to read more ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Dare you do a vanishing act again ๐Ÿ˜ฒ

I will send Brij with his talwar for u ๐Ÿ˜†

BTw great coverage of everything in one chapter ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

Loved it