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nibir-a horrorful love story-PRT 14 PG 42 (last part)EPIlogue pg43 upd (Page 22)

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Krushi_2

Hey update 9 part !!!!! Soon plzzz waiting
writing it...will update the next part in an hour...!!Smile

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 3:09am | IP Logged
its turning to be full on adventurous story!! LOLLOLLOL
awesome good going!!Thumbs UpThumbs Up

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:01am | IP Logged
PART~9
Nisha and Kabir were there, holding each other's hands , assuring each other that everything is going to be alright...their eyes were full of  FEAR...fear that what is going to happen next...??
 
however, they did not loose hopes...took their scarves and wrapped them on their faces so that no one is able to recognize them...they were in their casual clothes...kabir in his white shirt and jeans and nisha in her casuals...t-shirt and jeans...they were holding each other's hands...started walking out of the sambhalgarh palace from the back gate...there were a lot of security guards there...they can't come in their eyes...they had to escape somehow...!!or they will kill them...!!!kabir saw a fence near the back gate...no one was there...now they had to cross that fencing to get out of this place...kabir and nisha went near the fencing...it was quite high...but they had to jump off it to save themselves...it would be risky for nisha...thought kabir...

KABIR: nisha chal ye chod...hum kuch aur dekhte hain...!!ye risky hain tere liye...!!
NISHA:kyun kabir...??ab yahan tak aane ka risk liya hain to itna to risk kar hi sakte hain na...aur waise bhi tu to hain hi...tu mujhe kuch hone thodi dega...Wink
kabir stared at nisha with a Confused confused look...but he approved...!!
NISHA: pehle tu chad jaa ...phir tu meri help kardiyo...!!
KABIR:lekin...dhyaan rakhiyo ki koyi tujhe dekh na le...!!Ermm 
NISHA:ab tu chadega...ya mujhe hi chadhana padega...??Angry
KABIR:h..haann jaa raha ...jaa raha hun...zyaada akkad mat samjhi...!!! wo to main tere baare mein sochke ruka hua tha abhi tak...!!Pinch
NISHA: chal jaldi chad jaa...mr.k... cry baby...!!ROFL
KABIR: oyee...main k to tu j...!!samjhi naa..!! aur main koyi cry baby nahi hun...!!Angry
NISHA: haan...pata hain...cry baby...main do minute keliye gaayab kya ho gayi tu to rone lag gaya tha...agar mujhe sachmein kuch ho gya to tu kya karega kabiree...??
kabir goes near nisha and puts his finger on her lips...
KABIR:main tujhe kuch nahi hone dunga...tu samajh gayi na ye baat...main tujhe yahan se waapas le jaaunga...phir hum happy happy family ki tarah rahenge...better you get it...aur mujhe chodke jaane ki baat to tu kar bhi mat...agar tune aisi baat phirse kii to i'll kill you myself...!!Angry
NISHA:areyy yaar kabiree...tu to gussa hi hogaya...main mazaak bhi nahi kar sakti kya ab...tu itna emotional kabse hogaya..??main tujhe chodke jaane ki baat soch bhi nahi sakti...tu meri life hain kabir ...I LOVE YOU...!!
she hugged kabir and kissed him on his cheek...
KABIR:haan...theek hain... theek hain...ab tujhe mujhe itna butter lagaane ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain kyunki main to pehle se hi pataa hua hun...!!n I LOVE YOU TOO...!!ROFL 
and he starts climbing the fence...
NISHA:kabirrr...Angryto ab tak kya time pass kar raha tha...?? k kahinka...!!
KABIR:aur tu mere k se kitni j hain darlo...!!ROFL
NISHA:whatever...!!Angry
KABIR:ab main to upar chad gaya...!! tujhe aana hain ya main jaaun...??
nisha tries to catch his hand...but he takes his hand back...!!
NISHA:kabir...!! chup chaap apna haath de warna tu bht pitne waala hain merese...Angry
KABIR:yaar abhi haath dene ka mann nahi kar raha...aur tu mujhe maaregi to tab naa jab tu yahan aaygi...!!ROFLchal bye...main chalta hun...baadme aaunga...!!
saying that he jumps off the fence...he was trying to have some fun with nisha...
NISHA:kabirrr...!! she shouts as if she was in pain...Cry
kabir was hiding behind the fence...he gets worried ...he comes back running...to see that nisha wasn't there...he starts searching for her ...suddenly someone hits him from behind him...
he gets shocked ...he thinks that he is caught by the security...he turns back...his eyes were closed...he slowly opens them...to see a laughing nisha standing before him...
KABIR:nishaa...tu theek to hain na...tujhe kuch hua to nahi...??
he suddenly realises the situation...
KABIR: achcha...so this was your plan...!! bahut bura tha...!!Angry
agar tujhe sachchi mein kuch hua hota to...??
NISHA:aur tune jo mazaak kiya uska kya...??tu kare to achcha...main karun to bura...dekhliya kabiree...tera pyaar...!!Cry
KABIR: achcha chal theek hain...main bas darr gaya tha...aur yaar mazaak karne ka to mera bhi right hain naa...!!
aur hum waise yahan aake lad kyun rahe hain...nisha...hume yahan se nikalna hain...warna hume yahan kisi ne dekhliya naa...band baj jaaygi...chal jaldi see...!!
NISHA:h...haan theek hain...chal...lekin tu ye mat samajh jaayiyo ki maine tujhe maaf kardiya...!!lwar abhi jaari hain...!!Thumbs Downaur tere iss mazaak ka badla to main leke rahungi...!!
KABIR:achcha ab chale merii maa...!!Confused
NISHA:haan...chal...!!

