Endless love ch3 at 7 16 May - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
hey it's awesome...plzz update soon & if pssbl pm me..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow.. this is great. i love the way he is playing hide and seek with her, the way she keeps looking for him and the way he is showing his care... the last part with the song dedication was so sweet... terrific job!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
ohhh god... its superb...
yaaron dosti bari hi hasin hai...

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Posted: 8 years ago

"Nandini when you know he is around go out once , at least he will go home and sleep " Navya said , Nandini nod and sat , she walked out of her room and  down ,she on tip of her toe walked to the tree

"Navya is not text and Nandini is not coming to window hope she is fine " he was about to hit on the tree trunk she held  his hand 

"Nandini " he murmur and turn back 

"i am fine you go home and sleep " she placed her head on his heart ,he hug her 

"you know i wanted this " he kissed her head they stayed like this for sometime 

"Manik go home and sleep " she said softly gently caress his chest

"Can i call you ?" he asked her she nod and push him to go towards car" no you go inside in front of me"he said. she walked towards door he held her hand and hug are again  "i love you , i want my Nandini back " he said walked with her to the door she closed it and walked upstairs 

" go " she stand next to the window and ask him he nod and drives away

"Nandini Manik loves you a lot , yesterday he was out of his mind when we were not able to find you , he cried for you in front of us all " she said " please smile for him as he is hurting himself for the incident " Navya said , Nandini lied down and turn other side  dialed his number 

" Nandini are you fine ?" he panic

" i am sleepy so i called you " she whispered " can you sing me to sleep please ?" she said 

"sure let me park the car " he said as he reached home 

" you take your time i am waiting " she said politely 

'Nandini whom you are talking ?" Navya lean over her and check her 

" i am talking to Aiyaapa " she said , Manik smiled on other end , he quickly went to freshen up 

"hello " after 5 mins he whispered 

"mmm" she said in sleepy voice

" sorry i guess i took time " he was embarrassed 

"its okay now sleep " she said 

"ok i will hang up "he said

" no l am feeling you as if you are next to me" she murmur , he smiled 

"Nandini whom you are talking with ?" Navya asked her again 

"no one " she said and hide her cell 

Manik smiled on other end "she is right i am too feeling her " he could hear her breath ,he could imagine she was sound a sleep ,he too slept 


Next morning she got ready like before " i want him to smile , i will hide my pain " she opened her hairs and wore earrings she look herself in mirror , "he will sure smile" she walked out of the room 


At space 

"Manik why you called us all so early ?" Cabir rub his eyes and said 

" i need fab 4 help to get back Nandini smile " he said helplessly "will you guys help me ?" he requested 

"come on Manik you are asking us " Mukti said and hit him " you order us " she said 

" i need a group hug gives as i am losing my strength " he said they all hug him 

" why you are saying like that ? i am sure she will be like before , only give her time " Mukti said 

" tell us how you want us to help you ?" Cabir asked 

"Can we sing for her " he said an look here and there 

" why not ?" Cabir with eyes asked everyone to say yes 

"Manik we can sing Fab 5 song for her , this will make her feel more special " Dhruv said and pat his back he hug him 



Nandini walked in Space she heard girls running towards the open air stage Fab 5 is singing

"they all are in college " she walked ahead she finds all of them on the stage 

Koi to ho raazadaar "Dhruv smiled and sang "
begaraz tera ho yaar " Cabir jump down stage and come close to her singing"
koi to ho raazadaar "Dhruv smiled and sang "

Tan mann kar tujhpe fida " Cabir sang "

Mehboob woh  " they look at Manik "

Palkon pe jo rakhe tujhe  "Manik came closed and hold her hand and pull her on the stage "

Mehboob woh  " Mukti and Aliya smiled at her and push her towards Manik she bump in him he held her next to him

Jiski wafa tere liye ho  " he sang to her "


"they sang their song for me " Nandini was surprised at their gesture ,her eyes become watery

"how was the surprise ?" Cabir asked her , she  hide her tears and smile 

"your smile is my strength Nandini " he said to himself , he look back and wipe his tear

" we fab 5 not easily let others come close to us " Mukti said " you have conquered our hearts " Mukti said and passed her a friendship band 

"for me " Nandini asked she smile

"yes we all have one for you " they all took out one 

"Manik where is your?"  Cabir asked him she look at him he was mesmerizing  her

" he has already given me this " she forward her  wrist  in front of them to tie it 

" we will be with you in pain happiness sorrow and joy " they all said together as they tied 

" thek hai thek hai only for Nandini humara liya kuch bhi nahi " Navya hide her tears and said 

"oh meri Madhubala ka leya kuch bhi nahi " Cabir said 

" i have for her too " Manik asked her to forward her hand " always be with you to protect you and your child from this evil world " he said and tied ,he without letting her noticed passed everyone their bands  as he didn't want to make her feel alone 


i guess i should  end here 

Edited by naddiya26 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
As per usual amazing work
Looovveddd it sooo much
Really Hpe something like this happens in the show as well
Waiting to read mre <3
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Posted: 8 years ago
This is so sweet... loved how you included the upcoming scenes pix and that they all sang their song for her, the bands, the mention that he already gave her something, her untying her hair... i'll just go on and on... in short: great job. Really great!
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome so sweet really wish to see this in the show
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful chapter 
Nandu telling Navya that she is talking to ayyappa! 

That's cute
Song and the bands gave a new positive vibe 
which was much  needed for nandu

Manik arranged bands for Navya was like a wow moment 

It proved yet again ki he is Nandini's manik not monster manik

Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
i love ur writing...
every word z reach to my heart ...u wrote beautifully...
i hope thz hpn in Ky2..
pl cont...