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awesome equally spooky and romantic plzzz update soon 
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Superb updateπŸ‘πŸΌ... please post d next part soon😊...
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its just awesome.loved it.eagerly waiting for the next part.plz plz update it  very soon.
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Superb storyπŸ‘. Please continue soon , eagerly waiting for your next update!πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰
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Waiting for the horror...
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hiii dear.., my frnd giv me link of ur story...
she told me to tell u this that she loves this story and plzzz update soon... She is waiting.,. Wo silent reader hai.. Isliye I m commenting in behalf of her.,, πŸ˜†
WELL I havent read the story yet,.. But will read it soon... Then giv my vies as well πŸ˜‰ but plzz do update soon...
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Hola guyzz...!! I know you all have been waiting for the next part ...sorry for that...but can't update the next part for some days...as I'm Ill...I have been restricted to use my phone and PC for hours... However I keep roaming in the forum...Will give a long update once I get alright...pardon me...!!!😊 Edited by premc - 8 years ago
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wow I kved the story...
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PART~6
where is ramu kaka..??thought kabir
he picked his phone from the table in front of him and quickly dialed ramu kaka's number as he was the only one who could save them from this situation...kabir called him several times but ramu kaka was not picking up his phone..
maybe he was busy somewhere ...!!thought kabir
when suddenly they heard footsteps near the main door, they kept quite for sometime...but it continued to be there...the voice of the footsteps was becoming more and more harder as if it was coming towards them...suddenly it stopped and then kabir heard someone whisper in his ear...that voice sounded familiar...he had heard it before..
"main wapas aa gayi best friend..!!"said the voice
and a shadow (actually two shadows) appeared in front of all the members present there...
it was  a girl and a doggy...kabir recognized her...it was riya and her doggy...
riya...???said kabir
haan...best friend riya...!!main waapas aagayi  ...!!said riya with a smile
all the family members were thinking who she was...
isse miliye...ye riya hain...nisha aur meri best friend...aur ye snowy hain riya ka doggy...oops sorry nisha...riya...aur mera best friend...
said kabir
kabir was getting emotional with his own talks...he was literally crying...he turns towards nisha and says
'nisha uth tere besties aaye hain..uth na...!!!'
"nisha didi ko kuch nahi hua hain...aap itna emotional mat hoo...!!"said riya
saying that she went near nisha ...puts her hand on nisha's head ...
and with that nisha opens her eyes...
she gets up with kabir's help and sits beside him..
ni...nisha tu theek to hain...??said kabir and the family members
h...haan main bilkul theek hun... said nisha
th...thank you riya...thank you so muchh...tune nisha ko theek kar diya...said kabir
riyaa tum yahan kab aayi..??..aur tum itne dino se kahan thi...??...asked nisha
usne mujhe ek andhere waale jagah me bandh karwa diya tha...!!said riya
k..kisnee..??kyun...??? asked nibir
wahi...par dadaji ne(great grandfather)..taaki main aap logo ki help na kar paaun...par main bhaag gayi...wahan se...meli help ki kisine..!!said riya
aapke great grandfather hain kaun aur aapki help kisne ki thi...??asked kabir
wahi...jo yahan par kaam karte hain...ramu kaka...!! aur meri help jisne kali thi usne apna naam arjun singh rathore bataya...!!said riya
kyaaa...??papa ne tumhari help ki...???aur ramu kaka ne tumhe bandh kyun kar diya tha us jagah pe...??asked kabir
achcha chalo...main aap sab logon ko puri story batati hun...
jab aap dono yahan nahi rehte the naa...tab yahan main...mela snowy...mela bhai...meli mummy...mele papa...mele dada-dadi...aur  mele par dadaji rehte the...mere papa, dadaji aur pardadaji mein bahut ladayi hoti rehti thi...pardadaji bolte rehte the ki wo bade maalik ko dhoka nahi de sakte...papa bolte the ki agar hume khush rehna hain to unhe aisa karna hi padega...hume kuch samajh nahi aata tha...papa kehte the ki hume yahan se jaana hi hoga...par pardadaji maante hi nahi the...hume ghar mein bahut darr lagta tha...ghar mein ekdum se andhera ho jaata tha aur saare saaman idhar udhar ho jaate the...aur raat ko jab hum sote the to hume aisa lagta tha ki ghar mein humare alaava bhi koyi hain...ek din aisa kuch hua...to hum bhaagna chahte the yahan se...pardadaji bhi kisi tarah maangaye humare saath chalne keliye...hum ghar se bahar ki taraf bhaagne lage tab...ghar ke darwaaze bandh ho gaye...aur bade maalik ne ek ek karke hum sab ko maar diya...lekin ussne pardadaji ko nahi maara...wo abhi bhi zinda hain...wo unki help karte hain abhi bhi...ussne meri puri family ko uss andhere waale jagah pe bandh kardiya hain...lekin main aur snowy kisis tarah bach nikle...mujhe iss ghar ki story nahi pata...inn sab ka jawab aapko aapke ramu kaka hi de sakte hain...""said riya

all the members present there were shocked and sad after hearing her story...she was a small kid ...how inhuman that ghost was...he was a sadist...and ramu kaka too for supporting such a person..

