Nisha Aur Uske Cousins

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sorry for d late comments Annie beta bu u knw how busy and lazy ur mommy is πŸ˜†πŸ€£
Loved both d updates thoroughly πŸ˜†
Grilled sandwiches and shauchalay 🀣🀣🀣
Both d chapters were really funny🀣. Nisha and Old kabir's meeting was too funny🀣🀣🀣
 Second update was hilarious 🀣🀣🀣
Kabir, Ok and Nisha's meeting was just too good 🀣🀣🀣
Nisha's maggi waala dialogue and humming bird wala dialogue was just amazing🀣
Betu I hv to say that u write outstanding and very entertaining dialoguesπŸ‘ 🀣🀣
Kabir's Kkk kabir wala dialogue and meri biwi pe line mat mar dialogue was just out of d world🀣🀣🀣
 Enjoyed reading both d updates especially d second oneπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ
Love u betu β€οΈπŸ€— 
Continue soon πŸ˜³πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†πŸ€—
Ab bas isse zyaada lamba comment nahin likhungi 🀣🀣🀣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: arviabhigya

Sorry for d late comments Annie beta bu u knw how busy and lazy ur mommy is πŸ˜†πŸ€£

Loved both d updates thoroughly πŸ˜†
Grilled sandwiches and shauchalay 🀣🀣🀣
Both d chapters were really funny🀣. Nisha and Old kabir's meeting was too funny🀣🀣🀣
 Second update was hilarious 🀣🀣🀣
Kabir, Ok and Nisha's meeting was just too good 🀣🀣🀣
Nisha's maggi waala dialogue and humming bird wala dialogue was just amazing🀣
Betu I hv to say that u write outstanding and very entertaining dialoguesπŸ‘ 🀣🀣
Kabir's Kkk kabir wala dialogue and meri biwi pe line mat mar dialogue was just out of d world🀣🀣🀣
 Enjoyed reading both d updates especially d second oneπŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ
Love u betu β€οΈπŸ€— 
Continue soon πŸ€—
Ab bas isse zyaada lamba comment nahin likhungi 🀣🀣🀣

hehehe...thank you..!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
PART~12

PRESENT (2015_ KNH )