this time kabir climbed the wall first and then helped nisha climb it...
and nisha's leg slipped from the fence and she fell on kabir...kabir catched her so that she doesn't get hurt...and they both fell on the floor...

KABIR:areeyy baapre...nisha aaj kal kya khaati hain...iron pillars...?? buildings...??elephants...??...tu itni bhaari kaise hain...maana ki tu bahut zyaada khaati hain...ek hafte se bhooke insaan ki tarah...lekin itna...??areeeyyy...koyi mujhe bachaoo isse...iske saath mein aur ek minute raha to ye mujhe maardegi...mom...!!pata nahi mere kitne bones toote honge...??ROFL

NISHA:kabirrr...ab tu bht zyaad bol raha hain...agar tune bolna band nahi kiya naa...to main teri haddiyaan sachchi mein tod dungi...!!chal utha ab mujhe...!!

KABIR:main tujhe kaise uthaun...tu mere upar se hat to sahi...!!
aise lag raha ki mere upar pura ka pura building gir gaya hain...!!

NISHA:ab to tu gayi...main tere upar a aise hi baithi rahungi...building hu na main...!!

KABIR:nishaa...main to mazaak kar raha tha...bura mat maan...tu bulding jitni bhaari nahi hain...tu usse bhi bhaari hain...!!ROFLROFL

nisha starts crying...

NISHA:kabirr...tu bht badal gaya hain...tujhe mujhe aaj kal rulaane mein bht mazaa aata hain...!!

kabir feels bad...about what he just said...he was literally irritating her...

KABIR: sorry nishu...!! maaf karde...main mazaak kar raha tha...
and he kisses her forehead...

NISHA:kabir main bhi mazaak kar rahi thi...she said making a sad face...

KABIR:lekin nishu...kyaa...???kya bola tune...??he realised what just nisha said...tu mazaak kar rahi thi...!!

NISHA:yupp mr.k...!!

KABIR:nishaaa...!!

NISHA:hum na ye mazaak mazaak baadmein khele to chalega...hume abhi rehne keliye jagah bhi dhoondna hain...aur yaad rakh...mera badla abhi pura nahi hua hain...!!!
ab chalein...??

kabir gives nisha a "tu nahi badlegi" waala look...!!

KABIR:chal ab...!!

they start walking towards the village...
KABIR:nishu tu yahin ruk...main aage jaake puch ke aata hun rehne ke jagah ke baare mein..!!

NISHA:to kabir chal na main bhi chlati hun tere saath...!!

KABIR:dekh nisha yahan bht dhoop hain...tereliye theek nahi hain...teri tabiyat kharaab ho sakti hain...tu wahaan tree ke paas khadi  hoja...chaayein mein...

NISHA: chal theek hain...par tu jaldi aajaiyo...!!

KABIR: main bas yu gaya ...aur yu aaya...!!

NISHA:oyeee mr.yu...jaldi means jaldi hota hain...!!

KABIR:aur tu yeh bag pakad...issme tere favorite chocolates hain...bhook lage to khaa liyo...main bas 5 mins mein aaya...!!

nisha took the bag from him...went near the tree and sat there...took out her favorite chocolate from the bag...and started eating it...she didn't notice that some guys were noticing her...from a lot of time...she was busy in eating her chocolate...one out of those guys comes near nisha and puts his hand on her shoulder...nisha thinks its kabir

NISHA: kyun kabiree...itni jaldi yaad aagayi meri...chal baith jaa..chocolate khaayega...??

but she felt something different with the hand...it was moving through her back...she knew kabir's hands...it wasn't his...she felt different...she jerked back to see who it was...she was horrified to see a guy in his late twenties...looking at her with wildness in his eyes...nisha jerked away his hand..

