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nibir-a horrorful love story-PRT 14 PG 42 (last part)EPIlogue pg43 upd (Page 10)

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 9:01pm | IP Logged
bhoothnath on a vacationROFL
nishu preggyEmbarrassed
loved it
continue soon!

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Posted: 18 May 2015 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
Awesome update
Aww nisha is pregnant

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PART~5
kabir was happy...but was sad...as at a such important time of their lives...he wasn't there with her to share the happiness...that he unknowingly left nisha at such a place all alone...he was guilty for that..he went near nisha...sat beside her...and whispered ' sorry' in her ear...he caressed her hair...the doctor was still there...kabir said to the doctor...
kabir:d...doctor meri nishu theek to ho jaaygi naa...???
doctor:dekhiye mr.kabir...main abhi kuch keh nahi sakta...ye abhi bahut weak hain...maine abhi waise inko injection to dediya aur inhe thodi der mein hosh bhi aajayga...lekin inhe aaraam ki bahut zaroorat hain...iss condition mein inko waise bahut aaram karna chahiye...waise main aap se ek baat puchu...agar aap bura na maane to...??
kabir: j...jii doctor saahab puchiye...!!
doctor :ye inke body pe itne bruises kaise hain...aur inhone 2-3 din se kuch khaya kyun nahi hain...??he asked that out of concern and curiosity..
kabir had no answer for his question...he remained silent...he looked sad...he was burning in anger..the doctor understood that he didn't wanted to answer...so, the doctor ignored that thing..
doctor: maine inki kuch medicines likh di hain...aap inhe mangwa lijiye...aur inka khayaal rakhiye...agar koyi zaroorat ho to aap mujhe phir call kardijiye...main immediately chala aaunga...abhi inki condition bahut critical hain ...to aap inka jitna zyaada care karenge to utna achcha hoga...
saying that the doctor left...kabir sat beside nisha holding her hand...he was crying...he was talking to himself...
kabir: kaash nisha...main tujhe yahan akela chodke kabhi gaya hi nahi hota...to tere saath ye sab kuch nahi hota...kya haalat kardi hain teri us kameene ne...main use nahi chodunga nisha ...main use nahi chodunga...hamari life se use hamesha keliye door bhejdunga...phir main, tu aur baby saath mein rahenge...ekdum happy family...jaisa humne socha tha na waisa hi...
ab main aagya hun na...main tujhe kuch bhi nahi hone dunga...
nisha was hearing all this...
nisha: k...kabirrr...she said in a weak voice
kabir: nis..shaa t..tuu theek to hain naa...??with concern
nisha: oyee kauwee tu ro kyun raha h...hain yaar...d..dekhh main bilkul theek hun na...dekh...she said while coughing..
kabir hugged nisha tightly and he cried a lot like a small kid..
kabir:tujhe pata hain main kitna darr gaya tha...tune mera phone kyun nahi uthaya...aur teri aisi haalat kaise ho gayi...kya kiya usne tere saath..aur tune mujhe ye kyun nahi bataya ki tu preggy hain..???
nisha: aree...control,,,,she said in a weak voice
main tujhe phone k..kaise karti kabir...pura time to mera bhaagne mein hi nikal gaya...wo mere peeche hi padd gaya tha...3 din pehle main hospital jaake aayi thi...m..maine socha ki tujhe surprise dungi...par mujhe kya pata tha mere saath ye sab ho jaayega...
kabir: aur tune 3 din se kuch khaya kyun nahi...??
nisha:phi..rr w..wahi baat kabir...ghar kuch nahi tha khaane keliye...ghar ke baahar nahi jaa sakti thi..kisine ghar ke doors aur windows ko baahar se bandh kar diya tha...m...main bahut dar gayi thi kabirr...maine tujhe call karne ki bahut koshish ki...lekin mera phone toot gaya...
kabir was crying even more now...that his absence lead to such a big thing...now,he was very concerned for nisha as she fainted again...he couldn't wait anymore...he called out for ramu kaka...
