||The World In Us || -A NiBir FF : Chp 8 Pg 31 : 13/11 - Page 4

Neha (known as ch@shmish also)

@___Neha___

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

wow wht a story!!!!
nibir will solve a murder mystery...
loved it!!!
plzz continue soon...
pm me yaad se :)

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Ashliana

@wayback

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Hey buddy...
Nice start...
Waiting for the next...

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mansi

@mansi_as18

IF-Rockerz

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

ohho... awesome update. ... waiting for next part

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zaara610

@zaara610

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

I am loving this story..
loved Nibir's characterization ..well written abi
Waiting for your next part..!!!

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Sowmiya

@..krystal

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

gr8 start dr...

i loved kabir's character... 🤣 1 girl for 6 moths thn change it!! 🤣

update soon.. waiting 4 the nxt one!!!

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ammu4u

@ammu4u

IF-Stunnerz

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

abi aswsum start...loved it.

waitng 4 the dark part

jaldi update karna😉

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Nikhad003

@Nikhad003

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is getting tooo much interesting XD Thanks my tweety for dedicating me this part...muwaaash :*

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blah-blah

@blah-blah

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

nice start

update soon!

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Prerna

@P_shah

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

sounds reallly interesinnggg yaaar...

continue sooon and nice witten i m proud of u beta..

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Prerna

@P_shah

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

sorry for late comment abi beta...nice post

very well written

liked it totally

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