oye hoyye heavy words marjava kudiye 😆Originally posted by: suearmaniac
hehehe dhanywad
oye hoyye heavy words marjava kudiye 😆Originally posted by: suearmaniac
hehehe dhanywad
Originally posted by: -simmi-oye hoyye heavy words marjava kudiye 😆
Originally posted by: -simmi-
Sad but true 😭
I hope asad could change that 😊
And for update
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Originally posted by: sugantihi,was having exams yaar..tats why seldom come here.
coming to the update..it was awesome as usual.👍🏼zoya's past was so painful😭that gary is such a🤬..can't believe that he raped her😡hope asad will do something about this guy.
Originally posted by: Amin21Wonderfully written sue👏
very painful and emotional update😭Felt really really bad for zoya 😭😭I wonder if you write it from zoya's povhow painful it will be💔hope now asad take full care of zoya😊and just kill that gary 😡loved the update ❤️Waiting for next
Originally posted by: sweeetyrocsI can't imagine zoya went through this...
It's very dad n painful to hear...Zoya is really brave... Hope she gets well soon...Asad will b always with her...Update next part soon as n do pm me plzzz
Originally posted by: jas91i m late again but this time wid choice
as i said i didn't wanna read this partchahe u made it as short as possible but jo nahi hona tha woh hua toh na🥺aur han i know twist change nahi kar ssakti thi cuz that will affect d story but attempt 2 rape kar deti toh bhi saame impact hota na Zoe pethat would have shook her d same & d distance & distrust will b still therebut u went ahead wid rape & i must say i hated it cuz i feel disgusted listening or reading about itmera guess sahi tha but i so wished u would have changed to attempt 2 rapekhair yes this is very sensitive & real topic what's happening these days but still this is bitter topic 4 me😵& yes i read u will write Zoya version of d story later plz mujhe PM kar dena cuz i don't wanna read that 4 sure😆
m not sure if i will write it or if i can write it...zoya jesi girls ki feelings we never know wat they'd gone thru...
attempt to rape ka mene socha tha ...but as i said before its gonna affect some points in the story further...i think it won't fit...sorry to show that reality...
i know its hard to read...jas abhi to story wapas smooth chalegi so keep reading
if i decide to give her pov then i'll pm u surely...minute details me pm pe hi bata dungi ok?rest part was very nicely penned👏Eric was very nice frnd Dillu also got 2 know& Asad's breakdown & hesitancy 2 meet Zoe was believablePS- i know its stupid qstn i know 5 saal beet gaye but still i thought Zoya ka chori chori Asad ko dekhna in pool & desiring him was confusing i think jo reaction rinki aunty ke bachon wale comnt baad the were more apt than them. cuz jab tak Asad se she is not assured woh usse dar se baahar kaise aa sakti😕 bola tha na stupid qstn hai😆😆
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not at all happy with the response i got this time..
i know that was my fault to give such an update...so noone is to be blamed
but abhi bhi hajam ni ho ri he baat...mujhe 60 ya 75 ke upar humesha likes milte he
nd now i've gone down...😕
mene kaha mujhe puraane readers wapas chaiye...so they came back nd even silent readers showed up
but regular readers gaayab ho gaye? wats going on?
any ways m thankful to those who read the previous update...nd cared to like and comment😃
thanku so much guys...nd this time mujhe 75 above likes chaiye
ni to no update!!!🥱
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