Nisha Aur Uske Cousins

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Nibir made ghost jealous.. wow.. 😆 😆
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that was great, waiting for more... please update soon😊... i really was taken aback when Riya spoke about the ghost😲
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Will be updating the next part by today evening or tomorrow morning...😃
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PART-4
"NEXT DAY"
"GRIH SHAANTI POOJA"

All the people of gangwal house and rathore house were busy in the preparations of the Pooja...kabir and nisha after doing all the household chores were getting ready for the pooja...nisha wore a whitish-pink colour saree...kabir was totally mesmerised by her beauty...he went near her and kissed her on her forehead and said
"You're looking beautiful today...!!"
"Don't I look beautiful everyday...???"said nisha
"Nahii...aisi baat nahi hain...Mera MATLAB tha ki tum aaj aur zyada beautiful lag rahi ho...!!"he said with a smirk 
Kabir was about to kiss her, when she ran away from there...
Everyone was waiting for nisha and kabir in the living room...the priest has arrived...nibir came to the living room...and sat there to continue the pooja...the living room was beautifully decorated with flowers and diyas...in short the house looked more beautiful today...why wouldn't it look beautiful...???it was arranged by nibir...!!
They continued with the processing of the pooja ...
They were about to put some ghee in the fire when suddenly the fire went off..and off course this was done by Mr.bhootnath..the priest started shouting
"This is an omen...this is an omen...this shouldn't have happened...something's wrong with this house"
Now nisha and kabir were worried that the truth would be out anytime...but that didn't happen...instead vasundhara said
"Areyy panditji...Zara dekhiye to bahar kitna hawa hain...Usi hawa se bhuj gaya hoga ...aap itna tension mat lijiye...main abhi jaake windows bandh karke aati hun...aap firse taiyyari kijiye...!!"
It was heavily raining outside...everyone except nibir thought that it was due to the heavy wind which was flowing outside...but nibir knew the exact reason...nibir kept themselves silent...after sometime the pooja started again...kabir took nisha's palm in his and assured her that everything's alright..
Nisha smiled at his protectiveness...
The pooja was over now...the gangwal family and vasundhara had their lunch and left to their respective houses...vasundhara went with the gangwal family in their car...they dropped her home...viraj and cousins decided to chill with nibir for sometime...viraj didn't wanted to disturb them but was stopped by nibir...as nisha now has started understanding him...and thought of him as her friend...so viraj was also there with the cousins...
(And guyzz as said by someone of the readers...sorry I don't remember the name...I sent bhootnath on a vacation for this part..!!so no bhootnath in this part...it was a result of the pooja)
The cousins, viraj and nibir were playing truth and dare...
(In my story, summit ka the end ho chuka hain...he was thrown out of the gangwal house after his truth was revealed by nibir...dolly and saurav liked each other very much, but hasn't told each other yet..!!)
They spin the bottle..first it stops in front of bunty
Kabir:truth or dare..??
Bunty: truth...!!
Kabir:to ye bata ki kya tune kabhi humse kuch chupaya hain...??
Bunty:hmm...haan...kabir jeeju. ...main sach bataunga...lekin tabhi Jab aap Sab log mujhe aap promise karoge ki aaplog mujhe maaroge nahi..!!
Cousins:Aisa kya chupaya hain tune humse...???chal theek hain him kuch nahi bolenge...pehle tu bta to sahi...!!
Bunty:ek baar na m..Maine gaming parlour m..mein 10000 kharch kiye the...!!
Cousins:k..kya lekin tere paas itne paise aaye kahan se..??
Bunty:tuition ki fees se ...aur Maine papa ko bola tha ki paise kho gaye..!!
Nisha:b..bunty...Ab to tu gya bachle beta...!!
Kabir holded her by her waist so that she won't hit bunty
Kabir:n..nisha shaant hoja...bas bas...chota bacha hain yaar WO...!!Bas Jo hogya WO hogya...!!aur main uski guarantee leta hun ki WO phir aisa kuch nahi karega...!!tu bas shaanti se baith ja..!!
Nisha sat down beside kabir hearing that from him like a kid...
The cousins spinned the bottle once again and this time it stopped before viru
Kabir:to bhai..truth or dare...??
Viru:truth
Kabir:to bhai aisa kuch hain Jo aap whole heartedly yahan kisi se kuch kehna Kehna chahte ho...???
Viru:hAan...miss.nisha se..!!
Kabir:ji bhai boliye...aap kya bolna chahte hain nishu se...??
