#2 Asya ff unique love part 18-23 *thread links in the index* @ pg 1 - Page 78

This content was originally posted by: suearmaniac

hehehe dhanywad

This content was originally posted by: -simmi-

oye hoyye heavy words marjava kudiye 😆

This content was originally posted by: -simmi-

Sad but true 😭
I hope asad could change that 😊
And for update

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This content was originally posted by: suganti

hi,was having exams yaar..tats why seldom come here.

coming to the update..

it was awesome as usual.👍🏼

zoya's past was so painful😭

that gary is such a🤬..can't believe that he raped her😡

hope asad will do something about this guy.

This content was originally posted by: Amin21

Wonderfully written sue👏

very painful and emotional update😭

Felt really really bad for zoya 😭😭

I wonder if you write it from zoya's pov 

how painful it will be💔

hope now asad take full care of zoya😊

and just kill that gary 😡

loved the update ❤️

Waiting for next

This content was originally posted by: sweeetyrocs

I can't imagine zoya went through this... 

It's very dad n painful to hear... 

Zoya is really brave...  Hope she gets well soon... 

Asad will b always with her... 

Update next part soon as n do pm me plzzz

This content was originally posted by: jas91

i m late again but this time wid choice

as i said i didn't wanna read this part

chahe u made it as short as possible but jo nahi hona tha woh hua toh na🥺

aur han i know twist change nahi kar ssakti thi cuz that will affect d story but attempt 2 rape kar deti toh bhi saame impact hota na Zoe pe 

that would have shook her d same & d distance & distrust will b still there

but u went ahead wid rape & i must say i hated it cuz i feel disgusted listening or reading about it

mera guess sahi tha but i so wished u would have changed to attempt 2 rape 

khair yes this is very sensitive & real topic what's happening these days but still this is bitter topic 4 me😵

& yes i read u will write Zoya version of d story later plz mujhe PM  kar dena cuz i don't wanna read that 4 sure😆
m not sure if i will write it or if i can write it...zoya jesi girls ki feelings we never know wat they'd gone thru...
attempt to rape ka mene socha tha ...but as i said before its gonna affect some points in the story further...i think it won't fit...sorry to show that reality...
i know its hard to read...jas abhi to story wapas smooth chalegi so keep reading
if i decide to give her pov then i'll pm u surely...minute details me pm pe hi bata dungi ok?

rest part was very nicely penned👏

Eric was very nice frnd Dillu also got 2 know

& Asad's breakdown & hesitancy 2 meet Zoe was believable 

PS- i know its stupid qstn i know 5 saal beet gaye but still i thought Zoya ka chori chori Asad ko dekhna in pool & desiring him was confusing i think jo reaction rinki aunty ke bachon wale comnt baad the were more apt than them. cuz jab tak Asad se she is not assured woh usse dar se baahar kaise aa sakti😕 bola tha na stupid qstn hai😆😆