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nibir-a horrorful love story-PRT 14 PG 42 (last part)EPIlogue pg43 upd (Page 5)

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 1:49am | IP Logged
Nice 1
I love reading scary stuff
Mere suku ka ghost...looks like ghosts too find him cute

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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anulovessarun

Originally posted by premc

That ghost has a past related to nibir which I would be revealing soon...you'll have to wait till then...!!
A NEW ENTRY IN THE STORY SOON...!!
oh!!!
maybe nibir's ex?
someone whi wishes to see them separate?
You have to wait for that...there's a lot of history...and mystery...to be unfolded...!!!
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sukku ka bhootStern Smile.nxt kis ka .. im loving this story. .continue soon yar...

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Ty...ty...tyHug
Will update the next part tomorrow...!!Big smile
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Posted: 14 May 2015 at 6:27am | IP Logged
Nice update...
Continue soon...

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PART ~3
Kabir and nisha were sleeping peacefully without any disturbance as the cousins too have left...kabir opened his eyes to see nisha sleeping peacefully ...They and cousins slept on the floor while watching the movie...he saw nisha and smiled and placed a soft kiss on her forehead and picked her up gently in his arms as if she was a small kid and placed her on the bed and covered her with a quilt..He decided to not to disturb her as she was not well the day before...
He saw that the cousins were not there...he picked up his phone to call them up..and saw their message that they were leaving...he saw that message and went inside the washroom...after a while, when he came back from the washroom, he saw that nisha was not there...he started searching for her in the whole house...but she wasn't there...he finally came out of the house in search of her..and saw her there sitting on the bench of their private garden...kabir got a relief seeing her...but no...she wasn't alone...there was someone with her..she was talking to someone...kabir silently went near nisha and and saw that there was a little girl over there who was sitting with nisha and the little girl had a dog along with her...a big one...kabir was quite scared of dogs but this one was friendly...he went near nisha and sat beside her..and said
Kabir:good morning baby...!!!aur waise ye bachchi kaun hain..???she's cute...!!
He said while smiling...!!
Nisha:good Morning Mr.k..!!aur waise is bachchi se Milo..ye hain meri nayi friend...riya..to which the dog started barking...achcha...ohh.oohkk..ye bhi Mera naya friend hain...snowy...
Kabir:hello Riya...aapko pata hain aap bht cute ho...!!aur aap bhi he said seeing the dog...
Riya:aap kaun ho...??aap nisha didi ke friend ho kya...???
Kabir:smiled:nisha didi ka friend nahi hun main bestest friend hun WO bhi best waala..he said hugging nisha tightly as if she was his favorite Teddy...
Nisha started hitting kabir as he was showing his tactics before a kid...!!
Nisha:kabir ye kya karne rahe ho tum..tumhe dikhayi nahi de RHA saamne ek bachchi baithi hain...agar WO bigad gayi to uske mummy papa tujhe aur mujhe bhaga bhaga ke maarenge..!!
But kabira being kabira...was not listening to her and still was holding her tightly... To which the little girl took nisha's hand and pulled her away from kabir.. Kabir and nisha both were shocked to see her strength...she easily pulled nisha as if she was a feather...
Riya:areee...nisha didi aapki nahi meli best fliend hain...she said in a kiddish way...
Kabir and nisha looked towards each other...
Kabir:are baba...gussa kyun ho rahi ho...chalo nisha didi Teri best friend hain...
Riya:haan Ab sahi bola na aapne...chali Phil aaj se main aul aap bhi best fliends...she said forwarding her hand towards kabir...!!
Main, nisha didi, snowy aul aap..best friends...him bht khelenge...!!
Kabir:haan...khelenge...bilkul khelenge...!!
They all started playing together...kabir would not miss even a single chance to romance with nisha..And every time Riya came in between them...and would snatch nisha away from him...and he said in nisha's ear
"Lo aagye do aur pyaar ke dushmannn... Yaar kabhi apni wifey ke saath romance hi nahi karne deta yaar koyi mujhe...pehle tumhare ghar waale...cousins... Aur saath mein wo saurav...phir Ab ye dono...tumhari nayi insaan best friend...aur dog best friend...lekin sabse best waala best best friend to main hi hun na tumhara...hain na nishu...baby...!???!!"
Nisha smiled at his kiddish question and hit him on his head...and said..."mauke to tumhe bhi bahut milte hain kabiree...lekin tum in mauko ka sahi faayda uthana nahi jaante..."
