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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Interesting concept..
Sorry for late reply..
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Nyc update
perfect justification of characters
every bonding was written beautifully

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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 5:03am | IP Logged
Part 1:-
Riya is such a chirpy n smiley girl..
Loves Arjun very much..
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Part 2:-
Arjun loves rosh..
But rosh loves someone else..
N Riya love Arjun..
Uff..sakshi n Arjun bro-sis..lol..
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 8:24am | IP Logged
wow
amazing update
arni ka rsihta pka ho gya
both riya n roshni hurt
feeling very bad
continue soon
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Posted: 21 May 2015 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
AWESOME UPDATE 
U R SUPERB 
MIND BLOWING 
BOHOT BOHOT ACHAA HAI 
LOVED SAM RIYA ROSH BONDING 
FANTASTIC
 FABULOUS 
GR8 JOB
AB AAYA KAHANI MAIN TWIST
EAGERLY WAITING 4 NXT PART
PLZZZ DO CONT SOON
N THANKS 4 PM ME

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Posted: 22 May 2015 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Part3:-
Love bro-sis's bonding..
Arni ki shadi fix ho gayi..
Ab kya hoga?
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 24 May 2015 at 1:56am | IP Logged
part 4
after the convo with Mr & Mrs rathod , riya & rosh directly went to their rooms as both of their tears were threatning to flow down their eyes
in rosh's room
rosh run inside the room & just lock the door somehow directly fall down on the bed & buried her face inside the pillow & started crying hestricaly 
rosh's pov
no , this can't happen it just can't happen , how can i marry arjun when i love chirag & both of us just can't live without each other agar papa ki tabiyat kharab nhi hoti toh mein kabhi iss shaadi ko ha nhi krti ab mein kya karu mujhe chirag se iss bare mein baat krni chahiye ,( she took her cell to dial his number but suddenly she remember that chirag is out of town on a secret mission so she can't contact him ) shit , chirag toh bahar hai toh mein ussse kaise batau ,nhi mujhe hi kuch krna chahiye , ha mujhe arjun se baat krni chahiye , ussse sab btana chahiye , voh mera friend hai voh mere baat zarur samjhega aur voh shaadi se mana kr dega toh papa ko bhi bura nhi lagega , ha mujhe aisa hi krna chahiye (by saying this she wipe her tears)
in riya's room
riya directly went to washroom & locked herself inside & on the shower so everyone must think she is in washroom & can't hear her sobs or cry too
riya's pov
god aisa kyu hua , kya mera pehla pyaar afhura reh jayega , kya arjun mere liye bane hi nhi , kitna pyaar krti hu mein unse pr shayad yahi mere kismat mein hai toh yahi sahi aur arjun bhi toh dii se pyaar krta hai aur dii bhi arjun se shayad aur mein di ki khusiyan kaise cheen skti hu aur mein inn se dur rahungi aur dii ki khushi mein khush hongi , arjun ko bhool toh nhi skti kabhi aur unke yaado k sahare hi rehne ki koshish krungi
hoping that with the tears the pain she is feeling right now in her heart may be also go away but alas it doesn't...
the whole day was gloomy & sad for rosh & riya while others were happy
the next day
the pandit jii came & told the subh muharat for marriage is in nxt week
so , both the families get busy in wedding preprations , in b/w they didn't let arni meet & if they meet by chance & rosh tried to tell arjun abt her & chirag anyone from the family or frnds come to disturb them & she even can't tell him abt it & her hopes were also shattering as she was not able to tell abt it to anyone & here with riya she was participating in all the wedding functions doing all the works putting a fake smile mask on her face while her heart was crying bitterly watching her love becoming someones else
in mehendi ceremoney rosh put chirag's name c in her hand while riya left her hand with only simple mehendi design without anyone's name ( guys i don't know much abt the marriage rituals so leaving it & directly concentrating on the wedding )
