Beauty and a Dusht Danav MG *** Ch 6, pg 129 ** new thread link pg 1

Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago

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Edited by dqno1 - 8 years ago

Beautifully written
simply awesome

This is the first story avi
Which I am going to read by yours
I was just thinking to send u pm to make it ss
Wheb I read half part 1 at kurbaan hua celebration thread
I will comment for part 1 here
After reading it completely

Commented on anniversary thread
lovely start

hi congrats on the OS! Part 1 - splendid update! beautifully written! arrogant angry MSK! he is drooled over! Maan is the centre of attraction at the party bt he gives a damn! he hates women! Mrs. Chopra after him n Maan disgusted! his past has shaped his thoughts! He saw wt happened to his dad! Pammi js wanted his wealth! his dad decided 2 commit suicide than be there 4 his family! Thanks 2 dadi KM was saved! Maan vowed never 2 fall in love! Maan excelled n became successful! KC is on top! Geet has no choice bt to wear the saree! she is nervous! Maan sees Geet in a saree! he is stunned n taunts her style!! Maan meets his new PA! he shouts Adi as he didn't wants a female PA! Adi tries 2 convince Maan! Maan looks at Geet n thinks she is another Pammi! Rahul after Geet! Maan annoyed! he sees her scared n assumes its her ways 2 trap men! Maan seethes at the note Sam sent! he will never b available! Maan dances with geet 2 avoid Sam! intense dance! terrific song! Maan so rude 2 Geet! he taunts her! Geet shocked! Maan n Geet;s inner thoughts well portrayed! she has been hurt by someone! she has had enough! she tells him to shut up! Maan angry she insults him! he mocks her! n then fires her! Geet shocked! update soonEdited by khwaishfan - 8 years ago

Superb Dhamakedar starting 

Wow you started new story.

This story my dear Avi i am totally gonna follow! Many congratulations for a new story !!!