Kabir smiled at this gesture of her...saying this she ran away from there...kabir started running behind her with a water pipe in his hand...the four played in water for a while...when suddenly...the girl and her dog went missing from there...nibir thought that they left...kabir took this as an opportunity.. And pulled nisha towards himself..."kyun madam, Ab to pyaar ke dushmannn bhi chale gaye...Ab kya iraada hain..??"he said with a smirk...
Nisha's eyes widened listening to his talks...when suddenly kabir picked her up in his arms...their clothes were wet...kabir was about to move towards their house from their private garden...when...he heard something...kabirrr...!!
He turned back with nisha in his arms to see who it was...he was shocked to see viraj and vasundhara there...their eyes and ears were closed by their hands...as if they wanted to say..."humne na kuch dekha aur na kuch suna...!!"..
Kabir immediately puts nisha down and nisha hid herself behind kabir...they both were blushing like hell...however, kabir said...
"Aap log Ab aankhe khol sakte hain...!!!"He said while blushing..
"Waisee aap log andar kaise aaye...??"said kabir
"D...door khula tha aapka...to humne socha him andar aajaye...Hume kya pata tha yahan ye Sab..."said viraj
Vasundhara hits playfully on viraj' head and signals him to stop right there..seeing nisha's blushing condition...
To which kabir replied..."hehe...hum to bas khel rage the paani ke saath aur bachchi ke saath aur uske doggy ke saath..."while blushing..
Viraj wanted to laugh out loud at his actions...but however he stopped himself
From doing that..!!
Vasundhara said"aap abhi baate band kijiye...aur pehle jaake kapde badal lijiye...warna tabiyat kharab ho jaaygi...hum aaplogon keliye living room me wait karte hain...!!"
They took it as an order and ran as fast as they could...all this while kabir was holding her hand so that she won't feel uncomfortable before viru... They went to their room and changed their clothes...and came back To the living room...nisha went into the kitchen to make coffee for them...and kabir sat with viraj having a nice talk with him ...while vasundhara ji went into the kitchen to help nisha...!!
She stood beside nisha and took out a kangan from her hand and made nisha to wear it...she gave it to her as a gift...and it was a ritual in their house too...!!
Nisha hugged her ...and she took the four coffee cups and went into the living area...she served them the coffee and then sat beside kabir...they drank the coffee...and had a nice talk...
Then kabir said-aap yahan khud kyun aaye..aap log Hume bula lete to him aajate ...itni takleef kyun uthayee...aapko bas ek phone ghumana tha aur ye banda aur uski bandi aapke saamne haazir ho jaate...
Viraj-Hume yahan aane mein koyi takleef nahi hui...maa ko apse kuch baat karni thi to hum yahan le aagye...waise agli baar door bell bajake aaynge..!!he said teasingly..!!
Vasundhara-bas kijiye viraj...bahut ho gya...Ab aap shaant rahiye ghar jaane tak...aur Ab Hume bhi kuch bolne dijiye...!!
To kabir...hum ye bolna chahte the ki...aapne ye naya ghar khareeda hain..lekin abhi tak iski grih shaanti ki puja nahi hui...to him soch rahe the ki kal hi karwa lete hain..kya kehna hain aapka...???
Kabir - jaise aap kaho...!!
Kabir never believed in such things as grih shaanti aur whatever...it was just a ritual for him...but seeing the previous incidents...he decided to give it a try...
And thought that it will give them some confidence...
Vasundhara-to this hain...him as hi shaam ko yahan servants bhej dete hain WO log aapki help kardenge...ghar set karne mein...aur him aur viraj baaki cheezo ka intzaam kardenge...!!
Kabir-theek hain mom...!!
Vasundhara-to chaliye Ab him chalte hain ...chaliye viraj...much band rakhke...aap aaj kal bahut zyaada bolne lage hain...chaliye Ab...!!!
They left and went to their house...in the recent days, viru became a carefree guy and he talked a lot just like kabir...he started cracking jokes every time...
Nibir were alone in the house now...
Kabir-to madam Ab continue karte hain...kahan the him...??he said with a smirk...he was holding nisha's waist he was about to kiss her when they heard a crashing sound beside them...it was Riya and her dog again...
They were shocked to see her suddenly... They jerked away from each other...
And kabir said"Abe yaar...ye phir yahan kya karne aayi hain..."???!!
Nisha said-beta aap andar kaise aaye..,???
She pointed her finger towards the door...
Nisha said-kabir tune phirse door band nahi kiya kya insaan hain yaar tu...??
Kabir-Yaar...promise is baar Maine pakka door close kiya tha...!!
Nisha-to kya riya jhoot bol rahi hain...???
