FF .. # Mere Humsafar # chapter 28/52 - Page 34

Posted: 8 years ago
yup dekha bma bahu agar hosake tho apni bma ko maaf karde ðŸ˜†
Posted: 8 years ago
PART...28...
Akshara start screaming in pain...sneha and all staff came near her...
sn-akshara tu theek toh hai naa?
ak-aaahhh ! di...meri mera baccha...naitik...
she calls his name in so much pain...
when suddenly naitik came there and became shocked to see akshara crying...
nk(worriedly)-akshara...
he quickly take her in his arms...and make her sit in the car...
akshara continuously crying and screaming in pain...
ak-naitik...hamara baccha...
nk-akshara aap kuch mat kahiye...wo bilkul theek hoga...aur aap bhi...
he drive very fastly towards the hospital...
while in whole way...
akshara's condition became worse...
after some time...
they reached to the hospital...
nurses and wardboy came to help naitik...
naitik was too much worried for akshara's and baby's health...
akshara suddenly taken by the doctors to emergency room...
here naitik is waiting outside...for any news...his tears became unstopable...
nk prayed to god-bhagwaan meri akshara aur hamare baby ko kuch naa ho...
when sneha came there and put her hand on naitik's shoulder...
sn-akshara ko kuch nahi hoga naitik...
but naitik quickly move away...
nk-tum pls yaha se jao sneha
sn-par kyu ? aakhir wo meri bhi behen hai...mujhe uski chinta hai
nk(angrily)-behen...agar itni hi chinta hoti toh aaj yu akshara ka haath nahi chodti...
sn-wo meri galti nahi thi...mai toh bas uska khayaal rakh rahi
nk-jo aaj tak nahi kar payi wo ab kya karti...galti meri hi thi...jo maine akshara ko tumhare saath bheja...
sn-tum he meri baat...
nk-mujhe kuch nahi sunna...bas ek baat kehni hai
he joint his hands in front of her...
" pls ho sake toh hamari life se chali jao...mai tumhe humse kya problem hai...ye mai nahi jaanta...par pls hamare liye naa sahi kam se kam apni behen ke liye...uske hone wale bacche ke liye hi sahi...pls hamari life se chali jao...aur ye tum se mai nahi...ek pati ek pita keh raha hai...jiski patni aaj tumhari wajah se yaha hai...aur jiska baccha iss duniya me aane se pehle hi apni zindagi ke liye lad raha hai " pls sneha
this time she has no words except her tears...
sn(smile)-akshara bahut lucky hai naitik...jise tum mile...aaj maine jana hai ki tum sirf usi ke liye bane ho...aur wo tumhare liye...maine hamesha chaha ki tum dono alag jao...par aaj...i am sorry...mai promise karti hu ki ek baar akshara se milkar mai yaha se bahut door ali jaungi...life me maine tum se kuch nahi maanga...par chahti hu ki ye wada tum mujhse karo...ki akshara ke dil me mere liye kabhi nafrat mat aane dena...
nk-woh tumse kabhi nafrat nahi kar sakti...
sn-i know ek behen hone ke naate wo aisa nahi kar sakti...par ek patni ek maa hone ke naate wo mujhe kabhi maaf nahi kar payegi
nk-theek hai mai aisa nahi hone doonga...
in their talks doctor came from the emergency room...Edited by hirannaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Naitik quickly asked them...
nk-akshara kaisi hai doctor ?
doc-mr.singhania...aapki wife ki internal bleeding
bahut badh gayi hai...isliye hame abhi turant unko blood chadhana hoga...aur uske baad unki delivery...aap kisi tarah unke liye blood ka intezaam kijiye...kyunki yaha O negative blood group nahi mil raha
nk-O nigative...ok doctor mai abhi kuch dekhta hu...
sn-uski koi zaroorat nahi hai naitik...mera blod group bhi same hai...mai akshara ko apna khoon de deti hu...
nk-thank u sneha
sn-itna bura karne ke baad apni behen ke liye itna toh kar hi sakti hu
doc-great aap nurse ke saath jaiye...
sn-ji
and she went with nurse...
nk-doc kya mai akshara ko dekh sakta hu...
doc-ji par dhyaan rahe wo so rahi hai...
nk-mai dhyaan rakhunga...
naitik slowly open the door and came in...and quitely sat near akshara...
a tear drop came from his eyes...
he put his lightly on her stomach...
nk-bas thodi der aur aksara...uske baad aapko ye dard nahi uthana padega...hamari jaan hamare pyaar ki nishani hamare saath hogi...aur aap haste hue uska swaagat karengi...
after some time...
a nurse came there...
nr-sir !
nk-ji
nr-wo madam ko OT me le jana hai...
naitik hold akshara's hand tightly...
nk-par akshara theek...
nr-sab theek hoga...
naitik take akshara in his arm and put her on stracher...
and nurse wardboy took akshara in OT...
HERE AKSHARA'S OPERATION START...