Viru went near nisha took her hand into his...seeing all this kabir was burning inside whereas nisha was uncomfortable...viru said
Viru:miss. Nisha Hume pata hain ki humne past mein aapke saath bohut ghalat kiya hain...him abhi WO Sab nahi bolna chahte...Him bas aapko sorry bolna chahte hain pure dilse...I am sorry miss.nisha...him bas ye bolna chahte the ki aapko humare saath uncomfortable hone ki koyi zaroorat nahi hain...humne aapko aur aapke kabir ko as a couple accept kar liya hain...aur him aap Dino keliye bohut khush hain...sachmein I promise...he said making a puppy face...
And he laughed out loud...
Lagta hain humne mauhol ko kuch zyaada hi garam kar diya...I sorry for that...aur aaj humara dil halka ho gya...ye Sab bolke..
Everyone present there smiled at his cute talks...
Kabir:achcha chalo chalo ohkkk...Ab game ko aage badhaye...!!!he said with a smile...
Cousins:haan..chalo..
This time the bottle stopped before saurav
Dolly directly asked him before he could say anything
"Saurav tum mujh se bohut dino se kuch bolna chahte the na...kya hain WO...??"
Saurav-h..haan bolna to chahte hun ...tujhe Kaiser pta...!??
Dolly- Teri shakal pe bada bada likha hua hain...!!
Saurav kneeled down before dolly and said
"Dolly main t..tujhse bohut pyaar karta hun...will u marry me...???"
 Dolly didn't reply him...she just made saurav stand up...acted as if she was angry and then hugged him tightly with a bright smile...!!
Haan ,...saurav...haan..!!!said dolly
All the people present there clapped and whistled for them...
They continued the game...
This time the bottle stopped before kabir
Kabir:dare...!!
Cousins:kyun bhai truth se darte ho...???
Kabir:Mera aisa koyi bhi truth nahi hain Jo nishu ko nahi pata...isliye dare...!!
Cousins:ohhhooo...kya baat kya baat...!!!
Nibir blushed
Kabir:to jaldi dare bolo kya hain...??
Cousins:kiss nisha...!!
Nibir were shocked now...!!
Kabir:ohhh ye kya bol rahe ho tum log...tum Sab ke saamne...??
While nisha blushed even more...
Cousins+saurav+viraj-kyun him sabke saamne karne mein sharam aati hain...???
Kabir-mere ko to nahi aati par nisha ko...hmm hmm.!!!
Achcha chalo theek hain...tum Sab apni aankhe band karo...
Cousins achcha ohkk..kabir quickly picked a piece of paper as all of them closed their eyes...he wrote on the paper that
"I and nisha need sometime alone...please aap log bura mat maanna...guest room mein kuch movies ki CDs rakhkhi hain...fridge mein snacks aur juice rakhkha hain...enjoy..store room mein games rakhkhe hain...please Hume maaf kardo...!!! I and nisha really need sometime alone...!!"he wrote that ,kept it on the table...picked nisha in his arms...and went towards their bedroom... He then shouted Ab aap log apni aankhen khol sakte ho...!!aur table pe kuch rakha hain aap logo keliye...please don't mind..!!
The cousins ,viraj and saurav opened their eyes and saw that paper...they smiled seeing that and took some snacks and went towards the guest room and became busy in watching movies...viraj too enjoyed along with them...
Whereas nibir were busy in their romance...they kissed each other passionately... Pouring their all love into it...they became more and more close with each passing second...they came very close that night...they became one...
(Please guyyzz...I can't write more than this... Activate your gutter minds and add whatever you want...jitni badhass nikalni hain nikallo...!!!main bas ye keh sakti hun ki nibir bohut bohut bohut bohut close aagye the...and you know what I mean right...!!??)
Next morning,kabir and nisha were sleeping in each  other's arms peacefully...when suddenly they heard sudden banging on their door...kabir covered nisha with the quilt and quickly wore his jeans and T-shirt...he let nisha sleep as she was very tired after yesterday night...
He went towards the door, opened it and And saw angry cousins+viraj+saurav standing there...he came out of the room and closed the door behind him so that they are not able to see nisha in that condition...!!!
Jwala and bunty were not there..they are kids so I excluded them from this scene..!!
Kabir stood before them with a confused reaction...he was sleepy..
Kabir:kya hua...??itna subah subah Mera door kyun todne mein lage ho...??
Yaar abhi abhi to neend aani shuru hui thi...!!then he just bit his tongue as what he have said just now and that too in front of them...
Cousins,viraj and saurav understood what he was about to say...they diverted the talk...
Saurav:saale tu itni der tak andar kya kar raha tha...time dekha hain tune...??tujhe pata hain him kitni der se darwaza knock kar rahe the...him pareshaan ho bye the yaar...??
