Bade Acche Laggte Hai

New SS Love & Destiny part6 6/9/2015 page 12 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
Plzzz continue soon...waiting for the flashback and rams realization
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 1 
So story In both's pov 
Good attempt...
Ram here in India and Priya in sydney...
Story ll continue with flashback scene...
I like starting its freash and different story...
Do pm me next time
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 2
Superbb update so esha is kabab me haddi
And loved the way u penned Ram and esha scene 
I can imagine that scene...
Dono ki shadi na huyi hai naa hogi lol
Waiting for nxt one Do Pm me next time or give on 
Ping on Whatsapp grp
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank u soo much guys for liking it and commenting it!!
Pakka aaj raat tak 3rd part update kardugi!!!
I have read all the comments but sorry I couldn't individual ko reply nahi karpai uss ke liye sorry !!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
There is the 3rd part!!
I'm not a experienced writer..so plz mujse gramer or spelling mistake hojaye to maaf kardena !!



Priya: Aaj mera college main pehla din hai... Main bohot nervous hu! pata nahi aja kya hoga!!
Neha: chill yaar tu kyu itna tension lerahi hai!! sab kuch accha hoga!! Ab chale late haraha hai!!

In college

Ram, Vikram, Rajat, Esha sab canteen mai neha ka intezaar kar rahe the!!
Vikram: arra yeh neha kaha reh gae abhu tak kyu nahi aae (vikram was thinking)
Ram was busy flirting with esha and rajat was engross in reading a book!
Neha and Priya comes to the canteen and wish all good morning!!
Neha: hey guys this is my cousin priya kal hi aai hai London se!
Priya: hi ( she shakes hands with all, but when she touches ram's hand she felt the spark)
All were friendly with priya and the day past very well.
Rajat was very attracted towards priya and he was with priya full time as neha was with vikram and ram & esha were busy in their own world.
Happily the day ended!!!

In Neha's house

Neha: aaj kesa laga college main?
Priya: bohot accha laga. Tere dost bohot acche hai...
Neha: Achha ek baat bata tumne ram ko pehechana?
Priya: kya matlab?
Neha: oh hoo ram o he larka hai jo hamare neighbour main rehe ta tha!! tu our woh ek hi to school main parte the!!
Priya: kya??
Neha: Ha woh Krishna aunty our Amar uncle ka beta hai!
(suddenly priya realises that ram is the same boy she has crush for so long time but when she wanted to confess her feelings she came to know that his whole family migrated to Mumbai... And she was left alone !! so she also went to London to complete her studies!)
Neha: priya kaha kho gai???
Priya: kuch nahi!!. Mai abhi atti hu!
(saying this much she ran to her room... The thought that ram is the same boy she loved was too much to handle for priya!!)
POV of Priya
(Omg yeh kya tha i mean kya sach mai ram woh he hai...
God i cant think straight... Main aaj use mili !!! jab aaj maine ram ko dekha to mujhe laga toh tha ki main use janti hu par yeh pata nahi tha ki woh... Wohi hai!! god yeesha lagraha hai ki main koki sapna dekh rahi huu!!!!
I' m too excited ab main apne pyaar se mil sakti hu use baat karsakti hu!!!
I Love U... Love u Ram!!!)
Thinking about ram she slept!!


Next morning priya too soo excited to go college so that she can meet ram!!
Priya: NEHA!!! NEHA!!! yaar tum abhi tak so rahi hoo college nahi jana kya utho naaa!!!
Neha: priya sone de na our wase bhi aaj sunday hai aaj to chutti hai yar tu bhi naa!! ja abb sone de muje!!
Priya was soo excited to meet ram that she forgot. Today was sunday!! and she has to wait one more day to meet her love!!!
Whole day priya was too sad and neha asked her to come for shopping but priya ka kisi bhi chese main mann nahi lag raha tha!! All day she was in her bed !!!

