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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aneesha93
This was an amazing write up. Beautiful concept. Swaron going to random places in Mumbai. That was nice. Swayam though deaf and dumb has Sharon by his side always. True, love has no limitations and boundaries. This didn't look like it was your first OS. Very well written😃. Do write more.
Thanks for the pm

thank u sooo much ...means a lot

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main_tu_hamesha

@main_tu_hamesha

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: tinku82
Awesome concept...
Really liked it...😊

thank u so much

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

hello gal

first os was bang on

as i told you already the concept is just wow

and a very mature thought thats the thing i liked the most in this os

you know loving a person with his inability is true love but taking the responsibility of the inability is greater

i loved the way sharon understood here and swayams thought process nice

and the title in it is such a thing which makes you think so yeah

and with the last line you pulled it off soo well

i liking your writing style

do continue with it

love *_*

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow...first try n its superbb

Lovely os

Too good

Veey nicely written... liked it

Thank uh for pm

Keep writing

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Ananya

@ExpectoPatronus

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

nice attempt... i wish it cud hv a bit long... bt as 1st attempt u r amazing @nabanita... well done... keep writing... loads of love... 😊

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Mansi

@Mansi98

Goldie

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

It was really very nice os

Keep it up

Come back soon with another os

Will be waiting

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A true Shantanu lover *_*

@--Ana--

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

It was an amazing OS!!!
High on emotions:)
Speaks about true love <3
Loved it :)
Will wait for your future works :)

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome os dear
beautifully written
thats a true love

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LoveHopeMagic

@LoveHopeMagic

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

Wow...

Its a refreshing os..

Well written...

The concept was great and the lines u put at the last were touching...

true love only can felt from heart... without considering any disability .. loved the thought...

do continue writing...

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 8 years ago

awesome

loved it..

beautiful os

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