lekin main ramu kaka ko yahan nahi laa sakti...unpe mere powers nahi chalte...said riya

riya beta...tune humari itni help ki yahi humare liye bahut hain...baaki sab kuch hum dekhlenge...tujhe fikar karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi...said kabir

riya and kabir smiled seeing each other...

"cousins aur bhai aur saurav chalo kaam pe lag jaate hain" said kabir

lekn hum sabko karna kya hoga..?? said all of them

"MISSION RAMU KAKA KO PAKDO" SAID KABIR

"RIYA BETA KYA TUM HUMARI EK MADAD KAR SAKTI HO..??"ASKED NISHA

"MERE PAAS YAHAN REHNE KELIYE ZYAADA WAQT NAHI HAIN...AGAR WO WAAPAS AAGAYA TO WO SAB KUCH BARBAAD KARDEGA.."SAID RIYA

"BETA...WE PROMISE YOU KI HUM TUMHARI FAMILY KO KUCH NAHI HONE DENGE...HUM UNHE BACHALENGE"SAID NIBIR

RIYA THOUGHT ABOUT IT FOR A WHILE..THEN SAID
MAIN YAHAN ZYAADA DER NAHI RUK SAKTI...PAR AGAR AAP YE KAAM JALDI SE KHATAM KARLETE HO TO MAIN AAPKI HELP KARSAKTI HUN..

HAAM...BETA...PROMISE...HUM YE KAAM JALDI SE JALDI KHATAM KARLENGE...SAID NISHA

LEKIN MUJHE KARNA KYA HOGA..?? ASKED RIYA

TUMHE BAS WO DARWAZA KHOLNA HOGA ...SAID NISHA

BAS...ITNA SA KAAM...LO ABHI KARDETI HUN...!!
WITH THAT SHE CHANTED SOMETHING AND THE DOOR OPENED WITH A THUDD...!!

AREYY...WAAH YAAR TU TO BADI FAST NIKLI...SAID KABIR
NISHA STARED AT HIM WITH "WHAT THE" LOOK
KABIR STOOD SILENTLY LIKE A KID...KABIR WAS HAPPY THAT HIS NISHA WAS BACK IN ACTION...BUT WEAKNESS COULD STILL BE SEEN ON HER FACE..

TO PLAN MEIN AAGE BADHE...???SAID KABIR
CHALO RAMU KAKA KO DHUNDNE...BEFORE GOING KABIR TOOK OUT A RING FROM HIS FINGER AND MADE NISHA WEAR IT...
YE MERA LUCKY RING HAIN..NISHA MAIN JAB YAHAN NAHI HOO TO YE TUJHE PROTECT KAREGA...SAID KABIR
KABIR TU AISA KYUN BOL RAHA HAIN...??MAIN BHI CHAL RAHI HUN TERE SAATH SAMJHA...MAIN TUJHE AKELE NAHI JAANE DENE WAALI...SAID NISHA

MAIN AKELA KAHAN HUN...???COUSINS JAA RAHE HAIN NAA MERE SAATH..!!AUR TUJHE APNA CARE BHI KARNA HAIN...TU YAHAN PE AARAM KAR...TU YAHAN PE SAFE RAHEGI...AUR JAHAN TAK USS BHOOTNATH KI BAAT HAIN ...WO ITNI JALDI WAAPAS NAHI AAYEGA...!!SAID KABIR

KABIR AISE MAT BOL YAAR...I FEEL MOST SAFE WHEN I'M WITH YOU...!!!MAIN AB TUJHE EK BHI MINUTE AKELA CHODKE NAHI REH SAKTI...!!PLEASE KABIR MUJHE TERE SAATH AANE DE...PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE...SAID NISHA

YAAR NISHA TU KITNI ZIDDI HAIN...CHAL THEEK HAIN...CHAL MERE SAATH...SAID KABIR

NISHA HAPPILY HUGGED KABIR TIGHTLY LIKE A KID WHO JUST GOT HIS FAVORITE CHOCOLATE ...KABIR HUGGED HER BACK...

