Originally posted by: Texie-Shady
Nice OS Proteeti !π π
Loved the way u started out and the way u described ! Interesting ! But only this much ?I would have loved if u had continue more cause this seems really interesting , prince getting attracted by crystal . ... Unique concept.LoveSam
Originally posted by: Maverick_me
The concept is nice and you should write more...this is a preface I believe
What does the prince want to do with the crystal?
Originally posted by: .Enchantress.
Beautiful OS Pro! β€οΈ Thanx fr pm. Keep Writing.
Awesome concept!infact quite interresting. Pls continue dis..the lines were amazing. Even i can fully imagine the scene..but i am nt sure who was the one and who were the queens...and what u properly want to mean.. If u add some more parts for developing the scene to a story,it wud be great...u are indeed a brilliant wr8er... vil be waiting for it.
Nice OS Proteeti. It is intriguing and quiite unique. May I add my voice to all the others and request you to make this a SS at least?π
Originally posted by: Urmila11
First of all, thank you for such a poetic OS π
Let me try my hand on decoding π this blue Prince is none but our Darling Lord. This ocean may have double significance. Firstly, Dwaraka's ocean, and secondly, the ocean of births and deaths having mortals on its other side. A noble soul (that crystal) had come to His side through that ocean. He picked it up and observed it lovingly. Then left it again for reaching the other end to take another new garment.
You have written so beautifully that one can extract one's own meaning from it π Keep such things coming! Jai Shri Krishna!
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