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Manan OS: Her Shadow part 2/2 updated pg.6 ( may 18th) (Page 9)

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 3:46am | IP Logged
well written update..

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Posted: 20 May 2015 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
comments updated above Smile
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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Thanks for pm me... Ur story made me cry..I just loved it

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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 12:42am | IP Logged
ok serisouly i dont have words to exprrss this.
loved it totally
wow had a beutifulo smile on my face just reading this.
please write more dear
bye sumi
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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 4:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lovelylav7

Its just amazing.. Ur story realized me love is beyond the problems.. I just loved it..please continue it and pm me

Originally posted by Lovelylav7

Thanks for pm me... Ur story made me cry..I just loved it
Thank you so much for reading and liking it. You tears are truly a compliment. And love, it's power is such, it can defeat all the problems of the world
Thank you so much once again Embarrassed

- reya <3
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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 11:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by RomComFan

This is seriously beautiful...that's the best I can say, this is so beautiful and you write beautifully.  Love the concept and devotion and the way that it's all expressed...Day Dreaming
All i can say is thank you, truly a huge thank you for your kind words. So glad you enjoyed the piece Embarrassed

- reya <3

Originally posted by pooh2015

This is the mst beautiful piece of work
Dam! Why aren't these tears stopping?
You deserve an applause
Cheers!
Aww..thank you so much. Your tears are compliments on their own. I thank you for your kinda praise Embarrassed

- Reya <3

Originally posted by pooja123456

Manik as nandinis shadow- beautiful
Thank you so much Embarrassed

- Reya <3
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Posted: 23 May 2015 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by moonstonespirit

This is so amazingly wonderful!!! Its so touching, so beautiful. A love like this is so poignant, so pure.
Loved the conclusion of the story. How he does everything within power to  let her attain the sense of independence. Give her the normalcy that she craves. 

Being their for her without letting her know that he is doing it all for her. Walking behind her, ready to catch her if she stumbles. He is not doing it for her safety alone, but he is doing it all for his own sanity. Because in her happiness lies his happiness. If she gets to know about the sacrifices he is doing for her, she will be crushed and he cant afford to let her lose her smile.  His love for her selfish. He would lie to her to save her spirit, to save her smiles.

Loved the video too!! Beautifully written Reya. Loved it Heart
Firstly thank you thank you and just thank for taking the time to read and for leaving such a beautiful comment that brought a smile to my face. I am so glad that you liked the piece and the message i was trying to convey with it. That Manik takes care of her this way, for her, but also for himself. His love is both selfless and selfish. Selfless because he can't have her losing her smile so he denies himself her touch, her touch while he is shadows her without her knowing. But also selfish because he takes care of her because he needs to..for the own sanity of his heart. 
I thank you once again for your kind praise..And glad you liked the short film, it was all sorts of beautiful <3

Much love,
- Reya <3

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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 12:04am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Naj91

Clap it is the best manan os i have ever read.i was crying when i read it.u r just awesome and in ur writing love is so pure...thank u for such a love story
Aww..thank you so much,,your kind words mean so much to me..truly Embarrassed 
Originally posted by khushboonankani

U have penned it down like it was beyond words and world...trail of tears were there...keep writing...:)
Thank you so much for your kind praise..truly. Hope you keep reading Embarrassed

- Reya <3

Originally posted by Humzy

beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written

Thank you so much Humzy Embarrassed

- reya <3

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