Next morning priya woke up with a smile whit the hope that she will meet ram!!
As soon as she reach college she started to search ram but she could not find him she meet with rajat, vikram but ram was no where!! she was growing soo impatient so she ask rajath about ram!
Priya: hi rajat
Rajat: Hi priya!! kasi hoo!(he was looking at priya as if he had never seen a girl before)
Priya: main theek hu .. (priya was thinking how ti ask about ram, because for them she has just meet ram the day before and she was thinking what will they think if she ask about him directly!!!
Aftet thinking for a while she notice that esha was also not present today so she ask about her first!!)
Priya: Neha aaj tumhari dost esha nahi aie college ???
Neha:(who was busy reading a book answered) nahi!
(Priya wanted to ask more but the bell rang and they had to go to attend the class!! as priya joined the college in middle of the year so she had a lot assignment to do... So she forget about all and went home and was so busy in her studies!! Days went soo fast that she didn't had time to think about any thing not even ram!!
Friday morning when she went college she suddenly remember that she has not seen ram for 5 day... He didn't came to college ... Now she was Worried if some thing bad happened to him!!
She quickly went to canteen where Vikram, Rajat & Neha were there!!
Priya: hi guys!!
All: hi!!
Priya: rajat ram itne dino se dekhai nahi diya woh theek toh hai na?? (priya was soo worried that she didnt even realise what she was speaking!! when all three. Of them were staring at her she realised what she said and tried to cover it!)
Priya: woh mai toh aasehi pooch rahi thi .. Woh. Mera class ki larkiya baat kar rahi thii toh maine socha ki tum logon ko pata ho...
Aur woh Esha... esha bhi nahi dekhi mujhe!!!
Neha: Priya dont worry about them yeh dono yeseh hi hain !!
Priya: matlab???
Rajat:Matlab ki love birds phirse kahi mini holiday par necal gayen hogen!!
Priya: love birds???
Rajat: haaa!! yeh dono ki love story ma mai college famous hai!!

(Priya was too shocked to react! Use doubt toh tha but she couldn't accept the fact that ram esha se pyaar kata hai!!! uski love story suru hone se phehele hi end hogaye!!)

Rajat: Priya chalo hum next class ke liye late hogayen gay chalo!!
Priya : tum jayo main ghar ja rahi hu !! plz Neha ko batadena !!
Rajat : kyu ?? kya huwa???
Priya: kuch nahi!!! baas headache horaha hai!!!
Rajat: ohh!!! chalo main tume drop karde ta hu!!
Priya: No... No u continue!! i will manage!!!



Waiting 4 comments and likes!!
I know guys abhi tak ram our Priya ki bat tak nai hui but trust me their technically first meeting will be special!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey very good update...πŸ‘
ram n esha r couple...😑 cant bear this... πŸ˜†
aur woh rajat priya pe fida hogaya..πŸ˜†
priya sat ko colg join hui kya?πŸ˜†
woohoo priya bachpan se ram ko like karti hai... sounds interesting..
poor priya she came to know abt ram n esha...
continue soon..
waiting eagerly..πŸ˜›

Edited by jodude - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Originally posted by: jodude

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">hey very good update...πŸ‘</font>

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">ram n esha r couple...😑cant bear this...πŸ˜†</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">aur woh rajat priya pe fida hogaya..πŸ˜†</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">priya sat ko colg join hui kya?πŸ˜†</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">woohoo priya bachpan se ram ko like karti hai... sounds interesting..</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">poor priya she came to know abt ram n esha...</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">continue soon..</font>
<font size="3" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#003399">waiting eagerly..πŸ˜›</font>




Thanks 4 the comment
Haha while writing it I didn't notice it😊
Kitne detail se par te ho πŸ˜‰ next update se main bhi sab
Details pe dhyan du gi!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update...waiting 4 ram- priya scenes...
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Posted: 8 years ago
super part yar...esha ko pehle RaYa ke beech se hatado pls...continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely part waiting for Raya 1st meeting