VIRAJ BHAI, BUNTY ,JWALA...AAP TEENO YAHEE PE RAHO...FAMILY KE SAATH...SAID KABIR

PAR KABIR HUM BHI AAPKI HELP KARNA CHAHTE HAIN...!!SAID VIRAJ

BHAI...MAIN JAANTA HUN...LEKIN AAP APNI HAALAT TO DEKHO...KITNI CHOT LAGI HAIN AAPKO...AAP DHANG SE BOL BHI NAHI PAA RAHE HOO...AAP AARAM KARO...SAID KABIR

LEKIN KABIR...!!SAID VIRAJ

BHAI...!!SAID KABIR

OHKK...CHALO THEEK HAIN...!!!SAID VIRAJ

WITH THAT NIBIR, DOSA, SUKKU, UMAN, KIRTI CAME OUT IN SEARCH FOR RAMU KAKA...THEY WENT TO THE SUPER MARKET...ASKED THERE FOR RAMU KAKA...BUT NO ANSWER...
THEY CHECKED FOR THE REMAINING SHOPS IN THE MARKET BUT NO ANSWER...THEY ASKED EACH AND EVERY PERSON PASSING BY...BUT NO ANSWER...ALL THIS WHILE KABIR AND NISHA WERE HOLDING EACH OTHER'S HANDS...NO ONE WAS READY TO ANSWER ...THEY FOUND NOTHING...THEY WERE DISAPPOINTED...THEY SAT ON THE STAIRS OF A TEMPLE WITH SAD FACES...   

WHEN SOMEONE SAID FROM BEHIND...
KYUN...???RAMLAL KO DHOOND RAHE HO NA TUM LOG...???BECHAARA WO BHI KAHAN PHAS GAYA BADE MAALIK KE CHAKKAR MEIN...??GHULAM BAN CHUKA HAIN WO... GHULAM...!!

IT WAS AN OLD WOMAN AROUND HER 60s...

AAP JAANTI HAIN RAMU KAKA KO...PLEASE BATAYIYE NAA...WO KAHAN MILENGE...ABHI WOHI HAIN JO HUMARI MADAD KAR SAKTE HAIN...HUMARA GHAR BARBAAD HO JAAYEGA...PLEASEE BATADIJIYE...SAID KABIR

MAIN TUMHE KUCH BHI NAHI BATA SAKTI...JAO YAHAN SE JAO...!!SAID OLD WOMAN

PLEASE...AAP AISA MAT BOLIYE...AAP ISKO DEKHIYE...KYA HAALAT KARDIYA HAIN ISKA USS BHOOT NEE...YE MERI WIFE HAIN...USSNE BOLA KI WO HUMARE BABY KO BHI MAARDEGA...PLEASEE...SAB BARBAAD HO JAAYGA...AGAR AAPNE ABHI KUCH NAHI BATAYA TO...!!!SAID KABIR POINTING TOWARDS NISHA...

YE WAHI LADKI HAIN JISKO WO ITNE SAALO SE DHOOND RAHA THA...TABHI RAMLAL BHI CHUP HAIN...MUJHE MAAF KARDO BETA ...MAIN TUMHE KUCH NAHI BATA SAKTI...MAINE RAMLAL KO PROMISE KIYA HAIN...SAID THAT WOMAN

THEY WERE DISAPPOINTED NOW...BUT AN IDEA POPPED UP IN SAURAV'S MIND..

SAURAV:AUNTY, AAP HUME BATANA NAHI CHAHTI...THEEK HAIN...HUM SAMAJHTE HAIN...LEKIN AAP HUME ISHAARA KARKE TO BATA SAKTI HAIN NA KI RAMU KAKA KAHAN HAIN...!!PLEASEE AUNTY...

THAT OLD WOMAN NODDED IN A YES...SHE SHOWED THEM AN OLD MAP...WHICH SHOWED AN OLD VILLAGE WHICH WAS LOCATED SOMEWHERE NEAR THEM...SHE POINTED TOWARDS AN OLD SCHOOL IN THE MAP...AND SAID" YAHIN MILEGA TUMHE RAMLAL " AB JAAO BACHAALO APNE PARIVAR KO..."

THANK YOU AUNTY...THANK YOU SO MUCH...SAID ALL OF THEM

THEY SET OUT FOR THE VILLAGE THE VERY NEXT MOMENT FOR THEIR MISSION...THEY REACHED THE VILLAGE...THEY THEN FOUND THE OLD SCHOOL...AND THERE HE WAS ...RAMU KAKA...SITTING NEAR BONFIRE WITH 4-5 PEOPLE...MAYBE HIS FRIENDS...ALL OF THEM RAN TOWARDS RAMU KAKA...AND SAID

"RAMU KAKAAA...!!!!" ALL TOGETHER ...

"AB AAP BACHKE KAHAN JAAOGE...??" SAID KIRTI...

"AAP TO GAYE...!!" SAID UMAN

TBC...