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nibir-a horrorful love story-PRT 14 PG 42 (last part)EPIlogue pg43 upd (Page 18)

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 1:15am | IP Logged
Gripping update !ClapThumbs Up  Awesome !
 Nibir going back to previous life to marry once again ! This is going to be so much funLOL
Really excited to read d next part Big smile
Continue soonHugWinkLOLEmbarrassed


Edited by arviabhigya - 04 June 2015 at 1:16am

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 1:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arviabhigya

Gripping update !ClapThumbs Up  Awesome !
 Nibir going back to previous life to marry once again ! This is going to be so much funLOL
Really excited to read d next part Big smile
Continue soonEmbarrassed
Ty...Big smile
Will update the next part today evening...!!

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 6:25am | IP Logged
Interesting.Waiting for the next part.Update soon please

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Posted: 04 June 2015 at 6:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by roseflower_07

Interesting.Waiting for the next part.Update soon please

ty...will update the next part tomorrow...before 12...!!Big smileBig smile

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:36am | IP Logged
PART~8
everyone reached the house along with ramu kaka...nisha's head was bleeding due to the injury..kabir made her sit in the sofa and bandaged her head...all the people came running towards them...

RL: areyy...kabir beta...kya hua hain nisha ko...itni chot kaise lagi aur itna khoon kaise...kya hua...kuch to batao...??

vasu: nisha bete aap theek to hain naa...zyaada dard to nahi ho raha...ab hum bhi kya sawal puchne lag gaye...hum abhi ke abhi aap keliye haldi waala doodh leke aate hain..lekin kabir aap bataiye to sahi ye sab hua kaise...sab puch rahe hain na...!!

kabir stared at ramu kaka with anger in his eyes...he explained them all the situation...ramesh was now out of his control...he went near ramu kaka and grabbed his collar and slapped him hard...
kabir and sukku tried stopping him...but he was out of control...

ramy: bachchi hain wo...tu aise kaise kar sakta hain...teri beti ke umar ki hain wo...aur usko tune iss ghar mein bandh kardiya...??
ramy was about to hit ramu kaka more when...ramu kaka fell on his knees crying...

ramu kaka: mujhe maaf kardijiye sahab...main majboor tha...usne...bade maalike ne mere pure parivaar ko khatam kardiya...aur usne mujhe dhamki di thi ki wo mujhe bhi maardega agar maine uski madad nahi ki to...main kya karta saahab...gareeb aadmi hun...mera apna koyi nahi...

ramy was about to hit him...when kabir stopped him and said...
kabir:papa...agar hume problem mein isi ne phasaya hain to nikaalega bhi yahin...yahin iski sazaa hain...aur isne bola hain ki ye humari madad karega...kyun ramu kaka bola tha na...!!

ramu kaka:haan saahab...maine aap sab ko yahan phasaya hain na to main hi aap logon ko yahan se nikaalunga...ye mera waada hain aap logon se...chahe issme meri jaan hi kyun na chali jaaye...!!

kabir: to kya karna hoga hume aage...???

ramu kaka: store room mein ek almaari hain...jispe bahut saare taale lage hue hain...aur ek kapda baandha hua hain...wahi hain aap logon ka wahan jaane ka raasta...

ramy:aap logon ka matlab...?? kaun jaa raha hain...?? kahan jaa raha hain...??

nibir: papa...mom...hum jaa rahe hain...usi jagah...jahan se ye sab shuru hua tha...aur jahan pe ye sab khatam hoga...!!

rl and vasundhara...: kya matlab hain aap logon kaa...???kahan jaa rahe hain aap...??

nibir:papa 50 saal pehle...yeh sab kuch sambhalgarh mein shuru hua tha...ek raja tha...mom wahi aapke chachaji...aur ramu kaka hi wo naukar hain...aur nisha wo princess aur main wo soldier...humse hi badla lena chahte hain wo...and they explained them the whole story...

rl and vj: wo sab to theek hain lekin...aap dono 50 years pehle kaise jaayenge...??aur wo bhi iss haalat mein...??jahaan aap dono ko itni chote lagi hain...nishu pregnant hain...kaise...wahaan aap dono saath mein rahenge ya nahi...ye bhi nahi pata...??hum isko accept nahi kar sakte...

nibir: please...ab humare paas sirf ye ek mauka bacha hain...apni life waapas paane keliye...baby ko bhi ek achchi life deni hain hume...pleasee maan jaayiye na...hum promise karte hain...hum humesha ek saath rahenge ...hum ek doosre ko kuch nahi hone denge...

kabir: papa i promise...main nisha aur baby ko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga...i promise...hum humesha ek saath rahenge...!!aur hum bahut jald yahan waapas aayenge...!!