kabir: raamu kakaa...jaldi aayiye...!!!
ramu kaka:jii saahab boliye...he said as he came running towards the room...
kabir: ramu kakaa...jaldi jaayiye aur ye medicines aur kuch khaane peene ka saaman le aayiye...jaldii...
ramu kaka took some money and ran out of the house to get the things...
while kabir after saying that he immediately picked his phone and called the rathor family and gangwal family and informed them about nisha's pregnancy...but he didn't tell anything about nisha's condition...he just called them immediately to his house...he just told them that he has another thing to say...and that he would tell them once they reach their house...the gangwal family and rathor family were happy hearing the news...but something struck their mind..."kabir wasn't happy at all,he sounded sad.."that was not how kabir should be right now...there was something wrong...
both the families started from their respective houses as soon as possible...they reached nibir's house...they entered the house happily with alot of sweets, gifts and all..
all of them quickly ran towards their room...they expected both of them to be happy...what they saw...shocked them the most...
nisha was resting her head in kabir's lap...she looked tired...her body was full of bruises...they were shocked to see her in this condition...while kabir was crying badly while caressing her hair...
all of the family members nearly ran to nibir...
they tried to wake nisha up...but she wasn't...she was unconcious...
vasundhara: kabir bete aap ro kyun rahe hoo..??aur kya hua hain nisha ko...???why isn't she waking up...??
kabir had no answer for her question...he was just silently caressing nisha's hair...
ramesh:kabir...tum kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho...kuch to bolo kya hua hain nisha ko...aur use itni chot kaise lagi...???kuchh to bolo kabir...he said shaking kabir's shoulders..
kabir was in shock...he remained silent...
viraj understood his situation ...he went near him...gave a tight slap on his cheek...suddenly kabir spoke out...
kabir: bhai...??aap sab log kab aaye..??dekhiye na kya ho gaya hain nisha ko...???yy...yee sab meri wajah se hua hain...sirf meri wajah se...??main nishaa ko iss ghar mein akela chodke gaya hi kyun...??nishaaa...nishaa...nishaaa...he started crying again..
viraj and the cousins just hugged him tight...
viraj: lekin kabir batao to sahi ki nisha ko hua kya hain...??aise haalat kaise ho gayi unki...??
kabir had to explain the whole situation ...all the family members froze at the spot...they couldn't believe what  he was saying...
lakshmi came near kabir...grabbed his collar...and gave him a tight slap...and said
lakhsmi:kyun kiya tumne yee...??kyun nahi bataya ye sab pehle...??kyun chodke gaye usko akele???kyun...??i need an answer kabir...right now...!!
kabir: mujhe kahan pata tha ye sab hone waala hain...warna main nishu ko akela kabhi nahi chodke jaata...
viraj:abhi ye baatein karne ka time nahi hain...kabirr...aap jaldi se nisha ko uthayiye...hum abhi gaadi nikalte hain...sab chaliye humare saath...hume nisha ko abhi ke abhi ghar leke jaana hoga...!!
kabir:jii bhai...lekin...
vasundhara:bete...abhi iss lekin wekin kaa samay nahi hain...hume jaldi se jaldi yahan se nikalna hoga...chaliye abhi jaldi...
kabir picked nisha up in his arms...they all ran towards the entrance gate...but suddenly...the lights went off...the doors and windows got closed...the lights started blinking like before,...all the members were shocked at the sudden change in weather...they got afraid...
viraj tried to open the door ...but he couldn't...he was pushed by someone with a full force...he fell near the stair case...his hand was hurt...blood started oozing out from his palm...
