Bhula dena mujhe - A sandhir os

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey guys I am back with another OS of mine. This is based on current track.

 

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Bhula Dena Mujhe

 

 

 

Bhula dena mujhe

Hai alvida tujhe

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Safar yeh tera, yeh raasta tera

Tujhe jeena hai.. mere bina

 

 

"Bye Randhir. Apna khayal rakhna aur please apne gusse ko control karna. Maine toh sehen kar liya magar shayad woh na kar paye. Aur ho sake toh apni mom ko bhi maaf kar dena. Please mere liye", sanyukta said with tears in her eyes and felt a lump in her throat. 

 

Flashback:

 

Sanyukta finally knew about Ragini and Karan. And she was ready to help Randhir. But a big problem caught them on their way. 

 

Ragini's brother found them and now they want Randhir to marry Ragini as she was pregnant with Karan child. First they denied to keep the child but then Sanyukta convinced them but they wanted a father for her child so that their so called 'izzat' doesn't degrade. 

 

Sanyukta went to Randhir and asked him to marry ragini as her child was her last hope to live. 

 

Flashback ends

 

Ho teri saari shoharatein

Hai yeh duaa..

Tujhi pe saari rehamatein

Hai yeh duaa..

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Bhula dena mujhe

Hai alvida tujhe

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

 

"Magar..." randhir couldn't complete his sentence because he felt week. He was broken listening Sanyukta's decision. He was crying. He didn't wanted to hide his anymore.  He was tired of doing so. "But I love you Sanyukta.  Main kaise Ragini se shaadi kar sakta hu."

 

"Randhir, kabhi kuch decisions dusro ke bhale ki liye sahi hote hain. Aur mera yeh decision ussi mein se ek hain." Sanyukta said wiping her tears.

 

"But..." randhir wanted to argue but Sanyukta kept her finger on his lips and didn't let him complete his sentence. 

 

"I love you randhir aur hamesha karti rahungi but I want you to move on. Please ragini ko woh jagah dena jo tum mujhe dena chahte ho. Usse woh pyaar dena jo tum mujhe dena chahte ho. Aur mujhe bhula dena Randhir. " Saying so Sanyukta placed a kiss on his cheek and then she placed her lips on his for one last time. 

 

They kissed for long trying to save each other touch. Finally both pulled back and hugged each other and cried their heart out.

 

Tu hi hai kinaara tera

Tu hi to sahaara tera

Tu hi hai taraana kal ka

Tu hi to fasaana kal ka

Khud pe yaqeen tu karna

Banna tu apna khuda

 

Tu hi hai kinaara tera

Tu hi to sahaara tera

Tu hi hai taraana kal ka

Tu hi to fasaana kal ka

Khud pe yaqeen tu karna

Banna tu apna khuda

 

Sanyukta parted away and gave a final look into his eyes. Their eyes spoke volume. No one wanted this to happen but destiny was such a bitch. It had it's own plan.

 

Khizaan ki shaam hoon main

Tu hai nayi subah

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

 

Sanyukta started taking few steps back completely indicating that it was now time for her to leave.

 

Khilengi jahaan.. bahaarein sabhi

Mujhe tu wahaan.. paayega

Rahengi jahaan.. humaari wafa

Mujhe tu wahaan.. paayega

Milunga main iss tarah, waada raha

Rahunga sang main sada, waada raha

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina!

 

Sanyukta gave a final smile assuring him that everything will be good soon and then she turned around and left the place and Randhir's life forever. 

 

Bhula dena mujhe

Hai alvida tujhe

Tujhe jeena hai mere bina

Tujhe jeena hai, haan mere bina!

 

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pheww done.

*looks left*

*looks right*

*run saving myself from tomatoes eggs and chapals*

*no eggs I am vegetarian🤣*

 

so guys how was it. I wanted to write something emotional so here it was - the crap.

 

If you liked it please like and comment.

 

Love

Ayushi

🤗

 

Edited by loveparsh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Aapne toh rula diya😭
But its was nicely penned
I was listening to Same song while reading 
Its awsome 
Thanks for pm 
Posted: 8 years ago
Rula dia yr tune toh
Kya yr sab writers ko bada maja ata h hum bechare readers ko rulane me


Very emtnl
Sandhir separated *sobs*

Bt really it was beautiful
Lover it


Love u
Keep smiling
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by newmoon18


Rula dia yr tune toh 

Wipes tears

Kya yr sab writers ko bada maja ata h hum bechare readers ko rulane me
Thanks but don't worry now durjoy ke new post ke baad we will be happy... sandhir to come close🤪

Very emtnl
Sandhir separated *sobs*

Bt really it was beautiful
Lover it


Love u
Keep smiling
Posted: 8 years ago
cvs jyada nahi hai kya
ab tum bhi rula rahi hu
emotional update
u penned it very well
keep writing
but next time i want happy ending :))))
Posted: 8 years ago
Ayushiii
Tune rula diaaa
Sandhir ko separate karkee
Tum ab cv's se bhi aage jaane lagiii
Yeh bhi kam tha aaj kal ka episode

Awesome
Beautiful written by u
Keep write more


Posted: 8 years ago
superb but emotional...
lvd it sooo much..
keep writing more...
Posted: 8 years ago
awesome os but emotional
cvs kam tha kya jo
tum v rula rahi ho😭😭
but really nice os
loved it
keep writing:)
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by anu_anya


cvs jyada nahi hai kya
ab tum bhi rula rahi hu
emotional update
u penned it very well
keep writing
but next time i want happy ending :))))

Thanks
glad you liked
will definitely give happy ending to other os but I have another sad os in my gutter head 
if time permits I may update that soon
Posted: 8 years ago
sndhir alag kr diya aosa kyu kiya
moi cryin cryin cryin 😭
sndhir ko juda krne waalo moi maaf nhi kregi moi aapke maggi ka masala chura lungi 🤣

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