NISHA:k...kaun ho tum...??? kya kar rahe ho...?? door hatoo yahan se...!!
GUY:chal mere saath...chal...!!
NISHA:chod do mujhe...main bol rahi hun chod...!!
the guy tries holding her hand...but she takes the bag in her hand and starts hitting him with it...that guy holds nisha's hand and starts dragging her towards his friends...
now,nisha was in between ...and the guys were surrounding her...
she was now frightened...she was getting glimpses of her past...the pilani sports meet incident...where she was surrounded by those cheapsters...now it was exactly the same situation...she started panicking...she was shouting...
nahi...mat karo...aisa...please mujhe chod do...her head started spinning...the world was spinning before her...
those guys were trying to misbehave with her...they wee touching her...passing her to each other...she couldn't do anything...she felt weak on her knees...she was just saying one thing..."KABIRRR"..

after a few seconds, kabir came there...he started searching for her...
he was getting worried..."nishaa...dekh bht ho gaya tera mazaak...ab baahar aaja...mazaak mazaak hum waapas jaake bhi khel sakte hain...ghar jaayenge tab...abhi mazaak nahi..waapas aaja..."
but she wasn't replying...he started searching for her...he started walking ...he found the bag lying on the ground...he picked it up...there was blood on it...he was hell worried now...he started searching for nisha ...he was walking through that road...when he saw a gang of men were misbehaving with a girl...he couldn't clearly see the girl..he went near them not hoping it to be nisha...he finally saw her...it was his nisha...unfortunately...!! kabir felt lack of breath...he felt as if he was going to die...his life was being taken away from him...infront of him...he ran to his nisha...nisha was about to fall...she fainted...he catched nishu...
nisshhaa...nishhhaaa...uth jaaa...uth jaaa..nisha...!!!said kabir
oyeee...kaun hain tu...raste mein se hat...thoda hume bhi maze lelene de...said one of those guys
kabir was flinching his fists in anger but the thing in his mind right now was nisha...!!he can't waste time...he had to take his nisha  to the place they were going to live...he picked nisha up in his arms...and started walking...when one of the guys pushed him...
kabir placed nisha below a tree...
tujhe jitne paise chahiye lele...bas isko humare hawaale karde...aaj keliye...hume bhi to mauka do...!!said the guy
kabir didn't utter even a single word...he went near them and started beating them like hell...he kicked them ...punched them...each of them...no one could fight back his power...
"BIWI HAIN WO MERIII..."said kabir...
samajh gaye ya abhi bhi kuch samjhana baaki hain...??said kabir
those guys ran away...kabir picked nisha and the bag...and walked towards their temporary house...he opened the door and laid nisha on the bed...made her drink some water and sat beside her...he looked at her with sadness in his eyes...
"nisha...i'm sorry...uth jaa...main tujhe kabhi akela nahi chodke jaaunga" siad kabir
kabirr...said nisha
nishaa..tu theek hain...??i'm sorry nisha ...maaf karde mujhe...!!said kabir
kabirr...issme teri koyi galti nahi hain...tab bhi aur ab bhi issme sirf meri galti hain...!!said nisha
nisha...ye tu kya bol rahi hain...kab...??said kabir
nisha told him about the pilani sports meet incident...about how she was unable to do anything...kabir was listening to her carefully...he was sad for nisha...
kabir promised nisha that he would never leave her alone...and be with her always...whatever happens...and love her always...they shared some sweet moments after that...

TBC...!!

 




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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:16am | IP Logged
A LONG UPDATE...!!
PLEASE LEAVE YOUR PRECIOUS COMMENTS AFTER READING IT...!! ROTTEN TOMATOES AND CHAPPALS ARE ALSO WELCOMED...!!Big smile

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:28am | IP Logged
Annie, this was truly a Nibirilicious update Day Dreaming
Mazedaar in all senseLOL
Nibir's  nok-jhok  was Hilarious ROFLROFL
The dialogues were so funny ROFLROFLROFL
Kabir's dialogue - Tu kya elephants khaati hai had me rofling ROFLROFLROFL
For me, this was truly the best update of ur storyEmbarrassedBig smileLOLClap
Had too much fun reading itLOL
Continue soonSmileBig smileLOLEmbarrassedHug
 

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by A-N-G-E-L-I-N-A

Nice update...
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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:34am | IP Logged
nice one dearLOL
kabir's dialogues are LOL
continue soon!

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Posted: 08 June 2015 at 6:35am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arviabhigya

Annie, this was truly a Nibirilicious update Day Dreaming
Mazedaar in all senseLOL
Nibir's  nok-jhok  was Hilarious ROFLROFL
The dialogues were so funny ROFLROFLROFL
Kabir's dialogue - Tu kya elephants khaati hai had me rofling ROFLROFLROFL
For me, this was truly the best update of ur storyClap
Had too much fun reading itLOL
Continue soonHug
 
thank you...thank youu...mommy...!!ROFLROFLROFL

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