kabir:please tum aisa mat karooo...i beg you...tumhari dushmani mujhse hain...nisha aur in sabko chod do please...pleasee...
they all tried to open the door but couldn't...
they all were scared...kabir puts his arms around nisha so that he could protect her...he was hell scared for nisha ...he can't let anything happen to nisha and the baby...
kabir:tujhe jo karna hain mere saath kar...in sabko chodde...pleasee...nisha ko chod de pleasee...uski haalat ko samajh pleasee...
the ghost started throwing things on kabir and the rest of the family...the ghost throwed a vase towards nisha but kabir comes in between and it hurts his head...and blood starts oozing out...at first he felt dizziness...but he ignored it...he was still holding nisha in his arms...he puts nisha in the sofa so that he won't drop her down due to dizziness...he came forward...and said
kabir: dekh teri dushmani mujhse hain...please nisha ko hurt karna band kar...pleasee...main tere saamne haath jodta hun...
there was no answer...
kabir ab kaha chala gaya tu...??dekh ye games khelna band kar...pleasee..
mr.bhootnath: tumne bulaya aur hum chale aaye...the ghost was singing the song...ek baar apne peeche to dekh...
kabir turned backward...to see the most horrible scene of his life...nisha was flying in air and she was laughing...the ghost possessed nisha again...
kabir:please usko kuch matt kar...usko abhi ke abhi neeche leke aa...
the family was shocked and terrified at this scene...
suddenly nisha started running (like lisa in 1920 when she was possessed by a ghost, if you remember..)here and there...kabir ran behind her to stop her...
kabir:please...use kuch mat kar...ruk jaa...tu jo chahta hain main wo karunga..pleasee...
but she didn't stop...she continued running...
mr.bhootnath: tujhe kuch karne ki zarrorat nahi hain...sab kuch main hi karunga...tu bas itna yaad rakh ki tu nisha ko mujhse nahi bacha sakta...hahahahaha...agar bacha sakta hain to bacha ke dikha...phir i promise main tum dono ke beechme kabhi nahi aaunga...saying that he left nisha's body and fled away...kabir quickly ran to nisha...nisha said 
"kabir please mujhe bachale kabir...main apni puri life tere saath spend karna chahti hun...main tujhe chodke nahi jaana chahti kabir..please mujhe bachale..."
kabir picked her in his arms...and took her towards the living room...he laid nisha in the sofa and sat beside her holding her hand...
kabir:nisha shhh...shaant reh...main tujhe aur baby ko kuch bhi nahi hone dunga...i promise...
the family members were worried for them...when rupan spoke out
"humesha galti ye karte hain, aur nuksaan hume bharna padta hain"aur aaj bhi yahan laake phasa diya hum sab ko.."meri do do betiyaan hain...mujhe unki shaadi karani hain...agar aaj unhe kuch hogaya to...???"
the whole family were looking at her with anger ...chote tauji slapped her..." rupan tumhe bilkul sharam nahi aati naa...??yahan kabir aur nisha ki haalat dekhi hain tumne kya ho rhi hain...???ye koyi time hain ye sab bolne keliye...??ab tum bas chup rahogi..."said chote tauji...
nisha seeing her family fighting had to get up...she stood up with the help of kabir...
dadi: nishuu betaa...tu uth kyun gayi...leti reh...
kabir: nisha...nisha...tu abhi ke abhi let jaa..
nisha: ek minute kabir...!! she went near rupan taiji holding kabir's hand and said
nisha: taiji...i'm sorry aaj jo bhi hua...uske liye...aap please kabir ko kuch mat bolo...usne kuch nahi kiya...aur jahan tak kirti aur jwalu ki baat hain...main khud unki shaadi ki saari arrangements karaaungi aur unki shaadi mein bahut dance karungi...aapko uski fikar karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain..." she said it in a weak voice...rupan felt guilty at her words...all the cousins stared at rupan with anger..