the rathore family and gangwal family were sitting in the living room...they were worried for kabir and nisha...nibir were in some other world...where their families can't even go if something happens to them...ramu kaka was sitting near the stairs...the cousins were sittimg on the stairs...viraj was also sitting with them...while the elders were comfortably seated in the sofas...they haven't eaten anything since they came here...they were hungry...
DADAJI: areyy bhai yahan pe kisi ko bhook nahi lagi kya...??humne kal raat se kuch nahi khaaya hain... abhi shaam hone ko aayi hain...!!
MORESH: bauji bhook to sabko lagi hain...lekin humaare dono bachche itni mushkil mein hain to hume kuch khaane ka mann nahi ho raha hain bauji...
DADI: agar tum hi aise zid pe ade rahoge to bachchon ka kya hoga...unn sabko dekho kitne udaas baithe hue hain...unnki nishu bro aur unka kb unke kitne kareeb hain...agar tum hi khaana khaane se manaa karoge...wo bachche hain...unka to kuch socho...aur jahan tak kabir aur nisha ki baat hain...bhagwaan pe bharosa rakho...wo bht jaldi unhe waapas le aayga...!!
RAMESH: maa aap sahi keh rahi hain...mujhe kabir aur nisha pe bahut bharosa hain...wo apne aap ko iss mushkil se nikaal hi lenge...haan...nisha thodi...na bht jhalli hain lekin...kabir hain na uske saath ...kuch nahi hoga unn dono ko...!!abhi mujhe lagta hain ki hume kuch khaalena chahiye...hum bimaar padh gaye to agar nibir ko koyi madad ki zaroorat hogi...to kaise karenge...!! 
ramesh tells ramu kaka to bring some food for them...and ramu kaka goes out of the house ...and the horror starts again...all of them were sitting in living room...when ...
BUNTY: mujhe washroom jaana hain...!!
SAURAV:abhi...???thodi der baad nahi jaa sakta...??
BUNTY:nahiii...mujhe abhi jaana hain...!!
VIRAJ:chaliyeee...hum aapke saath chalte hain...!!
SUKKU:areyyy viraj sir iski koyi zaroorat nahi hain...humme se koyi chala jaayega iske saath...!!
VIRAJ:areyyy sukku...koyi baat nahi...hum chale jaayenge bunty ke saath...!!
viraj and  bunty left the place...all the others were sitting in the same position and in same place...!!
 viraj, bunty and ramu kaka weren't there...
there was a complete silence in the family...the cousins were also not talking today... when they heard a noise...as if someone was shouting...or venting out his anger...it was becoming more and more louder with each passing second...it was coming close to them..near them...and...
                       the sofa on which ramesh ,lakshmi and dadi were sitting...started moving on it's own...slowly slowly...they didn't notice it...but suddenly the sofa started moving as if it was  a roller coaster...the trio were shouting...ramesh tried to stop the sofa...other members were shocked at this image before them...they tried to stop the sofa...but no...it was out of their reach...and finally the sofa crashed to the wall...and it stopped...ramesh's head was bleeding...
lakshmi and dadi were definitely frightened and shocked after this amazing roller coaster ride...lakshmi and dadi fell on the ground due to after effects of crash...the family members came running towards them...to help them get up...the cousins made lakshmi and dadi stand up and made them sit in another sofa...when they tried to make him stand up...he was obstinate...he wasn't even trying to make himself get up from there...he was looking down continuosly ...his eyes were moving left to right and vice-versa...he folded his legs and sat straight in the sofa...he finally looked up...his eyes were red...he looked up at the family members...and said
                      "aap sirf insaan ka ilaaj karna jaante hain , bigdi hui aatma ka nahi...!!" 
lakshmi: r...ramesh ye tum kya bol r..rahe ho...!!
                                                        "wahi jo tum sabne suna"
sukku:k...kkk..kkaun ho tum...???
                                            "wahii...jiska tumhe intezaar tha...!!"
saurav: t...tummm...??phirse...??k...kyun aaye ho t..tumm phir...??
                                    "har buri aatma ka ek iraada hota hain...!!"
                               "aur main usi iraade ko poora karne aaya hun...!!"
dada ji: ab kis iraade se aaye ho tum yahaan...??ab kya chahte ho tum...??hum tumko ab iss ghar mein zyaada der rehne nahi denge...!!bht jaldi tum khatam ho jaaoge..!!
              "Jaise insaano mein do tarah ke log hote hai ... vaise aatmao mein bhi do tarah ki                   
                                             aatmayein hoti hain achchi aur buri"
                                        "marne keliye taiyyar ho jayiye aap sab...!!"
                              "ek ek karke sabko maardunga main...nahi bachoge...!!"
dada ji: yeh jo tumhara sapna hain na sapna hi banaa rahega...tum humara kuch nahi bigad paaoge...tumhara anth nischit hain...!!tum nahi bach paaoge...!!

            "jab tak mera kissa khatam nahi hota mera, mera koyi kuch nahi bigaad sakta...!!"
and he started throwing things on the family members...ramesh was possessed by the ghost...the ghost was hurting ramesh by crashing him to the walls...throwing him...he started hurting the family members...the family memebers started running...as they were not able to save themselves...the situation became the worst...as the ghost became out of control not seeing nisha and kabir there...viraj and bunty just returned from the washroom...they were shocked to see the situation ...he hugged viru in fear...viru tried to save him as the ghost started hurting them also...!!the situation was out of control now...they were not able to do anything...now only ramu kaka has to be the saviour ...but he wasn't here...RAMU KAKA...!!

PAST(in sambhalgarh)

