# MY WORLD'S KING # MaNan FF (UPDATED PART 23) Pg131 29/8 - Page 95

crazydreamer

@crazydreamer

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing
Wonderful
Awesome
update soon
ty for pm tc

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1047721

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

awww...such a lovely..cute update...u penned it soi beautifully...i have no words...
m totally speechless...its jus wow..
n tnqu soo much for such a breath taking update...as always manan scene is pure bliss...
m torally un love with ur ff...the way u write is jus mindblowing...hats off 2 u
plss update soon...cant wait more
desperately waing for next update...
ur such an ammazing writer...keep it up
i really upset with ky2 ending drama...as its only the way to cherish our MANAN...now m soo happy...u
n once again tnqu sooo much fir such wonderful update
keep writing
LOTS OF LOVE...TC

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

Very beautiful update
Now manik is totally changed
Too good update

Continue soon

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Somya

@Manan_obsession

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Ahaaa,..nice one..😉

The secrets out...lyk srsly fascinating...hee...too cuutee😳😳

Respect increased srsly😊

Lovely one

Always keep writing😊

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Ragingleo

@Ragingleo

Senior Member

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Posted: 8 years ago

Aree arre... Kya socha tha Aur kya ho Gaya...

But thank God ki nahi hua..

How innocent one can be... Just the mere thought of doing that with her , made him leave everything in middle and come back to her.. so adorable... Really..

He actually respects her a lot , and of course what else a girl can demand for..

This story is soo sweet... So pure... Really..

Ab kya karega that silly fellow.. shree ke saath.. bless that girl..

It was nice one.. update soon..

Love..

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neeharika__

@neeharika__

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

loved the update

plzz continue soon

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Neha

@neha0002

Senior Member

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely update and thank God it was just his dream

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Goldie

Posted: 8 years ago

thanq

for such a lovely update

pehle ithni badi suspence de dii aur humara aadha death tho kardiyaa

and finally it came out as he was fascinating her

thank god nothing went wrong you don't know I was really worried ...

he came running to her said sorry

then finally found peace

manik s reaction after seeing his own poster in her room wow

when haw her lipsick marks on his poster

he getting irritated by his own song super awsom

so finally now what our manik is gonna do to make nandu shift to his place

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Arunima

@jesse93

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

Lovely update dear,
continue soon.

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pinky

@kimnana

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

wow amazing dear ... I want morning and noon and nightfall with you. I want your tears, your smiles, your kisses...the smell of your hair, the taste of your skin, the touch of your breath on my face. I want to see you in the final hour of my life...to lie in your arms ...

how he will handle shreya ...n manan together in studio👏

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