saying that she fainted once again...kabir took a glass of water  and made her drink it...he placed her in the sofa with utmost care...he was holding her hand...as now he got to know that the ghost cannot possess nisha when kabir was near nisha...so he holds her hand...they both when together...no one can harm them...

all the family sat there in the sofa...looking at nisha and kabir with saddened faces...they were really feeling bad for nibir...as they just now had started their new life...they got their happiness...and now this is happening with them...

they had to figure out something to save them...the cousins started making their own plans...the cousins along with viraj left the living room silently...they started searching something in the house...every room of the house...so that they could find something about that ghost...they went into the store room...they found somethings of the previous owners ...some files... , a folder full of photographs...some antiques...etc...they checked the other cupboards...but couldn't find anything...they found a cupboard...which was locked...not with one lock but five locks...they were tied together with a cloth...there was a big photograph of some king in the store room...not a king actually...he belonged to a royal family...a name was written at the ending...it was yuvraj karanveer singha...that photograph looked about half a century older...he went out of the store ...straight to the living room...they showed all the things to the family...they went through the photos...the photos too were some 50 years older...while they were going through the photos...which shocked them...in one of the photos...nibir were there...standing at the back of a young man...that photo was like they were captured mistakenly in it...kabir was shocked to see it...they were in a photo which was about 50 years older and that too in a completely different look...nisha's look was like that of a princess and he looked like a king's soldier..they were in their twenties...they all were shocked to see it..
there was something which struck vasundhara's mind...
she knew the young man in the photograph...he was her chacha ji  in his twenties..."karanveer singha...he loved a princess named  nisha kumari...but the princess loved someone else...he was a soldier(sipahi) named kabir singh ranawat...the family of the princess forced her to marry the king...but she couldn't...she ran away with the soldier...the king became mad after that..he found both of them and killed them...and then disappeared ...after that no one was able to find him..."said vasundhara
which shocked everyone present there...
"aur sunne mein aaya tha ki jab wo bhaag gaye the to unke saath raj mahal ka ek naukar bhi tha...wo naukar unki seva karta tha...wo naukar tab kareeb 10 saal ka tha...aur sunne mein to ye bhi aay tha ki wo us princess ko uske baad bhi bahut pyaar karte the...aur bolte the ki wo usko phir paake rahenge...aur kuch hi dino mein wo bahut bimar ho gaye aur unki maut ho gayi...lekin abhi tak ye kabhi pata nahi chala hain ki chacha ji aur wo naukar hain kahan...lekin sunne mein ye aaya hain ki wo naukar abhi bhi zinda hain...!!"said vasundhara
everybody was listening to her carefully...
when something struck kabir's mind
"ramu kaka kaha gaye...??"

"i know this part was a crap...rotten tomatoes and chappals are welcomed..!!"LOL

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 2:26am | IP Logged
next part updated...rotten tomatoes and chappals are welcomed here...avoid spelling or grammatical mistakes...do write your reviews...waiting..!!Big smile
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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 2:27am | IP Logged
It was nice ..so finally mr bhootnath id is revealed ...mr pyar a dushman phir aa gia this time nibir will not let him win..continue soon. .

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 2:35am | IP Logged
wow! nice update...Smile
But I have few doubts. First is that Nisha has become too weak, will she get admitted in hospital?because she is expecting too. Another is that after Griha Shanti pooja, someone has to be in the house for 2 days and Nisha was there. Then why did the ghost return? Last one is that why are they not leaving the apartment at the first opportunity, i.e. after ghost exits?

Interesting story...continue soon...Smile


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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 2:54am | IP Logged
read the last 2 parts
its scary n intesting
Nisha preggyEmbarrassed
loved the parts
bhootnath uncle was behind nisha in previous janamROFL n kabiraa soldierROFL
really very intrestng eagerly waiting to knw wat happens nxt
update soon

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Posted: 19 May 2015 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by do0dleR

wow! nice update...Smile
But I have few doubts. First is that Nisha has become too weak, will she get admitted in hospital?because she is expecting too. Another is that after Griha Shanti pooja, someone has to be in the house for 2 days and Nisha was there. Then why did the ghost return? Last one is that why are they not leaving the apartment at the first opportunity, i.e. after ghost exits?

Interesting story...continue soon...Smile
Yeahhh...she will get admitted in the hospital but not now ...after this bhootnath fiasco ends...
And about grih shaanti pooja...You will know in the next episode...
And about the last doubt...in this episode they tried to leave the house...but they couldn't as someone closed the doors and windows...and further you will get to know in the next episode...!!

Thanxx for your interest...!!!next part will be updated tomorrow..!!CryCryBig smile

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