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Originally posted by: vrushanloveBeautifully written...loved it...do write more...
Thank you dear (:
Originally posted by: vrushanloveBeautifully written...loved it...do write more...
Originally posted by: sandhir_rdomg what a fantastic os dear.
lovely piece of writing dear.
keep writing dear.
Originally posted by: i_yatharthkRes
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Nice...nice...the situation and the song blends in too well...i did not comment first just to listen the song...
Sharon's feelings were very well depictted in it...
And you have left it a nice cliff hanger too...so please if you can do write a next part as in a two shot or a three shot...
So "its never too late" so not "the end"...
P.S:- thanks for the pm...nd do continue with writing
\Originally posted by: swaronicfanAmazing os...really love d way sharon realises her mistake of pushing away swayam through dance n it doesnt seems to be ur first work really hats off 👏
Keep writing 😊
Originally posted by: anudollBeautiful di
Lovely
Keep writing
Thanks for the pm :)
PART - 2
This world will never be
What I expected
And if I don't belong
Who would have guessed it
I will not leave alone
Everything that I own
To make you feel like it's not too late
It's never too late
"The healthy can't understand the emptied, the broken"
Broken, yeah that is what he is right now.
He was sitting in his room looking quite pale and weak. He looked like a soulless body. His eyes lacked the usual glint in them. Her words were ringing in her mind.
"I am comfortable with this book..."
"I and You can never be US"
Was it really easy for her to say all of that? To say that she was comfortable with their book being shut. They have come a long way now. When he thought she is softening towards him. Now maybe there's chance for them to be finally together. She had conveniently declined it by saying she wasn't comfortable. He knew she gets affected with his slightest move, with every touch, with every look. Then why she is ignoring it? Why can't for once she accept her feelings for him? More than Sharon, he was frustrated with himself for loving her too much to even risk her comfort. He wished he could forget and move on. But it was humanely impossible for him to do so. She was his life. How can someone erase his whole life?
Even if I say
It'll be alright
Still I hear you say
You want to end your life
Now and again we try
To just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around
'Cause it's not too late
It's never too late
*Sigh* "Maybe we are not meant to be"... he thought. With this he walked out of the house tired of his thoughts which were leading him nowhere; right now all he needed is some fresh air to calm himself down. He opened the door only to be shocked...
No one will ever see
This side reflected
And if there's something wrong
Who would have guessed it
And I have left alone
Everything that I own
To make you feel like
It's not too late
It's never too late
***
She was there standing at his doorstep, nervous, scared, guilty, and what not... Her heart was thudding loudly. Nervous because she was going to tell her feelings, Scared - what if he doesn't love her now. Guilty- she knows that she has hurt him beyond repairs. Keeping aside her thoughts, she rang his doorbell. Only to be greeted by person with a shocked expression. She was lost in his eyes which hold nothing but pure love for her. But wait something was missing in those eyes today. The Warmth... His eyes were empty just like his life was right now and it was because of her. She knew that.
Even if I say
It'll be alright
Still I hear you say
You want to end your life
Now and again we try
To just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around
'Cause it's not too late
It's never too late
Both stood there lost in each other eyes. With his eyes, he seemed to be asking in volumes. Why? Why she is not accepting her own feelings? She was here for him, explaining herself to him, giving answers to his every question, only if he let her do...
He turned around scared he might not make her uncomfortable. Her comfort has always been his main priority; he can never risk her comfort at any cost. She took a step forward, standing in front of him saying Sorry for all that she did in past. She wants to give "Them" a chance. He shrugged off listening to her, what if it is a dream; he won't be able to handle it this time. But she was determined to get him back. She can handle anything but his ignorance. The next thing she said left him speechless. Swayam... I don't know what I feel for you is love or not... I like being around you... I like it when you look at me... It's strange, I know... She could see hopes in his eyes, which only wants to hear one yes from her... To give Him a chance... To give "Them" a chance...
Both hearts were beating at abnormal speed. One nervous and one scared. She knew this was the time, she has to say it. Looking straight into his eyes, gathering all the courage finally she said what she always wanted to say him... "I like You Swayam..." " I have always liked you..."
The world we knew
Won't come back
The time we've lost
Can't get back
The life we had
Won't be ours again
This world will never be
What I expected
And if I don't belong
Swayam went blank for a second and when he finally got his composure. Without letting her speak anything further. Overjoyed, he simply wrapped his arms around her. Finally she has let him in, and this time he won't let her go easily. Promising himself he would make her fall in love with him soon. Breaking from the hug, they looked at each other, tears in their eyes, tears of happiness... Maybe it wasn't too late to apologize.
Even if I say
It'll be alright
Still I hear you say
You want to end your life
Now and again we try
To just stay alive
Maybe we'll turn it all around
'Cause it's not too late
It's never too late
Maybe we'll turn it all around
'Cause it's not too late
It's never too late (It's never too late)
It's not too late
It's never too late
...THE END...
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