NIBIR: propose...!!
OK: hain...???
KABIR: abbee yaaarrr...!!
NISHA:kabirrr...iss ko main murder kardu to chalegaa...??😈
KABIR:nishaaa...tune to mere muh ki baat cheen li yaar...maarde isko ...please maarde...!!🀣🀣
NISHA:control kabirr control...agar issko tapka diya to yahi rehne keliye taiyyar hoja...phir hum apne ghar kabhi nahi jaa paayenge...!!
KABIR:issliye to main shaant hu abhi tak...warna main iss irritating creature ko kabka maar chuka hota...!!πŸ˜’
OK:koyi hume bataayega hume karna kya hoga...??
KABIR:abeeyy ee...shaant hoja tu thodi der...sochne de hume propose ka hindi word kya hota hain...!!
NISHA:yaar ab iska kya kare...kahan se aayga propose ka hindi waala word...??
KABIR:mujhe kaise pata hoga yaar...??
NISHA:hh...haan...tujhe kaise pata hoga...??aaj tak tune mujhe kabhi dhang se propose kiya hain...areee haan waise tujhe to pata hona hi chahiye naa...wo teri dance school waali ladki ...kya naam tha uska...??shaamya...!!usse to tu badaa urdu mein baat karta tha...tab to tujhe bht hindi aati thi ...ab kyun nahi nikal rahe words...!!🀣🀣🀣
KABIR: nishaaa...!!
NISHA:kya hain...??
KABIR:areyyy yaar...shaamya to meri behn jaisi hain...!!🀣🀣
NISHA:tu apni behn ko urdu mein propose karta hain ...??
KABIR:areyyy...wo to main aisehi...hehehe...you know...!!🀣🀣
NISHA:my foot...!!😑
KABIR:J kahinki...!!
NISHA:aur tu duniya ka sabse badaa K ...!!
KABIR:ghar chal...batata hun tujhe...!!
NISHA:tu kya mujhe bataayega...!!pehle ghar chal to sahi...dekhte hain...!!😈
KABIR:eyyy nisha dekh...dhamki mat de...!!😑
NISHA:kyun nahi doon...tere sir pe kya seengh lage hue hain...??
KABIR:oyyeee...jungle se bhaagi hui bandariyaa...
NISHA:aurr tu jungle mein mangal...chimpu...!!
OK:oooyee...!!
KABIR:kya problem hain ab tujhe...??
OK:shaant rahiye...warna dono ka wadh kardenge hum...!!
NIBIR:whaattt...??
OK:koyi bataayega ..??kya karna hain hume...!!
KABIR:bhaii meree...propose...matlab izhaar...ab isko hindi mein karne keliye mat bolna pleaseee...!!!
OK:theek hain...lekin kisse...??
KABIR:meri biwi se...karega..?? abeyy oo tu aur kisse karega...teri us aunty se...!!
NISHA:ek min...ek min...kabir...ab kaise aaya tujhe propose ka hindi waala word...??
KABIR:chup reh bandariyaa...!!
NISHA:OYEEE...!!
KABIR:eyyy...!!
OK:abb...main taiyyar hun...izhaar karne keliye...!!
NIBIR:hain...??🀣🀣🀣

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TBC...!!

Edited by sam_premc - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
AwesomeπŸ‘πŸ‘
Waiting for next partπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update. ... but the mystery still persist... propose ka hindi word kya h... rofl
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Originally posted by: mansi_as18

awesome update. ... but the mystery still persist... propose ka hindi word kya h... rofl

ty...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
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Awesome raat ko padhke horror feel aa gayi 
But ok and nibir convo rofled me πŸ€£
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Hahahaha... πŸ˜ƒ
Bathroom ko Hindi me kya bolte??? πŸ˜†
I burst out laughing πŸ˜†
Nisha meeting old Kabir was hilarious!!! πŸ˜†
and nibir kidnapped him...
And their convo...
Maggi noodles bana rahi Hu .. Khayega??? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Killer yar!! Hats off to uh...
Waise yar ab to pichle janam hi Jake Maggi Khana padega!! Bcoz yahan to bann ho gayi hai!! πŸ˜‰
Lol

And the bhootnath returns :p
Iss buri atma ka maqsab kiya h g?? And singham ne mast jawaab diye mr bhootnath ko  πŸ˜† and shaamya kon?? Kabir ki behan??? πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ behan ko propose??? Had hai yaar πŸ˜†
Nibir cutest :* :*

Read all three the parts together...
Superb yarπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Edited by RoshniVdian786 - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshniVdian786

Hahahaha... πŸ˜ƒ
Bathroom ko Hindi me kya bolte??? πŸ˜†
I burst out laughing πŸ˜†
Nisha meeting old Kabir was hilarious!!! πŸ˜†
and nibir kidnapped him...
And their convo...
Maggi noodles bana rahi Hu .. Khayega??? πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Killer yar!! Hats off to uh...
Waise yar ab to pichle janam hi Jake Maggi Khana padega!! Bcoz yahan to bann ho gayi hai!! πŸ˜‰
Lol

And the bhootnath returns :p
Iss buri atma ka maqsab kiya h g?? And singham ne mast jawaab diye mr bhootnath ko  πŸ˜† and shaamya kon?? Kabir ki behan??? πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ behan ko propose??? Had hai yaar πŸ˜†
Nibir cutest :* :*

Read all three the parts together...
Superb yarπŸ‘

Hehehhe...thankyou yaar...!!!🀣🀣