Kabir:subah ke 6-7 baje honge aur kya...??
Cousins:kabirrr...neend se baahar aa...time dekh..6-7 nahi dopahar ke 2 baj rahe hain...!!!
Kabir-completely out of sleep...with a shocking reaction...
Kyaaa...???do baj rahe hain...what do you mean...sachchme...???
Viraj: aur kabir aapkeliye call aaya tha humare phone mein...Mumbai school of dance se...kisi competition ke regarding...!!!
Kabirr-kyaa...??call aaya tha...??
He quickly ran inside the room... closed the door...he picked her in his arms and twirled around in the room...
Kabir:nisha main competition keliye select ho gya nisha...uth jaa...!!!
Nisha heard all of his talks and hugged him tight...
Nisha:congratulations kabiree...and placed a kiss on his forehead...
But nisha was weak...she needed something to drink...kabir understood that and quickly ran out of the room to take something for her...but he saw all of them were still standing outside their room...
Kabir:hehe...WO main Zara kuch zyada hi excitement mein aagya tha isliye aide chala gaya main yahan se...
They all understood that nisha had the first right to share happiness with him...
Then the cousins ,saurav and viraj hugged him and congratulated him...
Then suddenly something striked kabir's mind and he started walking downwards toWards the kitchen...
Dolly: aree kabir tu Ab kaha jaa raha hain...???
Kabir:are dolly main nisha keliye fruit juice lene jaa rha hun...?WO bht Thai GI hain na...and kabir bit his tongue again as what he just said was more worser than what he said before...thereafter he said nothing...he his his face and silently walked towards the kitchen...he poured some juice into a glass and literally ran into his room hiding his face...all this while viraj was thinking in his mind that..."pata nahi ye ladka kab sudhrega...??kuch bhi kahi pe bhi bol dete hain...bachcha hain abhi bhi..!!"and viraj smiled...
Kabir went inside the room...made her drink the juice...and picked her up and dropped her inside the washroom...he too was about to go into the washroom but nisha stopped him and closed thape door on his face...kabir used the washroom which was in the guest room as nisha was taking time to come out...they both were thinking about the previous night's moment and were blushing continuously...
They both got ready and went into the living room hand in hand..they both looked sleepy and tired...
They both sat along with the cousins...
They talked for a while...and the competition talk came out...
Viraj:to kabir aap Mumbai kab jaa rahe hain apne competition keliye...??
Kabir:kal subah ...main aur nisha nikal jaayenge...!!
Nisha:nahi kabir...main kyun...??tumhe yaad nahi panditji ne kya kaha tha...??unhone kaha tha ki puja hone ke baad do din tak hum Dino mein se kam se kam kisi ek ko yahan rehna padega...aur waise kabir sirf chaar-paanch din ki hi to baat hain..tum jaake aajao...main yahan safe hun kabir...aur wahan pe bhi tu akela nahi hain...main humesha tere saath hun...
Kabir:Lenin nishu main tujhe yahan akela chodke kaise jaa sakta hun yaar...main nahi jaaunga tujhe akela chodke...!!
Nisha: babuu...baat samajhne ki koshish kar...please ye competition tere liye bahut zaroori hain...aur mere liye bhi...tu bas jaa raha hain to bas jaa raha hain...aur agar tu nahi gaya to main tujhse baat nahi karungi...ye samajhle tu..!!
Kabir:par nisha...
Nisha:chup reh kabir...warna thappad maarungi...aur tu bas jaa raha hain...!!
Kabir once again lost the battle with nisha...
Kabir-achcha baba theek hain...main chala jaaunga...lekin tujhe akele chodke nahi jaaunga...ghar mein full time servant rakhunga ...aur phir jaaunga ...!!
All this while the cousins+saurav+viraj were looking at their cute talks with strange expressions
Saurav:waah yaar...kya understanding hain tum Dino ki...kamaal hain..
Nisha Blushed...
Kabir:oyee tu apne aur dolly ke understanding pe dhyaan de samjha...!!!
Cousins:achcha...ohhkk...Ab tum ladna band karo...bahut time ho gaya hain...ghar se phone bhi aaya tha nikalna padega...abhi him Sab chalte hain...chalo byee...
Nisha:lekin itni jaldi...itne subah subah..
Kabir:in her ears:nisha ye him dono keliye subah hain...inkeliye nahi...tu asli time sunegi to shock ho jaaygii...
Nisha:kabir waise time kitna ho raha hain...???
Kabir:shaam ke chaar baj rahe hain...
Nisha blushed hearing that...and kabir smiled...
The cousins ,saurav and viraj left
Nisha and kabir spent the evening together...
