Fan Fictions

India-Forums

   
Fan Fictions
Fan Fictions

#3ArHi Intense SS: Kaash mai tumse...*Thread 4 PG-151*[Completed] (Page 36)

madgirl84 Senior Member
madgirl84
madgirl84

Joined: 17 November 2014
Posts: 374

Posted: 02 June 2015 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
SmileAwesome

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

-Roshini- IF-Sizzlerz
-Roshini-
-Roshini-

Joined: 21 July 2012
Posts: 19308

Posted: 02 June 2015 at 11:10pm | IP Logged
OK dear
Take care

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

renee.bee IF-Dazzler
renee.bee
renee.bee

Joined: 14 November 2012
Posts: 3350

Posted: 03 June 2015 at 4:50am | IP Logged
Thanks for the note .
Will wait Smile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

swtsam IF-Dazzler
swtsam
swtsam

Joined: 01 May 2011
Posts: 4031

Posted: 03 June 2015 at 5:55am | IP Logged
awesome. ..loved it...n eagerly waiting for the next. ..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

Arshi.Sugi.IPK IF-Stunnerz
Arshi.Sugi.IPK
Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Joined: 17 January 2012
Posts: 37386

Posted: 03 June 2015 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Chap 20, 21 - Superb updates ohh no Khushi is kidnapped :(

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

coolpd93 IF-Dazzler
coolpd93
coolpd93

Joined: 23 May 2013
Posts: 2622

Posted: 03 June 2015 at 9:52am | IP Logged
I dunno what made u go in d middle of update...whateva it is..take care...solve and comeback afresh:)

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

hiraah Groupbie
hiraah
hiraah

Joined: 04 October 2014
Posts: 159

Posted: 04 June 2015 at 3:38am | IP Logged
Awesome!!! 
Omg! I just spent the past 2 days catching up on all the chapters that I missed out on and I am in love!!

First of all let's talk about the cliffhanger cause I LOVED it! Such an awesome one. You not only left us hanging but you left us hanging right after revealing a big secretClapClapClap 
I always tell my friend that a good cliffhanger is like a roller-coaster.  It leaves you wondering what the hell just happened,  but also leaves you craving another ride. So we'll done. 

And now the story, since I had so much to catch up on I truly don't know where to start and what to comment on but im just going to pick a few things..

Arnav finding out he is going to be a papa Heart
This scene was really good cause I have been waiting for ages for him to find out.. of course if khushi had told him it would have been a more happy "aww" scene but as this is an 'intense' story I feel the way he found out was very fitting. The gussa,  pyaar and happiness that the scene portrayed was beautiful

Arnav's attempts at making amends. Day Dreaming
It was super sweet how arnav carried Khushi up and down the stairs,  fed her, showered her with love, care and concern.. this was so amazing.. how can a girl not crave for 'Arnav' when this is the picture that's painted of him??)

The scene when khushi kissed Arnav Embarrassed
Ooh la la! This was some hotwa scene and I must say It was simply 'ooff!' The intensity, passion and after that the comedy that came with it was phenomenol!
Arnav teased khushi, Khushi had her pregnancy mood swingsLOL 
This was simply PERFECTION! Star

I'm so glad Anjali saved khushi like that. It's better Anjali take her out of the mess before she hurts herself and the baby or runs away where no one knows where she has gone.

This chachu is so annoying! I hope there is a happy ending cause I can't stand sad endings Cry
So this chachu is doing all this bakwas for revenge?! Angry

Then again if you think about it, if khushi had gone home without all this drama then she would have remained cold towards Arnav,  but because this chachu has done all this kidnapping and stuff,  when the 2 of them unite they will both understand and acknowledge each others importance and need for one another Big smile
So I think I see what you are trying to do 
*cross fingers and prays we are thinking the same way* 
whatever it is just please please please let it be a happy ending Smile

I have so much more to say but I better leave before I dominate your thread with my long comment.. 

Please include Me in your PM list :D

With love, 
Hiraah

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

koyalpariHina69

nitrit95 Goldie
nitrit95
nitrit95

Joined: 19 September 2012
Posts: 1746

Posted: 04 June 2015 at 9:40am | IP Logged
take care i will wait impatiently sorry patiently ps sometimes ifeel tthat you stole guls orginal script of ipknd bec your version is what ispknd should have been bohot confusion hai wonder y gul changed the script n butchered the characters anyway love your version but u know that right

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

Hina69

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Author Replies Views Last Post
Arshi FF - Mine Forever Thread 5.UPD New thread [29/10]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 121 122

Author: angeldream14   Replies: 968   Views: 107526

angeldream14 968 107526 28 November 2017 at 2:09pm by MerDyux
ArHi SS: Dillagi - Thread 2 - (Chapter 10-13) [Thread 3-Page 1/173]

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

Author: Hina69   Replies: 1197   Views: 77322

Hina69 1197 77322 15 March 2017 at 1:28pm by cappacuino5
Arhi os:HILARIOUS CONVO BETWEEN ARHI.

2 3 4 5 6 7 8

Author: Hina69   Replies: 58   Views: 64836

Hina69 58 64836 11 September 2016 at 8:28am by TANVI_SEXY
Arhi os:Khushi's chalenge to Arnav for arhi sangeet

2 3 4 5 6 7

Author: Hina69   Replies: 55   Views: 56053

Hina69 55 56053 30 August 2016 at 5:27am by Jinitha55
Whisper Arhi SS Last Part Arhi

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 22 23

Author: jasminerahul   Replies: 181   Views: 163457

jasminerahul 181 163457 26 January 2012 at 3:08am by meluhan

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category / Channels
Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.

Popular Channels :
Star Plus | Zee TV | Sony TV | Colors TV | SAB TV | Life OK

Quick Links :
Top 100 TV Celebrities | Top 100 Bollywood Celebs | About Us | Contact Us | Advertise | Forum Index