the night before wedding
rosh was crying in her room unable to think wht to do now suddenly her phone rang & she saw the caller id & immediately pick the call
rosh : chiraag ( and she started sobbing on the phone )
chirag : rosh , jaan kya hua tum ro kyu rhi ho , kya baat hai baby
rosh : chirag , kuch sahi nhi ho rha , sab kuch kharab ho gya plss tum mujhe yahase kahi dur le chalo plss
chirag : but hua kya yeh toh batao na jaan
rosh : told him evrything
chirag : mein abhi aakr uncle se baat krta hu
rosh : nhii , voh papa ko bahut bara shock lgega yeh sunkr hume kuch aur krna chahiye
chirag : rosh mera transfer abhi delhi cbi mein hua hai , tum kaho toh hum kal yaha se bhaag kr delhi chalenge aur phir waha shaadi krlenge aur sabkuch thik hone pr yaha ayenge
rosh : pr papa
chirag : kuch nhi hoga , believe me
rosh : i believe you
chirag : toh kal ready rhna , i'll come to take you away with me...
the wedding time
everyone is present in the wedding venue
the welcome of the groom's family was done in a grand way
and now arjun is sitting on the mandap waiting for his bride to come & panditji order to bring the bride down
and riya with her mom went to bring rosh down but when they enter her room they found her no where & only a note was placed their in which it was return i don't want to marry arjun so i'm going away...
after reading the note riya's mom was about to faint but riya holds her & made her sit on the bed & she went down & call her dad & Mr & Mrs rawte also  come up when they got to know the whole matter they were really tensed & thought that wht will happen to their families status now unki toh naak hi kat jayegi aur kya sochenge log unke baare mein with all this thought going on their mind mr rawte look at riya & suddenly something strike on his mind
suryakant : dhamsingh , mere ek baat manega jisse hum dono ki izzat bach jayegi
dhamsingh : haa , bol surya
surya : kyu na hum arjun aur riya ki shaaddi krwa de
dhamsingh : ha , yahi sahi rahega ab pr ek baar hum bacho ko mana lete hai iss baare mein
Mr & Mrs rawte emotionaly blackmailed arjun to marry riya for the sake of their families reputation & same goes with riya
so , ariya have to agree for the marriage 
arjun sat on the mandap but this time not waiting for her groom but lost in his own world & here riya's mom get riya ready like a bride & took her to the mandap but riya was also not happy but she was more worried for rosh this time thinking where must be her dii & y she ran away like this
but ariya got married without their wishes
after marriage when riya came to arjun's house her family welcome her like their daughter not daughter in law & after all the rituals riya was kept in arjun's room & she was really nervous & thinking wht must be going on his mind
after sometime arjun enter the room & by seeing his face anyone can say he was hell angry
he directly marched towards riya & pull her down from the bed & pin her to the bed & hold her through her arms very tightly...
arjun : khush toh bahut hogi na tum aaj 
riya :Confused
arjun : ab yeh chehra mat banao mere samne jaise tumhe kuch pta hi na ho
mujhe bohot acche se pta hai tumne rosh ko bhagne pr majboor kiya hai, tumne rosh ko mujhse dur kiya hai& he hold her hand more tightly
riya : aah...no meine aisa kuch nhi kiya
arjun : jhoot mat bolo mujhe pta hai tum mujhse pyaar krti thi aur mujhe paane k liye tumne aisa kiya hai but ek baat yaad rakhna aisa kabhi nhi hoga kabhi nhi samjhi tum
riya : nhi meine aisa kuch nhi kiya , aap galat samajh rhe hai
arjun : mujhse jhoot bolne ki toh tum sochna bhi mt , aur bohot shauq hai na tumhe Mrs rawte bane ka ab mein btata hu tumhe mrs rawte hona kya hota hai, hr roz regert krogi mujhse shaadi krne ko tumhari life hell bana kr rahunga mein
by saying so he left from there leaving a crying riya behind cursing her fate

so , how was it ?????
 i know it was not that good & all your critism is most welcome 


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