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Manan OS: Her Shadow part 2/2 updated pg.6 ( may 18th) (Page 5)

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by baisakh45

This is so beautiful. I don't have words to describe how amazing it is. You made me so emotional. Oh god right now I am a mess. It's just beautiful. It's the only word I can use for this piece. I will be eagerly waiting for the next part. 
And i just don't have words to express my gratitude for all this praise you are showering on me..so i have to just say thank you, seriously. Thank you so much for reading and calling my work 'beautiful', truly humbled Embarrassed

- Reya <3


Originally posted by Samiyra04

As heartbreaking as this is, you did a wonderful job penning it down. Kudos girl!
Thank you so much Samiyra Embarrassed 

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 5:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by kriti094

This is so damn amazing
badly waiting for the second part
i am a big fan of ur writing skills
Thank you so much for all your kind praise. Truly appreciate it Embarrassed
yes, next part soonish :)

- Reya <3

Originally posted by missviolet

Umm wow this is really beautiful. I love ur concepts they are heartbreakingly beautiful. I have read nandani promise before and i legit cried so much while i read that...and this too brought tears to my eyes. Their struggle is painful but i know they will find a way. 
You write well. I enjoy what you write.You should write more often. And please update this soon:)
 Thank you, thank you so much for your kind praise, honestly i don't know what else i can say in response to your kind words. Your tears are special compliments on their own, not that i look to make people..lol. but your tears mean that you felt the emotions i had hoped my readers would feel. 
Shall update this soonish :)

- reya <3
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 5:07pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Humzy

wow it left me speechless
literally made me cry 
loved it
cont soon
Aww..thank you so much Humzy Embarrassed 
Originally posted by Arshirox97

Beautiful!!!!!
Thank you kindly Embarrassed

- reya <3

Originally posted by ematamling

Beautiful
thank you so much hun Embarrassed

- reya <3
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aliyaangel

OMG.. it such a beautiful os..
i cant define how much i love it ...
they way u hve described nandiniz turmoil.. what shez going through,how she misses all those beautiful moments.. it just amazing...
n manik.. how can someone be soo loving n caring.. i mean he is doing evry possible thing to bring her back.. he wont leave her ever.. walk with her in every situation.. awwweee
im in love with this manan... both want the best for each othr.. n im sure its him whose behind hr..
btw i loved when she tried chcking his forehead he ws kissing her hand instead.. n the line he said about her disappearng image one..
all in all the best i hve read..
n this is truly my longest commnt till date..
plllzzz post the next part soon.. n ofcourse the short film too... :)
Oh wow..thank you so much ! I am so honoured that you wrote you longest comment for me Embarrassed Honestly, unsure of how to express my gratirude so i thank you from the bottom for reading and appreciating my words..means so much to me.
Every girl needs a manik maltorta..he is setting the standards pretty high for us girls.LOL
So glad you enjoyed this part..next part soonish :) yes, will remember to attach the short film link too.
Thank you once again Embarrassed

- reya <3
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by serenam

That was really beautiful. The way you brought out Nandini's need for independence, to be herself; Manik's need to protect and care for her and the final collaborative enterprise - very much in character, therefore all the more beautiful.

Manik is watching her, isn't he?

Waiting for Part 2...

Love,
Serena
Awww..thank you so much Serena Embarrassed Glad i was able to showcase the characters in a way you could relate to while i put them into a different situation and concept. 
Is Manik watching her ? i guess we are just gonna have to find out Wink 
Thanks a ton for all the appreciation. 

Love, 
- Reya <3
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 6:38pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bans8597

It was just hell awesome.. I literally had tears... Keep going you are doing a great great great job
awww..your tears are truly a compliment of their own. i thank you for all your kind praise Embarrassed

- reya <3

Originally posted by Chocomaniac

Beautiful and very touching Smile
Thank you so much Embarrassed

- Reya <3

Originally posted by cutypie04

Its amazing dea...Thumbs Up
plsss continue soonn
if possible pm nxt time
Thank you so much Embarrassed yes, will pop a PM when the next part is up.

- reya <3
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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 6:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by dhrits_24

Its so beautiful...The way u hv penned this down, I just don't have words to define its beauty and awesomeness...just beyond perfection...each emotion n feeling portrayed in a beautifully subtle way yet so precise that it directly is felt by heart and the eyes are making me realize their emotions and pain by continuously oveflowing while reading this...It just made me realize the importance of eyes...and the beauty they create in our lives...its so beautifully presented...ClapClapClap...Hats-off to u for this...
Firstly, yes, eyes are a beautiful blessing that we don't appreciate it seems. so i am glad that you also took that point away from the story..i tried to show how much Nandini lost when she lost her sight. Of course life becomes easier when one has a companion like Manik who pulls her back from the brink of darkness..but not everyone has such a supportive life partner.
And thank you so much for reading and liking it. Your praise means so much to me Embarrassed and when i touch a reader's heart, i can feel proud that i accomplish what i set out to do. So thank you once again.

- Reya <3

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by apps33

jst beautiful...made me cry... loved it.. will b waitin fo ua nxt instalment
Thank you so much Embarrassed your tears are truly a compliment on their own.
next part: soonish 

- Reya <3

Originally posted by musicialtie

m speechless Smile
awww..thanks hun Embarrassed

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