naitik sat outside the OT joining his hand...and continuously praying...
after some time...
akshara's operation get completed...
and doctor came outside...
naitik quickly got up...
nk-doc ? akshara kaisi hai ?
doc-wo bilkul theek hai...
nk-aur hamara baccha ?
doc-wo bhi...
nk(happily)-iska matlab mai...
doc-ji haa congratulation mr. singhania aap ppa ban gaye hai...aur aapko beti hui...
nk-sach !thank u soo much doctor...
he happily hug that doctor...
doc-aapki wife ko doosre room me shift kiya ja raha hai...tab aap unse mil lijiye
nk-ji...thank u bhagwaan...
he is extremly happy with this news...
nurse came and told him...
nr-sir ! aap apni wife aur baby se mil sakte hai
nk(happily)-thank u...
he again came in the room...where akshara is sleeping...
naitik came near her and kiss on her forehead...
nurse brought baby...and gave to naitik...
he took his baby in his protective arms...
naitik's eye filled with many emotions...his face shows happiness...love...care...towards his daughter n wife...
nk(whispered)-hi baby...mai aapka papa
(because he did'nt want to disturb akshara )
baby slowly slowly try to open her eyes...
nk-aap toh bahut hi cute ho...bilkul apni mumma ki tarah...ekdum meri princess...
he lightly kiss her cheeks...
but baby start crying...
nk(worriedly)-aree kya hua aapko ?
when...
" shayad wo aapse kuch kehna chahti hai naitik "
naitik turn to ak's side...
nk(happily)-akshara...
he came with baby and sat near akshara...and again kiss on ak's cheeks...
ak-saari baatein wo papa se nahi kahegi...
naitik gave baby to akshara...
ak-kuch apni mumma se bhi kahegi...
akshara started crying...
nk-akshara...aap roiye mat...ye pal toh hamare liye itna khaas hai...
he wipe her tears...
ak(smile)-theek kaha aapne naitik ye pal bahut khaas hai...hamari pari ke liye
both kiss to baby together...Edited by hirannaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
nk-iski aankhe kitni pyaari hai naa...
ak-hmmm...bilkul aapke jaisi...
nk-ji nahi ye bilkul aapke jaisi hai...pyaari si
ak-naitik ye hum dono ka pyaar hai...toh ye bilkul hamare jaisi hai...
nk-hmm...thank u akshara...aaj aapne mujhe life ka doosra sabse anmool gift diya hai...
ak-doosra...
nk-haa...kyunki meri life ka pehle anmool gift aap hai...aur aapse hi mujhe ye mila hai...
ak-aapne hi toh mujhe poora kiya hai...
nk-hum ek hai akshara...aur ek duje ke bagair kuch bhi nahi...I LOVE U...
ak-I LOVE U TOO...
when one nurse knock at the door...
nk-ji aa jaiye...
nurse came in...
nr-sir ye letter aap dono ke liye...
naitik took that letter...
but akshara stop him...
ak-rehne dijiye naitik... mat padhiye ise...
nk-par akshara...
ak-mai jaanti hu ye letter jaroor di ne likha hoga...par ab wo mere liye marr chuki hai...
she hugs naitik...
ak-aapne mera har kadam par saath diya...aur usi saath par vishwaas karke maine di ko har baar ek mauka diya hai...par ab unhone ek patni ke saath saath ek ma ka vishwaas tod diya...jo mai kabhi nahi seh paungi...
bhale hi hamara rishta unke kaaran juda ho...par ise banaya hum ne hai...aur isme kisi aur le liye ab koi jagah nahi...
naitik threw that letter in dustbin...
and a happy family hug...
ak-accha ab puraani baatein chod kar ye bataiye...ki hamari beti ka naam kya hoga ?
nk-aapne kuch socha ?
ak-hmmm...bahut pehle se...
nk-maine bhi...
ak-toh theek hai...dono saath me bolte hai...
both said at a same time " NAIRA "
Naitik aur Akshara ke pyaar ki nishaani...
THE END...
SO FRIEND THIS IS THE END OF MY STORY MERE HUMSAFAR...
THANK U ALL FOR UR SUPPORT AND ALWAYS READING THIS FF...
DON'T WORRY I WILL WRITE NEW FF SOON...
Edited by hirannaksh - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by hirannaksh


maine sirf last part dekha
koi naksh scene tha kya ?
koi naksh scene nahi hain.. ðŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by --pranu--



koi naksh scene nahi hain..😃
acccha hai raat me jaagna nahi pedega 🤣
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by hirannaksh


acccha hai raat me jaagna nahi pedega 🤣
btw where is last part update?😡
Posted: 8 years ago
meri invitation kaha hain????/ 
Posted: 8 years ago
actually maine kuch story socha nahi hai...isliye
par kal pakka din tak update kar doongi
Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by --pranu--


meri invitation kaha hain????/
aree ruchu ne ff par dhyaan nahi diya isliye usse kaha

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