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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja


[DIV]Its ok dear,it happens sometimes.[LOL][;)][/DIV]


Ur such a cutie pie
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Posted: 8 years ago
Mahima loving this story of yours...keep updating
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jyotic74

Mahima loving this story of yours...keep updating


Thank u so much next chapter will be updated tomorrow
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very cute story. Just read the last 2 updates. 
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: coderlady

Very cute story. Just read the last 2 updates.


Thank u so much...
I'll up date it today itself
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Posted: 8 years ago
i'm really sorry for making u all wait for this...
but i was really having a hectic schedule wid my school and...reading romantic novels๐Ÿ˜›
here we go
                                                           chapter-4
kp was really angry...
and was practicing sword in dangal sthal...
phool came there she was really angry not only b'cuz of kp but also b'cuz of ky...
she want to kill him but before that she wanted to know wat he was doing in ajabde's room..
but she removed all thoughts of ky from her mind and said to kp
phool-kp itna gussa kiss baat ka
p(angrily)-hume kisise baat nhi krni aap yahan se chali jaiye
phool-kp aaj aap ko hamari baat sunni padegi
p-kya baat hai phool kahiye
phool-pehle aap talwar chalana band kijiye aur hamari baat par dhyan dijiye
phool was getting on his nerves...but he controlled himself
p-ji kahiye
phool-kp aap isliye gussa hain naa ki ajabde aap se baat krne ki bajay ky se baat kr rhi h
p-haan
phool-kintu aap ne ajabde se gussa hone ka hak kho diya hai
p-aap kehna kya chaah rhi hain
phool-ham kehna chhah rhe hain ki kp...pichhle 6 mahine ajabde ke liye aasan nhi the 
ve kisise kuchh kehti nhi thi lekin ham jante the ki ve andar hi andar ghut rhi thi
unhone aap ko har roz patra likha...kintu kabhi jawab bhi nhi aaya
toh bhi unhone aapke baare mein bura nhi socha balki vrata rakhne lagi yeh soch kar ki aap vyasta honge kisi mahatvapurna kaam mein...aur wo kaam safal hona chahiye..
kintu kuchh din pehle khabar aai ki aap bijoliya ke paas ke hi rajya mein rajnaitik sambandhon ke baare mein vartalap krne aaye hain
ajabde na aapke saare pasandida mishthan banaye
bahut din baad unhe itna prasanna dekha tha humne...unhe pura vishwas tha ki aap aayenge unse milne
kintu aisa nhi hua aap bijoliya aaye bina hi chale gye
kp did'nt said even a word so phool thought to continue
phool-ttot gyi thi ajabde uss din...uss din se unhone aapse saari apeksha khatam kr di
ek din humne unse aapke baare mein baat ki...
humne kaha ki aap unke layak hi nhi hain kyunki ham bahut gussa the 
kintu tab bhi unhone kaha ki aapka koin dosh nhi unhe lagta hain ki ve apke yogya nhi hain isliye aap unse milne nhi aaye
6 mahine intzaar karane ke baad bhi aapko aisa nhi lagta ki apko ajabde ka dil phir se jeetne ka prayas krna chahiye...
unhone ek baar aapse baat nhi ki toh aap itna naraz ho gye aapne toh unke patron ke uttar nhi diye toh bhi ve aapke khilaf ek shabda sunne ko raazi nhi hain...
apne galti toh ki hai kp aur ab vakt galti ko sudharne ka
kp had tears in his eyes
p-aapka dhanyawad phool ab bas aap dekhiye ki hum ajabde ka dil kaise jit te hain
he went away 
phool was on her way to her room she was very much engrossed in her thoughts that she collided eith someone...and fell down with that someone over her
her eyes were closed when she opened them
phool-ky aap kya kar rhe hain yahan
he was smiling b'cuz they were very close to each other he was above
thats when she noticed and got up pushing him aside
they both stood up
phool-kya baat hain aap hame aise kyun dekh rhe h
he was just admiring her beauty
but her voice got him back to his senses...
ky-hume aapse kuchh baat krni thi
phool(jealous)-apko humse kya baat krni hain baat toh aapko ajabde se krni hoti h naa
thats when he noticed that phool was jealoused ...he thought she might have seen her wid ajabde and she was completely jealos
seeing ky lost in his thoughts 
phool-achha ab hum chalte hain
and she went away
ky to himself-phool aap bhi jal rhi hain...iska matlab ek teer se do nishan...
ab toh phool hum apse bulwa ke rhenge i aap humse kitna pyar krte hain
in kp's room
kp to eklingji-he eklingji apka bahut bahut dhanyawad jo apne hume ajabde se milaya...
kitni achhi hain ve...humare baare mein kitne achhe vichaar hain unke
ab hume unhe yeh batana hi hoga ki ve hamare yogya hain galti unse nhi humse hui thi...
hum par apni kripa barsaiyega 
in ajabde's room
ajabde to kanhaji- he kanha ji hume kshama kar dijiyega..hume ni pata hum kp ko peeda dekar sahi kr rhe hain ki nhi 
ky-ajabde aap bilkul sahi kar rhi hain
ajabde turned around and said-ky aap yahan
ky-ajabde kp ne apko bahut dukh diya ab aapke liye ve thodi si peeda toh ve sehen kar hi skte hain...aur vaise bhi aapko pata hai ki phool ne bhi apko hamare saath dekh liya ve bhi badi gusse main hain
a-are hume phool ko sab sach bata dena chahiye...unhe kitni peeda ho rhi hogi
ky-ajabde aapko chinta krne ki koin avashyakta nhi hai...bas yeh natak humen kuchh dino ke liye krna taaki phool maan jaayen ki ve humse prem krti hain aur kp ko unki galti ka dand mil jaaye
a-apko lagta hai hum jo kr rhe hain vo sahi kr rhe hain
ky-haan ajabde hum kuchh galat nhi kr rhe hain...isliye aaram se so jaiye hum bhi chalte hain
he went away
all four of them were trying to sleep...
but sleep escaped from them...
all of them knew tomarrow's gonna be a long day...

precap-ab jealousy toh hogi hi naa baba..๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for updating ๐Ÿ˜›
Waiting for more jealousy & love confession ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Annei123

Thanks for updating[:P][DIV]Waiting for more jealousy & love confession[:$][/DIV]


Thank u so much... will update asap
And ur my firstie
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey nice update 
So phool is all gyaani now and she's getting jealous
I like KY he's a cool dude
Can'take wait to see how KP impresses Ajabde

 please edit the title so that everyone knows about the new update 
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi Mahima,

I think that's your name. I just read all the parts of your story and I wanted to tell you that I really liked it!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

I love KY and Ajab's friendship, and Phool and KP's jealousy!! ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Eagerly waiting for your next update!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

-Lots of love and creativity,
RuVa