Anahita and Neil FF Unconditional love [Chapter 11, pg 10] Complete - Page 2

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Chapter 2 ( b )
So the whole day pased and annie was in the par mi ng area with tina as nd teeshay just came
T. Hey . You both wanna come im have diner with neil if you wannns join us .?
T . Ya of course , im in and annie are comin ?
An . Huhh . Not tpday actually i m very tired
T. So you wanna go homf and cook food beibg tired?
A. Oh well youte rigjt , ill go
Ti. . Great in that time neil comes
T . So evryone get in the car , were gonna enjoy!
When anie opened the door neil also went to open the gate for her and he touched her hand , annie looked at him with her big eyes and then removed her hand from there and got in the car . They reached the restaurant they ordered . Apperntly coupled come to dance on Th e dance floor , the song chahun mein ya na played :
Teeshay asked tina and she agrreed so they head off to the dance floor, n and a were looking at them and meanwhile n looked at annie and smiled in his own and then basixally evryone was dancing and the owner of the resysurant was teeshay friend so teshay gave him a signal to bring neil and anie so he did . And he brought fircebilly them to rhe dance floor . Neil put his hands on her waist and she puts her hands on his sholders . The song chahun main ya na :
Itna bata doon tujhko
Chahat pe apni mujhko
Yun toh nahin ikhtiyaar
Phir bhi ye socha dil ne
Ab jo laga hoon milne
Poochhun tujhe ek baar.. oho..
They wre lost in each other ...
Tu yeh mujhko bata de
Chahoon main ya na
Apne tu dil ka pata de
Chahoon main ya na

Aasi kabhi pehle
Hui na thin khawahishein
O.. kisi se bhi milne
Ki na ki thin koshishein
Uljhan meri sujha de
Chahun main ya naa
Aankhon aankhon mein jata de
Chahoon main ya na..
They were dancing ,lost in each other s eyes , they realisdd and neil loosed his grip on her and annie as well and they both went their seats , neil was feeling shy and annie was blushing. Teeshay and tina joined them .
T. So you guys danced?
N. Uhh ya
T. Btw you danced very well
Both annue and neil looked at each other and blushed. They were silent the whole evening .thwy wre feeling good but shy , their close dance, that song . They ate and when teeshay dropped annie to tje bus stop ( he already dropped tina and neil)

T. Annie , ju st a question , i mean if you dont m mi nd
A. Of course not
T. Do you feel sth for neil ? I mean the way you guys were lost and dancing...
A. ( hesitatingly) no , no, of course not teshay
T . No i mean i was just saying :
Mohabbat mein loog gumshuda hote hai
Bas zindagi bhar mulakaton ke bahane dhoondte reh jahte hai
A. You know shayari
T. A little , take care bye
A. Bye.
Acar took annieto hher house , as soon as she reached she received a call
Caller. Did yoi get the job? How arethings going?
A.im in and relax evrythibg is under control
C. You know you dont have a lifetime right?
A. I will do as soon as posdible dont worry
C. Take care of yourself
A. I will
And then she cuts the call. Meanwhile neil in his house reminising the moments he spent with annie and gets a call from his mother
M. Beta , hiw are you? How is your job?
N. Fine the jobs going great how r u?
M. Im fine beta , use this srnd chanceit wont come again
N. Dont worry ma , im fine and go to sleep now , good night
M . Good night bye
Neil stood on the window for some more minutes siping his chai and then he left to sleep.
Meantime anirudh was out at the italuan restaurant where he usually met pallave in their past . He was sitting on the same table as in thepast . Pallavi was their in another table a bit far from anirudh so he couldnt see her . Anirudh was drinking , 5 drinks down , 6 drinks down and ... In short ... Terribly drunk he couldnt even stand up properly, at that moment pallavi rushed towards him held him :
P. Why do you drink much if you cant handle it
A. Your here , when did youu come
P. Thats not impprtant
A. Wonderful . You leaveme then you come then go, why ( aniru was drunk , he didnt knew whaat he was saying )
Pallavi took him to his car and placed him in the car and drove to gulmohar grand. Took him to his room taking special permition and a, in the room she placed him on his bed. When sshe was leaving he held her hand and pulled her towards him .
A. Where you going , cant you stay tonight with me ?
P. ( had tears in her eyes ) no i cant.
A. But why
P. I need to go
A. No. Youll never come back
P. Please let me go , and with that she left the room and , his pa saw her going out and smiled at her and then she left as well. And anirudh slept with deep pain in his eyes anda lonetear escaped from his eyes . He slept peacefully.
Raatein guzar jati hain
Dekhte, dhekte
Rastein kat jatein hai
Chalte chalte
Oh rahi , wo rastein kat jayengein
Chand lamhoon mein, agar tu unhe kaate
Haste haste .
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Edited by heartbroken1 - 8 years ago