Kabir was to leave next morning...they had their food and cuddled in each others arms that night...as decided they hired a servant...who was an old man around his sixties... He used to be the caretaker of this house before nibir shifted here...
Next morning kabir left for Mumbai...leaving nisha alone in that house...the servant was a full time one...
Kabir reached Mumbai and called nisha and nisha wished him good luck...kabir wasn't able to call nisha for next two days...but he sent messages whenever he was free...the competition was preponed... Kabir was happy as he would be able to meet his nisha the next day...it was the competition... Kabir called nisha before going on stage...but she didn't pick it up...he thought that she was busy ...he promised himself to call her once the competition gets over...kabir finally won the competition... He called nisha but she didn't pick it up...he called nisha 10-15 times...but she didn't..he was worried for her...he immediately booked his tickets and checked out of the hotel...it had been a week since he had talked to nisha...
He landed in Delhi and took a taxi and reached his house...he was shocked to see that it was locked...he called the servant...who lived in the servant quarters...
Kabir:ramu kaka..madam kahan gayi...??
Ramu kaka:sahab ye aap kya bol rahe ho...???mujhe laga ki madam aapke saath gayi hain...
Kabir holding his collar
Ye aap k bol rahe hi...WO mere saath kyun jaaygi...??
Ramu:sahab main jab teen din pehle aaya to Maine doorbell bohut bajaya...to kisine khola nahi...phir agle din gaya to ghar ke bahar lock lava hua tha...!!
Maine aapko bohut call kiya...aapko call gaya hi nahi...!!
Kabir was now tensed ...he was worried like hell...he then saw something which shocked him...the light of their room was blinking...he quickly took the spare key he had with him ...opened the door...and was shocked to see the house is a mess once again...he thought" what if he is back...??"
He ran towards their room...he opened the door...the room was dark..it wasn't blinking anymore...he switched on the light and what he saw shocked him more...nisha was sitting in a corner of the room...with her hands on her head and head on her legs...kabir went near her...he softly said
"Nishaaa...kya hua hain tujhe...tu aise kyun baithi hain...???"
Nisha slowly picked her face up and said
"As gya tu...??"in a manly voice which was not at all her voice...
Nisha's face and body was full of bruises...kabir was shocked at this condition of hers...he went near her and hugged her...nisha ye kya hogaya hain tijhe...??said kabir..
Chod de nisha ko kabir... !!!!said nisha struggling
She said it in a manly voice...
She pushed kabir with a full force... He fell near the door...
Nisha-dekha maine bola tha na ki tu nisha ko nahi bacha paayga...!!
Yes...Mr bhootnath was back...
Kabir-ye Sab tune kiya...???
Mr.bhootnath...hahaha...:le Ab tu thodi der keliye apne nisha ko sambhal...bada chilla rahi thi...kabir kabir...!!!hahaha...
Kabir: saale...main tujhe maardalunga...kya kiya tune nisha ke saath kamine...main tujhe maardaalunga...!!
Mr.bhootnath:tu mujhe kaise maarega...main to Mara hua hun...hahaha...
Saying that he left nisha's body and he fled away...
Nisha fainted saying kabir's name...
Kabir shouted:nishaaa...
He called ramu kaka...
"Ramu kaka jaldi doctor ko bulayiye...jaldi..."
The doctor took 30 minutes to reach there...
All this while kabir was sprinkling water on her face...calling her by her name continuously...nisha gained consciousness...
Nishaa:kabir tu kab aaya...??she said with a lot of difficulty...
Kabir:nisha...nisha tu theek to hain na bachchii..
Nisha:kabir...kabir...WO waapas aagya kabir...usne mujhe bohut maara kabir...USne bola ki WO mujhe tujhse alag kardega...
Saying that she fainted again...
Kabir:nisha...nisha..uth jaa,...
The doctor came there in sometime ...checked nisha
Kabir:doctor kya hua hain meri nisha ko bolo na...???
Doctor:this is high level of irresponsibility mr.kabir...inhone do teen din se kuch khaya nahi hain aur WO bhi iss condition mein...???highly irresponsible mr.kabir Kumar...
Kabir:aap kisi condition ki baat kar rahe ho doctor ...??
Doctor:aapko nahi pata...????WO do teen din pehle aayi thi mere pass...vomiting aur dizziness ka complaint lekar...I checked her and found out that she was pregnant...WO tab to bht khush thi...Ab kya ho gaya...???
Kabir:kya...??meri nisha...

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It is awesome...
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Awesome update...
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It was me who said to send Mr.bhoothnaath on a vacation🤣
Thank you thank you so much...it was lovely...really enjoyed it..Waiting for the revelation of Mr.bhoothnath🤣