Kabir-to kya main jhoot bol raha hun...???tere saamne hi band kiya tha Maine door yaad nahi hain kya...????
Nisha-haan...waise tune band to kiya tha...lekin door kya apneaap hi khul gaya...
They started quarrelling now...
Kabir-chal door check karke aate hain phir...!!
They went near the door...to check the door...they saw that the lock was broken...
Kabir-to ye tha pyaar ka dushman..!!!Par thodi der pehle jab Maine door lock kiya tha tab to ye theek tha..!!!!he said to nisha...kahin riya ne to ye Sab nahi kiya...??
Nisha-how could you even say that...riya bachchi hain kabir...!!
Kabir- tujhe yaad nahi usne tujhe subah kaise utha ke almost faink riya tha...??
Nisha-usne mujhe fainka nahi tha...just kheencha tha...aajkal itna stenght to har Bachche mein hota hain...!!
Kabir gave nisha a look and they both went near riya...
Nisha-beta tumhe pakka pata hain ki tum door se hi aayi thi...
Riya turned towards the window and then pointed her finger towards it...!!
Now nibir were hell confused...
When kabir said-beta tum kahan rehte ho...???tumhare mummy papa kahan hain...???
Riya first pointed her finger towards kitchen...and then towards the stairs...
Nibir were not able to understand her...nisha said
"Bachche tumhara ghar kahan hain...??"
Riya replied..."yahin pe.."!!
Kabir and nisha were now scared with her answers...,!!
When riya said-WO TUMHE DEKH RAHA HAIN... CHALE JAO YAHAN SE...WARNA WO TUM DONO KO BHI MAARDEGA...!!NAHIN...WO BOL RAHA HAIN KI WO SIRF KABIR BHAIYYA KO HI MAAREGA...AUR NISHA DIDI KO APNE SAATH LEKE CHALA JAAYGA...!!USNE BOLA KI USE NISHA DIDI BAHUT PASAND HAIN...WO UNHI KELiYE DHOOND RAHA THA...USNE BOLA KI TUM LOG KUCH BHI KARLO...BACH NAHI PAAOGE...!!!...AUR WO HAS RAHA HAIN ABHI...!!!
Nisha caught riya by her shoulders...and said
Ye Sab tumse kisne kaha...???kaun hain WO...??kya WO abhi yahi pe hain...???
Riya said...pointing towards the sofa...
USNE...!!
Saying that she just vanished into air...and even her dog wasn't there...!!she was nowhere to be seen...!!!nisha hid herself in kabir's arms...!!!kabir hugged her tightly...!! And said...nisha tu humesha yaad rakh...main tere saath hi rahunga humesha...tujhe main kuch hone nahi dunga...koyi makhkhi bhi tujhe mujhse alag nahi kar paaygi he said pointing towards the sofa...yes.he did call the ghost a makhkhi ...nisha smiled a bit ...then suddenly...the coffee cups which were kept on the teapoy...crashed on the floor breaking into pieces... Kabir looked towards the sofa...with a disgusting look...and said..."dekh bhai Mr.bhootnath...tu Jo bhi hain na...thoda distance maintain karke rakh yaar...meri abhi abhi shaadi hui hain...aur abhi divorce kara dega kya...aur jahan take nisha ki baat hain...WO sirf meri hain...to Usse to tu thoda due hi reh...mujhe na makhkhi udani achche se aati hain...aur main tujhe bhi bahut jaldi uda dunga...kyun be meri nishu ko pareshan karega tu...Teri itni himmat...he took a vase in his hand and throwed it towards the sofa...yes it did hit the ghost as they heard a scream...!!!he then kissed nisha in front of the ghost...aur le bhai ho gaya tera drama to jaldi nikal yahan se...bad manners hain yaar...itna bhi nahi sikhaya tujhe Teri mummy ne...
Hearing and seeing that the ghost became angry...and started throwing things on kabir...Abe ooo...himmat hain to saamne aake lad na...said kabir...nisha smiled on kabir's tactics...she turned towards the sofa and said...main sirf kabir ki hoon...samjhe uncle...!!!and kissed kabir again...seeing this the ghost became more angry...and finally it shouted
Main waapas aaunga... Nisha surf meri hain...tumhari nahi...tumhare inn Sab harkato se mujhe koyi farak nahi pasta...kabir main tujhe maar dunga aur nisha ko yahan se le jaaunga...tu usko bacha Nahi paayga...Bhaag jaayga tu yahan se usko akela chodke...ye Mera wada hain tu tujhse...!!!
Nisha just now had started laughing and again she started crying hearing Mr.ghosty's words...
Kabir was now in his angryman avatar...
Dekhte hain...kaun bhaagta hain yahan se...!!???!!said kabir
Hugging nisha...
Tum log jitna bhi bhaagne ki koshish karoge...utna hi mere pass aaoge...
Said Mr.bhootnath..
Saying that Mr.bhootnath flew away(his real name will be revealed when his history will be revealed..)
Kabir and nisha were now determined to throw him out of the house...!!!

That's it in today's chapter...I know I wrote crap today...I was not in a mood to write...so, rotten tomatoes and eggs are welcomed here...!!do write comments...
Do tell me whether I should continue it or not...!!


Edited by sam_premc - 11 June 2015 at 10:20pm

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bhoot in chota package fr nibirLOL'RIYA' Exited to know who is mr bhotnath update nxt part soon

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