Ky2 Emotional Encounter 15: The Eternal Sunset of the Spotless Mind

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

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Posted: 8 years ago

The beauty... Who defeated her very own nemesis...

Her monster... Her dark prince...

With her light...

With her rules of understanding...

With her search for goodness in everything...

With her hopes...

Or with her ignorance to the possible massiveness of darkness...

Or with too much expectation for goodness..

That forever kept her mind spotless

She went against her monster who is more acquainted with evil...

She neglected his foresight against evil in beauty...

She went for the face value...

She trusted the wrong person...

Because her mind was spotless...

Her conscience always raised voice against wrongs she saw... Supported the victim...

But she was immune to suspecting someone who she thought respectful...

Her spotless mind betrayed her...

She became victim herself...

She faced the evil...She faced physical abuse...

She was locked in case where there was no light ...

She was shaken by the massiveness of darkness..

It happened...

The eternal sunset of the spotless mind...

The belief in her mind to goodness altered...

She now hates herself... for own nativity...

She hates herself for taking her monster's advice for granted...

She always thought his believes to be derived from

his negativeness ... or his over-protectiveness ... or his positiveness...

She hates herself for not trusting his words...

Now it will be hard for her mind...

To see the goodness again..

To cherish light again...

To cherish smile again...

She will now try to look for evil behind beautiful faces...

In so small phase of life she faced so many evils...

She lost her hopes...

She lost her self...

She can't find her inner beauty anymore...

And her monster...

Seeing his star to diminish gradually...

The one who set out him to the way of light...

is now in darkness...

She now fears darkness... as he did...

The beauty.. who has his coconut heart is hardening own heart...

Against goodness... against trust... against love...

She is pushing him away...

They are again back to the position of conflict...

But he will accompany her to her journey back to light...

He will be her light now...

They will survive these... Her anger... her despise... Her fear of darkness...

They will find the beauty of their togetherness against all odds...

Now it's a test for their love..

The love that has no confusion...

The test of after confession...

The test that will keep coming...

Forever... Hameshaa...

We hope for the eternal sunshine of the spotless mind

We hope for the recovery light...

As true love makes firefly glow...

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For the Record: Based on Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan, aired on May 12, 2015

Edited by MaNanmatic_Sana - 8 years ago

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@..Mellifluous..

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Posted: 8 years ago

FLAWLESS !!! The only word that came to my mind..

It's so beautiful..impeccable..

exactly describing the condition...

depicting her sorrow, and everything..

U penned it flawlessly..

Awesome,amazing...

Loved it..

they depict Nandini so well..So well means so well...

I just loved all the lines...they were so perfect...

Love,

Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you..

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Aasha

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Posted: 8 years ago

Wow Its just awesome...!!! 😭🤗

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AAVANI

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Posted: 8 years ago

beautiful and emotional ...perfect for the current situation...loved it a lot sana 🤗

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8629

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Posted: 8 years ago

Beautiful Beautiful poem...

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

It is beautiful

Thanks for d pm

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 8 years ago

its tremendous sana 🤗...perfect for the present situation...
every line of it was awesome...just loved it...
u described the each n every feeling of nandu very beautifully...
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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

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Posted: 8 years ago

reading...

read it...

sana i fell in love with your title...

its so apt and justified with meaning very deep...7 words...just 7...

n it defined the condition of nanadini...of how she was n what has she become...

she is standing on a brink of becoming a lost soul...

when you expect in too much goodness,

your belief somewhat starts to become a phantasm,

as reality it seems has too much evil around,

for corrupting a pure soul,

Losing yourself...sometimes thats what comes,

when you face the monstrousity,

The belief gets broken,

and it hardens your goodness of soul,

it thinks...if i would have let the darkness seep in,

sometimes...

then...this sudden one wouldnt have left me LOST...

so was I wrong to believe in the goodness,

was I too naive for this world,

should I have been more like my monster,

can I now say to him...to have hope n everything will eventually work out,

can I...should I...

MAYBE I SHOULD JUST TRUST OUR LOVE..

but again...can i now do that too..

it seems my rational thinking is not there..

to guide me...

my conscience is mocking me...

time...maybe its the only thing left for me...

n perhaps that can help me in surviving...perhaps...

but now can i ever trust my judgement..my instinct...

last time i did..

it left me scarred and broken...

now i have a test infront of me...

and thats for my survival...

Edited by aairahahmad - 8 years ago

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aairahahmad

@aairahahmad

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

i wrote this when manik said - together we will survive this...
pasted somewhere else too..

seems like this is the best i can do with my words😆

pasting here...

Our love is our epitome of survival...
It soothes our nerves,
It calms our mind,
It heals our scars,
It lighten the darkness,
It inculcates the hope,
It makes the ache go away,
Together we will survive this...

Our love is Our Promise...
A promise of Togetherness,
A promise of completion,
A promise of being there for each other always,
A promise of finding happiness midst sadness,
A promise of survival from the tremors of evil,
A promise of Forever ever after,
Together we will survive this...

Our love is our Salvation...
Salvation from fear,
Salvation from demons,
Salvation from this evil world,
Salvation from every abomination,
Salvation from being adrift,
Salvation from losing ourself,
Together we will survive this...

Because whenever we will fall,
Our love will pick us up,
It will give us the fervour to fight the hurdles,
So that we can rise as Phoenix...
As Without you, I would a "No One" be,
For I am You , and You are Me...

Edited by aairahahmad - 8 years ago

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Sana

@MaNanmatic_Sana

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Posted: 8 years ago

This content was originally posted by: aairahahmad
reading...
read it...

sana i fell in love with your title...
its so apt and justified with meaning very deep...7 words...just 7...
n it defined the condition of nanadini...of how she was n what has she become...

she is standing on a brink of becoming a lost soul...

when you expect in too much goodness,
your belief somewhat starts to become a phantasm,
as reality it seems has too much evil around,
for corrupting a pure soul,
Losing yourself...sometimes thats what comes,
when you face the monstrousity,
The belief gets broken,
and it hardens your goodness of soul,
it thinks...if i would have let the darkness seep in,
sometimes...
then...this sudden one wouldnt have left me LOST...
so was I wrong to believe in the goodness,
was I too naive for this world,
should I have been more like my monster,
can I now say to him...to have hope n everything will eventually work out,
can I...should I...

MAYBE I SHOULD JUST TRUST OUR LOVE..
but again...can i now do that too..
it seems my rational thinking is not there..
to guide me...
my conscience is mocking me...
time...maybe its the only thing left for me...
n perhaps that can help me in surviving...perhaps...
but now can i ever trust my judgement..my instinct...
last time i did..
it left me scarred and broken...
now i have a test infront of me...
and thats for my survival...

hmm... confused soul she is...

I am seeing one right now myself😉

check my next comment about the title

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