ramy: kuch gadbad to nahi hogi naa..??

kabir: nahi papa...

ramu kaka: saahab wahaan ki kuch aisi baate hain jinka aapko dhyaan rakhna hoga...!!

kabir: kaunsi baatein..??

ramu kaka: 1. aap logon ko unse bachke rehna hoga...!!wo bahut khatarnak jagah hain...aapko wahan jaate hiapne liye rehne ka intzaam karna hoga...!!
                    2. agar aap dono mein se kisi ek ko bhi kuch ho jaata hain to dusra yahan kabhi waapas nahi aapayega..!!
                     3. aap logon ko wahaan ke logon mein ghul milna hoga...
                     4.ye lijiye us zamaane ke paise...inse hi aapka kaam chalega...bahut hain...aap dono ke wahaan rehne keliye...meri kamaayi hain jab main wahan rajmahal mein kaam kiya karta tha...
ye aap rakh lijiye...ye mere kisis kaam ki nahi...
                      5. ye baat sabse zyaada zaroori hain...aapke wahan jaane ke baadse aapke paas sirf 3 din honge...aur inhi teen dino mein aapko sab kuch theek karna hoga...agar aap iss teen din se zyaada wahan rahe to aap wahi phas jaayenge...ye yaad rakhna...!!

kabir: sirf 3 din...??

ramu kaka: haan...sirf 3 din...taiyaar hain aap abhi jaane keliye...??

nibir:haan...lekin agr humare jaane ke baad wo bhoot yahan phirse waapas aagaya to...??

ramu kaka: aap uski chinta mat kijiye...usko main dekhlunga...aapke family ki raksha ab main karunga...ye mera waada hain aap sab se...aap bas jaaiye aur jeet ke aaiye...!!

nibir smiled

they all went into the store room...ramu kaka went near the almirah...and chanted something...and it opened by itself...ramu kaka opened the door...a bright light flashed on their faces...it was a bright sunlight...!!

ramu kaka: ye darwaza raj mahal ke peeche khulta hain...dhyaan rakhiyega...!!aapka kaam jaise hi khatam ho jaaye aap wahi aake ye mantr bolenge to waha darwaza waapas haazir ho jaayega...!!

nibir:kaunsa mantr...??

ramu kaka: "HUM SAB TUM SAB ALAG ALAG
                      HUMARI DUNIYA TUMHARI DUNIYA ALAG ALAG"

aur ye mantr aapko ek doosre ka haath pakadke bolna hoga...ek saath...aap waapas aate waqt apne saath kisi ka gussa ya kisi ki dushmani saath nahi laa sakte...warna ho sakta ki bade maalik aapke zindagi se chale jaaye lekin koyi aur aajaaye...!!aapko wahaan ke logon ke saath pyaar se bartaav karna hoga...!!
aur wahaan jinko pyaar aur izzat ka matlab nahi pata ...unhe sikhaan a hoga...!!

to aap jaane keliye taiyaar hain...??

nibir: haan...

ramu kaka: aap dono yahan almari ke saamne aake khade ho jaayiye aur humare saath ye mantr dohraiye...

vasundhara:ek minute kabir...ye lijiye...aap dono keliye scarves hain...aap dono ko unse chupne mein help hogi...!!aur ye bag lijiye ...issme nisha ki medicines...aur kuch khaane peene ka saaman hain...!!

nibir smiled

nibir: thank you mom...!!
vj hugged both of them...
the whole family hugged them turn by turn and wished them good luck...!!

finally...nibir stood before the almirah...
nibir: ramu kaka hum taiyaar hain...!!

ramu kaka: to boliye humare peeche peeche

                 "AANE DO HUME TUMHARE DUNIYA MEIN
                  HUME HAIN ZAROORAT TUMHARI
                   TUMHE HAIN HUMARI"

they both repeated after ramu kaka...they walked towards the light...and they felt some attraction towards the light...and
whoshhh...!!!!
they were there...years back...everything before them was changed..their family was not with them...neither ramu kaka who would lead them...they had to find their own way...without anyone's help...only one thing was in their  mind...FEAR...!!

TBC...!!!!Big smile

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:44am | IP Logged
u r full on mode to write a adventurous horror story!!WinkLOL
it was cool!!
contiue dr!!LOL


Edited by ..krystal - 05 June 2015 at 4:24am

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:52am | IP Logged
annie awesome update yaar
so finally nibir in bhoot uncle's world
waiting for the next update 
continue soon n thanks 4 the pm

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Posted: 05 June 2015 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SONAL30

annie awesome update yaar
so finally nibir in bhoot uncle's world
waiting for the next update 
continue soon n thanks 4 the pm
dhanyawaad sonu ji...LOL

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