OS - Relationships - Part II : Page 4 - Page 2

florine_20

@florine_20

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting. Continue soon

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kiran_kartik

@kiran_kartik

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

very interesting and different OS. awaiting 4 ur next part

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VENBA

@VENBA

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Brilliant start to the os..

Loved it..

Cant wait for the next update..

Please pm me when u update..😊😊

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Rohit kumar

@rnarayan

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Looks interesting, write further

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Sreelakshmi

@AngelSREE

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey... What an os yaar...

Is raman seeing any dream...

Ha ha ha... Lol..

Continue soon..

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Samantha

@Divancraze

Goldie

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Posted: 8 years ago

Like Raman I'm Hell Confused...

You have got to update soon!

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481473

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting.. But Ishu and cheating Raman! I am hoping for a dhamakedar twist that can set things right.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mannat0010

same with me...

Hi both,

Thank you for the feedback. Love the phrase 'thodasa twist' I hope the next portion will appease the need of the twist.

Just want a little bit of satire in my writing. Taking up the pen after a long period of sabbatical. 😉

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovablelove
hey,This part was Nice. Loved how u explain eating Nonveg and Pizza cos they are something i can die for! Jokes apart ,but this was really fab ,waiting for your next part to come up ,do pm me when u update but That had to be Raman and Ishita situation where they have to be in their passionate world! U changed everything! :( but who is that guy then,who is trying to woo The Great RKB?? PATI PATNI AUR ??

Thank you for your lovely comments.

Yup, the IshRa relationship is just like our eating habits...veg and non veg. I'm just trying my hand in different story line. Please give me a little bit of time, hopefully, will be able to update by today. 😊

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: xBabyAngelx
Poor Raman

Aha! The kind of situation Raman has put Ishita in, shouldn't he too face some flake? Hang on...😉

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